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Oct 28, 2022 4:27 PM
#1

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Some art panels definitely gave me some Danganronpa vibes. Some of the designs are a bit much but they could grow on me. However, the one shot really lacked a big "hook" to make me crave a full series, y'know?
Nov 1, 2022 7:43 AM
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Nice one shot but unfortunately I don't see anything original about it that would have the potential for a full series. The graphic resistance also evokes mixed feelings, sometimes full panels look great and sometimes chaotic and ugly.
Apr 15, 2023 4:25 AM
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The art is what initially grabbed me and made me want to check out this one-shot, it has great character designs!
But as others have already said in this thread, it lacks originality when it comes to the story/plot, and is filled with random moments of exposition dumps that didn't feel like the flow of a natural conversation, and it had other pacing issues and things. 
I'm sure this story could be a lot more fleshed out with a proper weekly serialization, but idk if it has anything that would hook readers enough to read it weekly, aside from the art and character designs.
Regardless, looking forward to whatever comes next from this manga artist! 
art by @u_zuta on twitter

Apr 18, 2023 11:32 AM
#4
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The art and draw is very nice, the plot is weak!!!
Also, revelad the true identity of the "boy" in the "first" chapter, is no good!!!

Well, it´s a one shot, can be demodulate or something, but the plot need to change!!!



6/10
Oct 5, 2024 5:07 PM
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Cool one-shot. It could spark a potential series if it used more of something. It lacked of something though.
It’s time to ditch the text file.
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