| I wrote one yesterday just because the grammar hurt my eyes, mods didn't accept so far |
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| yes, this is awful wow. "Source: MAL News". Like what, is this directly taken from the News? I swear MAL writes better than that. |
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| My eyes are bleeding & it won't stop |
richovic said: Seriously, the synopsis hurts my eyes. The grammar is really bad. It looks like it’s taken directly from google translate. Someone had a stroke writing it |
"Whether doing good or evil, I will be the boss." |
| agree changing the synopsis. only the last sentence make abit sense. |
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| Personally it makes a lot of sense, punctual and to the point. They should not change it, grammar is fairly done well too, yes. |
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| meh the Sirens once they strike back will make the Red Axis and Azur Lane team up again anyway and that is how predictable this story is, they can just add some sentences regarding the Red Axis and it will be better already |
| Me three. It already failed hard when it can't spell the main title right. Azure Lane? Really? |
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| Hmm... I agree. This is on my high priority list and I will try to write it immediately. I'll make sure not to flop the synopsis. |
cythraul said: akagi and kaga aren't sirens though???I don't see anything 'grotesque' about sirens, they are just lovely lesbian ships (akagi and kaga I mean) |
| How is the synopsis now? |
GhidorahxZGojira said: AlexPaulLEWZ said: How is the synopsis now? Way better than before but bruh, only Laffey is from the Eagle Union, and Javelin and Unicorn is from Royal Navy.. Now I wish Kissanime and other sites would do the same lol Nah. It's okay whether you interpret it as countries or factions, haha. The country would be Eagle (US), Royal (England), and you get the point, haha. The small letter "u" in union would suggest Azur Lane, right? Hahaha |
AlexPaulLEWZ said: As for Kissanime and other sites, they would most likely just copy-paste the synopsis, then remove the [Written by MAL Rewrite] tag. GhidorahxZGojira said: Way better than before but bruh, only Laffey is from the Eagle Union, and Javelin and Unicorn is from Royal Navy.. Now I wish Kissanime and other sites would do the same lol Nah. It's okay whether you interpret it as countries or factions, haha. The country would be Eagle (US), Royal (England), and you get the point, haha. The small letter "u" in union would suggest Azur Lane, right? Hahaha I mean, those synopses aren't copyrighted, so they won't get sued. But, you know, the feeling of not crediting the team who made it. :sob: |
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