| [b]Chapter 14 - Nelly, the Wurm ”So you want to recruit me? Aren't you a pervy one?~” “Sh-Shut up and let's get to it!” ”Looks like someone's a little impatient. Don't you want us to introduce ourselves first?” “Fine...I'm Dio...I'm 15...and after I recruit you I plan on taking down the Lord of this region and make it mine” ”What a funny boy you are” *giggle* “I'm Nelly. I'm of the Wurm species and I'm hoping you can complete the challenge...it's been itching down there so bad lately~” Her face was red as she said those words and I obviously had to blush. She sounded like she was really in need of sex and she didn't even hide that fact. “Just tell me the challenge already...” ”It's very simple. See this tail of mine? I'll wrap it around your body and crush you harder with every second. If you manage to escape, you win. If I crush you to death before you can escape, I win.” What did I get myself into this time...? I put down my bags and my map before I stretched a bit. “I'm ready...let's get to it” ”I really like you, so I'm hoping you can escape. Sadly, I can't go easy on you~” “Hai Hai...just get it over with already” I honestly was scared, but I couldn't turn back now. She slowly wrapped her tail all around my body. Come on Dio...you learned how to escape these... I took a deep breath and she tightened her grip around me. ”Good luck” I can't exhale...if there's one thing I know it's that a snake's grip tightens when you exhale...so I have to hold my breath as much as possible... I started twisting my body around, seeing if I could get my right arm out of her grip, that's all I needed, but even without me exhaling her grip tightened around me, I guess that showed the human intelligence she possessed. I had only moved my arm halfway what I needed before I couldn't move anymore. I also knew that it was to soon to transform. The transformation would run out before I was done. My vision started getting blurry and I was looking around for any kind of way to escape. Anything would do. I just wanted to get out. ”Come on...don't die on me this easily...I thought you were better than this...” *sigh* ”Guess I got my hopes up for nothing...” Her words didn't even reach my ears. I was in so much pain I didn't hear anything. I was screaming and I could feel my bones getting close to breaking. My vision was getting weaker. I couldn't only see what was right in front of me, but that's when I suddenly realized that what I needed had been in front of me all along. Her tail. The tip of her tail. That was my chance. I opened my mouth wide and bit it as hard as I could. From her mouth escaped a scream of pain and her tail loosened for only a second. I used that second to slip my arm outside. ”Damn yo-” “I win!” I raised my arm and my fist covered itself in scales. With it my sword appeared and I immediately pointed it at her neck. Her eyes were frozen in fear and her tail unwrapped itself from around me. As soon as it did I undid my transformation and sat down, panting heavily. The only thing I enjoyed that day was finding out that I did not need to concentrate to much to transform anymore. It felt natural now. ”You...really do keep surprising me...” “I guess I do” ”You won...but before we move on...can I ask you a favor?...” “Huh?” ”I've been in this cave ever since this game started and...I'd like to see the forest before I get sent to war...” I smiled and took both my bags and the map. “Of course we can!” I extended my arm to her as my smile grew larger. “Let's go explore a bit, Nelly” She smiled at me and small tears of happiness could be seen in her eyes as she wrapped her arm around mine. I immediately headed into the region town with her. When we got there she smiled every second and I was quite happy to see her that way. I didn't show her the black market since it would obviously sadden her, but she enjoyed the peaceful part quite a lot. One thing I noticed was that she didn't let go of my arm for even a second and as soon as the sun had set she pulled me into the woods with her. “What's the matter?” ”You can recruit me now...I've had fun...thank you...” “I'm glad I could help...let me get the things ready...” From the tent bag I took out the sleeping bag which was probably big enough for three people. I didn't think having sex in it with her body would be comfortable for her, so I'd just use it to lie on top of it. After I did so I undressed and looked at her as I blushed. “Need me to...tell you what to do?” She looked quite embarrassed after seeing me naked and nodded without saying a word. “Come here...” She slowly crawled towards me and as soon as she was close enough I pulled her into my arms and deposited a long kiss on her lips. She blushed for a while, but then she closed her eyes and kissed me back. As we kissed I slid my hand to her right breast and slowly groped it. She moaned softly into the kiss before I broke it. ”That was my first kiss and I...I loved it...so let me reward you” Before I could even say a word she crawled to my lower body and grabbed onto my long awaiting cock. ”It's already this hard...it looks so cute~” She leaned down her head on it and slowly started sucking on my balls as she stroked it. As she did she never once broke eye-contact. She started licking on my cock's length and I could hear small panting sounds escape my lips. The way she used her tongue was like nothing I had ever seen and I loved it. She slowly started sucking on the tip and bobbing her head carefully, taking my cock deeper and deeper into her mouth as her tongue wrapped itself around it. After a while she slowly took of the scales on the sides of her upper body, revealing her bare breasts to me. She slowly wrapped her breasts around my cock and stroked it with them as she kept sucking on the tip of my cock, pushing her tongue against the small hole. After a while she stopped and I looked at her with a wondering expression. Her face was covered in a bright red blush as she slowly removed her panties and revealed her soaked private parts to me. ”I can't...wait any longer...” She slowly crawled on my lap and slid my cock inside her as she let out a moan which showed signs of both pain, but mainly pleasure. Her tail was lying on the sleeping bag and she slowly started bobbing her hips. She looked like she was enjoying herself, but I was that she was exhausted already, so after a bit of struggle I somehow found myself on top of her, looking her in the eyes. ”I'm glad I get to do it with someone like you” “Me too...Nelly” I gave her a loving kiss as I slowly started thrusting. Her tail suddenly wrapped itself around me, but the grip was not tight at all. ”Like this...it'll feel like we're a real couple...” I blushed a bit as I started thrusting both faster and deeper. The moans escaping her lips kept growing louder and more erotic with every thrust. I gently bit her neck and pinched her nipples to make the experience as pleasurable as possible for her and soon found myself releasing a huge load inside of her. “Did you enjo-” She suddenly hugged me crushing tight, pressing my face against her breasts as she sighed in pleasure. ”I think I came like...5 times...” I felt my face go completely red in less than a second once I heard her words. “I'm glad you liked it” ”Hey Dio...can we sleep in the sleeping bag...please...” I smiled at her as I slowly pulled out my cock and crawled into the sleeping bag. She soon followed and lied down next to me, her tail mostly lying in the spare space, but partially on my legs and her right arm wrapped around my chest. I looked over at her and she smiled at me. “Are you comfy?” She suddenly kissed me and scooted as close as possible as she nodded. ”Mhmm...I love you...” I blushed even more and wrapped one arm around her waist to hold her close. “I love you too...sleep tight...” She smiled happily and the two of us soon fell asleep. Next Chapter – Julio? |
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| I am looking forward the moment you will find your little sister and she will have larger harem than you :-P |
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| I was hoping for two in the bush but this works to. Now go find another girl and let the harem action begin my friend. Remember in this world you are in there is only room for one king of monsters. Show them what you can do like Godzilla. PS try to become the king of monsters in the harem/badass way |
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beast_regards said: I am looking forward the moment you will find your little sister and she will have larger harem than you :-P I haven't even decided if she'll have one yet >~< ISH29 said: I was hoping for two in the bush but this works to. Now go find another girl and let the harem action begin my friend. Remember in this world you are in there is only room for one king of monsters. Show them what you can do like Godzilla. PS try to become the king of monsters in the harem/badass way haha xD I'll try :P |
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| [b]Chapter 15 – Julio? I slowly opened my eyes, only to see that Nelly was already awake, smiling as she had been waiting for me to wake up. Without thinking I deposited a small kiss on her lips and smiled. “Morning” ”Morniiing” I didn't even get to say another word before Nelly showed me the letter and pen I had been thinking about before I fell asleep the night before. It looked the same as the first one, so I knew it was about recruiting. I opened it and read it. Congratulations! You have successfully recruited a Monster Girls into your army, please circle her name if you want to take her with you on your journey: -Nelly If her name was not circled, she will be teleported elsewhere shortly afterwards. You shall see her again when challenging a Lord. You have acquired the following rewards for recruiting a girl: -100 gold -A white crystal Once you are ready, sign this contract with your blood. Have fun recruiting! So I have to make a decision I sat there thinking for a while. I didn't know what to do. Before I had the chance to do anything else Nelly grabbed my finger, bit it to the point of bleeding and placed it on the contract, therefor signing it without me circling her name. “Nelly...” She grabbed my face and placed her lips on mine. ”You had to think about it, so it's best I don't accompany you. Don't hesitate in making your decisions...Dio...I love you” The next moment Nelly was gone...as if she was never there to begin with. I'll challenge the Lord...so we'll see each other soon... I realized I had made a mistake with hesitating. I missed Nelly already, but I had to live with the fact that she was not my companion, that she wouldn't be able to see more of the outside world that she had learned to love. I packed my things and headed back home. I was sad, but I smiled because I knew 2 women I loved and my child were waiting for me. I arrived at the house after what seemed to be an hour and knocked on the door. Eva opened the door and immediately jumped in my arms. ”So,how did it goooo?” “I managed to recruit someone” She smiled and pulled me in. She seemed excited and took me to the bedroom in which Talia and Sadie were waiting. Talia was holding what seemed to be a kind of newspaper in her hands and smiled at me. ”Looks like you're a big thing now” “What do you mean?” “ 'Our newest player has reached a new level of strength. Seemingly the young man has what seems to be a red crystal implanted inside of him. What else will this young lad bring us? Could this become a new playing method?' is what's written in here” “How did anyone even find out?...” ”You see, in our world, almost nothing can be kept a secret” Eva clung to my right arm tight and Talia stood up from her bed, holding Sadie who was asleep in her arms. ”People want to see you in town” “Why me?...” I didn't even get the chance to complain before Eva and Talia were taking me to town. As soon as we got there, other players were giving me menacing looks. “How come you can implant a crystal and we can't?” I heard a man shouting from far away “My brother tried doing the same as soon as we heard of it and he died!” I could hear pain and regret in his every word “I'll...kill you!” suddenly the man started running towards me. His intentions were clear. He really did want to kill me. ”That's because all of you are weak...” Suddenly a guy who didn't look much older than me appeared in front of the man and kneed him in the stomach. The man immediately stopped running and fell on his knees. ”Know your place...” After that he turned to face me. The first thing that popped into my eyes was his blue hair and eyes. He slowly lifted his shirt to show me a scar on his hip. ”You're not the only one able to become more powerful. There are weaklings who don't deserve to live that tried and died, but then there's you and me...the powerful ones which are able to control such power! My name is Julio! Tell me yours!” I was surprised by how many things were happening at the same moment, but there was one thing that angered me. I shook Eva off my arm and walked closer to Julio. “My name?...I'm Dio...and you're wrong...” ”I'm wrong? What's that supposed to mean?” “The weak don't deserve to die...it's the strong one's duty to protect those who can't protect themselves...” He suddenly started laughing loudly as if I had just said the most stupid thing in the world, but then his expression suddenly turned into a serious one. ”Fight me...and show me how you protect the weak!” “Fine...I'll show you what it means to protect someone!” My stupidity brought me to accept his challenge. As soon as he heard me accept his challenge the crystal inside his hip started glowing red. He had the same kind of crystal I did, but I had no idea of what was about to happen. The sky quickly turned dark as his body was wrapped in what seemed to be a purple light. The light started growing rapidly and the shape of his body changed completely. Next Chapter – Julio the Shapeshifter! |
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| O Julio, Julio! wherefore art thou Julio? :-P |
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| [b]Chapter 16 – Julio the Shapeshifter! It looked like that of a fully transformed, huge dragon. I was about as big as it's claws fingers. The purple light then faded and revealed the beast hiding itself inside of it. The sight was scary. There was no skin nor flesh. It was a huge skeleton of a dragon. It was not only huge, but frightening. Inside it's body was there was a huge amount of purple energy and all around him purple lighting struck down on the ground. This was the kind of dragon you'd think about when you're told to describe a powerful one. I honestly had no idea of how to beat him. There were cracks in his bones, but they did not look even close to being easy to break. “Shit...” His tail suddenly came flying towards me, purposely hitting the ground close to me as a warning. I was happy he fired a warning shot. If that had been directed at me I'd be dead already. I immediately transformed and held my sword tight in my hands. I started running to the right, wanting to see how long it would take to make a whole turn, but he was just to huge for me to make the whole turn. Before I could even run far his tail was directed straight at me this time. With a swift jump at the last second I managed to evade it. I jumped on his tail, this was my chance to get close without using up power to fly. I ran as fast as I could, but as I looked at him the purple energy started accumulating itself inside his mouth. A Dragon's...breath... My eyes opened wide as I immediately took flight. He quickly breathed a huge beam of lighting in my direction. I did not manage to escape unharmed, my right food was completely paralyzed. Walking or running was no longer an option in this fight. I looked back for a second to see the damage he had caused. He had blown away his own tail with that blast and there was a huge crater which extended further than my sight could see. This guy...he's insane... As I looked back at him his sight was not directed at me. He was looking at Talia, Eva and Sadie who had been watching all along. He was charging another beam. Shit! I flew to them as quickly as I could and pushed them away from the beams reach. “Run home!” ”Dio...” ”Your legs...” I had once again not managed to completely escape the beam. My legs were completely covered in burned bruises and were completely paralyzed. “Just run!” Hearing me took Sadie and ran back home. I flew up-ways to face Julio directly. “You really are crazy...” No answer whatsoever came from him. He didn't seem to care about anything. His purpose seemed to be only to defeat me. I held my sword tight in my hands and faced him. He started charging another beam. “I won't...run away...any longer...” The town around us was in flames. The thunder striking down on it endlessly had caused massive destruction and our fight was already destructive. “I'll protect...my loved ones...I won't hesitate...any longer!”[/color] His beam kept charging, but I noticed it took longer than usual and grinned. “So...I'm not the only one reaching my limits...” My vision was getting blurry. I couldn't even fully see the dragon in front of me anymore. My breath was growing heavier by the second. I could hear my heart beat inside my head. I could feel the blood rush through my every vein. Images of everyone I cared for were passing my thoughts. My family, Rose, Anissa, Terza, Eva, Talia, Sadie and Nelly. I'd prove to everyone I was worthy of their company. “Go to hell!” My sword started glowing in my hands. A green, bright glow. I held it over my head and shouted as loud as I could. The light kept growing brighter with every second and memories from all my quests were flashing in front of my eyes. “DIE!!” He fired off his beam and I struck with my sword. The accumulated green light shot out of it and pushed against his beam. I kept shouting for whatever reason as our attacks clashed. A bright white light surrounded the whole town and my transformation finally faded. “This battle's...over...Julio...” I fell to the ground, as I fell it felt so slow. Time seemed to be running very slowly. The light faded and still in front of me I saw Julio also falling. “Guess time ran out for the both of us...it's a draw...” ”You protected those you loved...you did your best to protect the weak...it's your win...” I looked down at the ground which looked closer and closer. “No matter how you look at it...it's the end...” ”I'm not going to leave their side...” I looked at him wondering and my eyes opened wide as I saw tears in his eyes. Does he have...someone special...for him?... ”DIO!!!” ”DIO!!!” I looked back at the ground to see both Eva and Talia running in my direction. “You two...came back for me...” ”JULIO!!!” ”JULIO!!!” I heard two more voices shouting out Julio's name. Two girls. “So you did have someone to protect...” ”Shut up...Rival...” “I don't have to listen to you...Rival...” We both fell in our loved ones arms. Eva and Talia were crying loudly as they held me. ”Idiot...” ”Don't die on us...” “I won't...I love you...” I looked over at Julio and his loved ones. ”What were you thinking?...” Her arms and lower body were identical to those of Nelly. She seemed to also be a snake-like Monster Girl. This one tho had a decent amount of clothes on. The pendant beneath her neck was shaped in the form of the Ying and Yang signs. She seemed to also have a few of them on her hair as accessories. Her hair was long and purple and two horns sprouted from it. The way she talked to Julio also showed me just how gentle she was. ”Don't worry us like that...” Her lower body was that of a white snake. She had long white hair, her eyes were a mixture of red and orange, she had long pointy ears and unlike the other snake-like girls I had seen she had human arms and hands. She was dressed in white clothing. All the white made her look so kind and gentle. ”Sorry for worrying the two of you...” Mine and his eyes met again and we looked at each other. ”Hey Rival...let's form an alliance...” “An alliance?...” Next Chapter – The Alliance and the First Lord |
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| That was so classical anime spectacle with lots of shouting and flashes. Also principle from Nanoha - You beat shit out of it, you will befriend it. :-D And lot of more with "something for protect" and other awfully familiar things. And I bet Dio's sister is actually the lord! Everyone else got other references in previous chapters? Except being suspiciousy SAO. |
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| [b]Chapter 17 - The Alliance and the First Lord Talia and Eva slowly tried helping me on my feet, but I was unable to stand without their help. My legs were still completely paralyzed. They wrapped one of my arms around both their shoulders to help me keep balance. I looked over at Julio who had to do the same thing. “What's this alliance you mentioned?” ”You haven't heard of forming an alliance before?” “People tend to forget telling me important things...” ”It's pretty simple to be honest. We both sign a certain contract to form an alliance. The advantages are the following. We both get to challenge a Lord at the same time, meaning that your and my army will be combined into one” “I won't let you lay a finger on my companions...” ”Don't worry man, I don't intend touching any of them. I'm just proposing we form an alliance because of our special power. I only have Melinda and Shyla in my army, but I'd still be of help to you in the battle” “I see...it does sound like we'd have an advantage...I'm just wondering why so sudden?” ”Sudden? News about you wanting to challenge the Lord have been everywhere!” “So even that got revealed somehow?...” ”I think you should accept” ”Talia's right. The bigger our army, the bigger the chances of beating the Lord” ”Why should Julio need to team up with anyone?” ”Don't be like that Melinda. Julio made the choice and we have to accept it” “Let's make the contract...Rival” ”Just follow us” He seemed quite excited and they started heading towards a small cabin which seemed familiar to me. My legs were still badly injured, so Talia and Eva had to help me walk there. We went inside and I saw the same man that had charged my gold crystal the other day. “The two of you caused quite a lot of destruction outside...” he seemed calmer than he should be, seeing in what state the town was. “It's going to take a long time to fix everything” for some reason he smiled at us. ”We know, but we couldn't help it. So, old man, we're here to form an alliance” “I figured this was gonna happen” He opened a small drawer and pulled out a paper “so I already prepared the contract for you. You only need to sign it” Julio went and immediately signed it. “Hey Julio...how do you know this guy?...” ”An old acquaintance of mine. That's about it” “I see...” I didn't really want to think about it, so I just signed it and that was it. “Before the two of you leave...I think there's something you should see” he said as he brought out one of this world's newspapers. “There was a change in rules...” Julio took it and started reading. I stood there confused and wondered what could have changed. After a while Julio stopped and looked quite surprised. It didn't seem like he was surprised in a good way though. He gave me a serious look and handed me the newspaper on a certain page. ”Read...” ”War Rule Change! Recruited Monster Girls can now decide themselves whether they want to participate in the war or not. There is a drawback tho. Whoever enters one may now die in a war.” “You've got to be kidding me...” ”I wonder why the rules changed so suddenly in this extend...” “That's not the problem here...” I looked at Talia and fixed my eyes on her. “Don't participate... You have to take care of Sadie...” I could soon feel her fist hit my head. “What was that for!?” ”I'll participate whether you like it or not” She looked determined and ready to fight. The only thing I could do was sigh. “Go get Sadie” I looked at the old man who gave us the newspaper. “I'm leaving you in care of my child for a while” He simply nodded and Talia went to get the girl. In the meantime Julio told me how we'd get to the Lord. It was quite simple. We'd just have to yell out a few words. Talia arrived soon with Sadie in her arms. “We'll be back soon sweetheart...” I gave my daughter a gentle pat on the forehead and handed her to the old man. ”Everyone ready?” “I've been ready for a long time now” ”I'll follow Dio everywhere he goes” ”Same goes for me” ”I'm scared...” ”So am I...” Julio pushed the girls in the cabin. ”Old man, I need you to take care of two more girls while I'm gone” The man simply nodded again. The girls looked ashamed of themselves and apologized, but Julio just smiled and told them not to worry. Me, Julio, Talia and Eva went outside. ”Good luck with the challenging!” “I know... I wonder why I have to say it tho” I sighed and took a deep breath. “Oh Lord of Sky Den, hear my call! I, Dio, my companions Talia and Evangelin and Julio with whom I have formed an alliance challenge you!” I must have looked embarrassing since Julio was laughing like an idiot. Soon a bright light wrapped itself around us and the four of us were thrown in a white room. It looked identical to the room I was in when I first joined this game. ”Welcome warriors” We all looked for the voice and saw her, the Lord of this Region, Azazel. Azazel (Dragon) Next Chapter – The Path to Victory |
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| Let them fight. And let the beginning of a good story come to the fighting point. Hope in the end their will be more interesting girls in the harem. Remember their is only room for one king in that world and it has to be you. Ps Become a nice badass harem king Pss Make the world better for your harem Psss If people ask what is your inspiration say Godzilla because that is what you must become |
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| [b]Chapter 17 - The Alliance and the First Lord Talia and Eva slowly tried helping me on my feet, but I was unable to stand without their help. My legs were still completely paralyzed. They wrapped one of my arms around both their shoulders to help me keep balance. I looked over at Julio who had to do the same thing. “What's this alliance you mentioned?” ”You haven't heard of forming an alliance before?” “People tend to forget telling me important things...” ”It's pretty simple to be honest. We both sign a certain contract to form an alliance. The advantages are the following. We both get to challenge a Lord at the same time, meaning that your and my army will be combined into one” “I won't let you lay a finger on my companions...” ”Don't worry man, I don't intend touching any of them. I'm just proposing we form an alliance because of our special power. I only have Melinda and Shyla in my army, but I'd still be of help to you in the battle” “I see...it does sound like we'd have an advantage...I'm just wondering why so sudden?” ”Sudden? News about you wanting to challenge the Lord have been everywhere!” “So even that got revealed somehow?...” ”I think you should accept” ”Talia's right. The bigger our army, the bigger the chances of beating the Lord” ”Why should Julio need to team up with anyone?” ”Don't be like that Melinda. Julio made the choice and we have to accept it” “Let's make the contract...Rival” ”Just follow us” He seemed quite excited and they started heading towards a small cabin which seemed familiar to me. My legs were still badly injured, so Talia and Eva had to help me walk there. We went inside and I saw the same man that had charged my gold crystal the other day. “The two of you caused quite a lot of destruction outside...” he seemed calmer than he should be, seeing in what state the town was. “It's going to take a long time to fix everything” for some reason he smiled at us. ”We know, but we couldn't help it. So, old man, we're here to form an alliance” “I figured this was gonna happen” He opened a small drawer and pulled out a paper “so I already prepared the contract for you. You only need to sign it” Julio went and immediately signed it. “Hey Julio...how do you know this guy?...” ”An old acquaintance of mine. That's about it” “I see...” I didn't really want to think about it, so I just signed it and that was it. “Before the two of you leave...I think there's something you should see” he said as he brought out one of this world's newspapers. “There was a change in rules...” Julio took it and started reading. I stood there confused and wondered what could have changed. After a while Julio stopped and looked quite surprised. It didn't seem like he was surprised in a good way though. He gave me a serious look and handed me the newspaper on a certain page. ”Read...” ”War Rule Change! Recruited Monster Girls can now decide themselves whether they want to participate in the war or not. There is a drawback tho. Whoever enters one may now die in a war.” “You've got to be kidding me...” ”I wonder why the rules changed so suddenly in this extend...” “That's not the problem here...” I looked at Talia and fixed my eyes on her. “Don't participate... You have to take care of Sadie...” I could soon feel her fist hit my head. “What was that for!?” ”I'll participate whether you like it or not” She looked determined and ready to fight. The only thing I could do was sigh. “Go get Sadie” I looked at the old man who gave us the newspaper. “I'm leaving you in care of my child for a while” He simply nodded and Talia went to get the girl. In the meantime Julio told me how we'd get to the Lord. It was quite simple. We'd just have to yell out a few words. Talia arrived soon with Sadie in her arms. “We'll be back soon sweetheart...” I gave my daughter a gentle pat on the forehead and handed her to the old man. ”Everyone ready?” “I've been ready for a long time now” ”I'll follow Dio everywhere he goes” ”Same goes for me” ”I'm scared...” ”So am I...” Julio pushed the girls in the cabin. ”Old man, I need you to take care of two more girls while I'm gone” The man simply nodded again. The girls looked ashamed of themselves and apologized, but Julio just smiled and told them not to worry. Me, Julio, Talia and Eva went outside. ”Good luck with the challenging!” “I know... I wonder why I have to say it tho” I sighed and took a deep breath. “Oh Lord of Sky Den, hear my call! I, Dio, my companions Talia and Evangelin and Julio with whom I have formed an alliance challenge you!” I must have looked embarrassing since Julio was laughing like an idiot. Soon a bright light wrapped itself around us and the four of us were thrown in a white room. It looked identical to the room I was in when I first joined this game. ”Welcome warriors” We all looked for the voice and saw her, the Lord of this Region, Azazel. Azazel (Dragon) Next Chapter – The Path to Victory |
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diogora said: my story dissappeared... It didn't. Chapter 17 is just where it was, just above my original comment. ISH29 said: If people ask what is your inspiration say Godzilla because that is what you must become While he certainly caused some damage on previous chapter, it's not specific how much. I still guess he is still far bellow destructiveness of average Kaiju. So, Dio, stop slacking. |
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beast_regards said: diogora said: my story dissappeared... It didn't. Chapter 17 is just where it was, just above my original comment. ISH29 said: If people ask what is your inspiration say Godzilla because that is what you must become While he certainly caused some damage on previous chapter, it's not specific how much. I still guess he is still far bellow destructiveness of average Kaiju. So, Dio, stop slacking. I can'see the previous chapter for some reason, but I guess it's just something wrong with my MAL... And I'll try to stop slacking then :P there should be tons of destruction coming soon :3 |
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| [b]Chapter 18 – The Path to Victory Julio and I both smiled as we saw the Lord appear in front of us ”Took you long enough to get here” “Explain the rules and let's get started. I have someone waiting for me.” ”Looks like we have some rather lively challengers today. Fine by me, let's get started. The rules are simple. You'll soon be teleported to a room with all your recruited Monster Girls and you will choose who will participate in the challenge. Even Julio's companions will be present. Depending on how many companions you choose I will determine the time limit. After choosing, you and your chosen companions will be teleported to a large area with a straight path you must take to reach me. Reach me and defeat me and you have won the challenge, but beware that I will dispatch as many Monster Girls to be in your way as you choose to take part in the challenge. You can either take them on one on one or gang up on them, but beware of the time you have, got it?” “This sounds complicated... so basically we just have to beat up as many people as we take with us? Sounds simple, let's do it” A bright light blinded us once more and we soon found ourselves in a dark room. It was pitch-black, so we had some difficulty seeing, but then the lights went on suddenly. My eyes took some time to adjust to the light, but when I opened them I could see Julio, Talia, Eva, Melinda and Shyla, but my eyes grew wider as I saw Anissa, Rose, Terza and Nelly standing there. ”Looks like the main character finally made it here” “Looks like you haven't changed a bit” I smiled wide at them and remembered the challenge. “Are any of you participating?” ”I'm actually a bit scared...” ”It's true that our chances are higher if we gang up on them, but even if we wanted to participate I doubt Talia and Eva would let us get in any danger.” ”It's not my fault that I always have to take care of all of you” ”You heard her, we'll take care of it!” I looked at Nelly a bit ashamed at not having chosen her. “I'm sor...” I couldn't even say a thing before she hugged and kissed me. ”Don't ever regret your decisions, you promised” She was smiling happily as she said that, so I was able to feel reassured. “If there's ever a possibility to get you back, I'll do it. That's the decision I made” *giggle* “I understand” The Lord stepped in the room with a smile on her face. ”Have the companions been chosen?” “Talia and Evangelin!” ”Only two? I see. The time limit is two hours!” She clapped her hand once and in an instant, me, Julio, Talia and Eva found ourselves in a mountain region. The Lord's voice could be heard, but she was nowhere to be seen. ”Walk along the path in front of you and reach me to defeat me. Two companions means I have let two of my subordinates stand in your way. The rest of your companions will be watching you on a monitor in their room. You have to hours starting NOW!” We immediately started running, but we stopped before we could get anywhere far. I felt something in my pocket and took it out. A colorless crystal with a timer to show us how long we'd have left. “At least they gave us something useful” ”I'll keep track of time, you just concentrate on running!” “Got it!” We started running again. Thanks to all the situations I've been in I managed to increase my stamina, but after a while I could see that everyone had started sweating. “Julio, the time” ”It's been about 20 minutes already...” We decided to start walking for a bit, but our peace didn't last long. From above a dragon type Monster Girl came flying down. Dragon Subordinate 1 The girl didn't say a word. She stood in front of us and got into fighting position. “I guess this is where the challenge starts” I got into a fighting stance myself, but Talia pushed me to the ground before we could start. ”This is where the challenge starts for ME! You have to conserve your energy for the final fight. Me and Eva already decided to split up and take on the subordinates, so keep running!” “But...” Julio placed his hand on my shoulder and shook his head. “Fine...I'm leaving this one to you!” I hated the idea of leaving her here to take on the subordinate herself, but I had no other choice. Me, Julio and Eva kept running. I took a last look at Talia and saw that she was ready to fight. I turned to face the path ahead. This was only the start. I needed to win. Next Chapter – Sky Den Challenge Part 1 |
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| [b]Chapter 19 - Sky Den Challenge Part 1 Talia was now facing the Lord's first subordinate. A girl whose look looked dark an empty. A girl that didn't say a word. ”You should try livening up. Try smiling, it's good for your skin” Her opponent stayed silent and kept listening as Talia spoke, but that was exactly what Talia wanted. As she spoke she was analyzing her opponent. She tried finding out her strongest and weakest points and even tho after she was done she looked a bit scared, she got ready to fight. Her opponent didn't hesitate a second as soon as Talia got into fighting stance. Her opponent rushed her and Talia could see what was hidden beneath her yukata-like clothes. Arms, not wings, covered in scales. ”Shit...” She shielded herself with both her arms as her opponent started throwing ferocious punshes. Every punch pushed Talia further back. Her opponent was strong. Her scales were the hardest she had encountered so far. With a kick she was thrown far away from her opponent. She stood up and suddenly felt an immense amount of pain on her left arm. ”That kick...it broke my arm...this isn't going to be as easy as I thought...” Even though she was in immense pain, she got back on her two feet and grinned. ”I have the information I need now, time to get serious!” Her opponent didn't even flinch at what she said and rushed her again, but Talia sprouted her wings and took flight. She had forgotten to check one thing though. Her opponent's legs were stronger than her arms. The opponent jumped in the air with all her might, piercing Talia's right leg with one of her horns. As soon as she did Talia screamed in pain. ”FUCK! YOU BITCH!” Talia held on to her horn, not letting her opponent escape and kicked her right in the face with her left foot. Her opponent's horn seperated itself from her head and she fell to the ground as she screamed in pain. ”Finally letting out some noise are you?” Her opponent looked straight at her, her look had turned from dark and empty to dark and full of rage. Talia pulled the horn out of her leg and squirmed as she did. ”Fighting's not my thing, but I got a daughter waiting for me at home. I can't lose!” Talia flew downwards, towards her opponent and threw a punch aiming straight at her face. Talia hit her and saw blood flowing. ”Got you!” Her victorious smile didn't last long as soon blood squirted out of her own fist. Her opponent wasn't damaged at all. Talia's victorious smile turned into a look of both fear and anger. She thought her opponent's weakness was her head because it had no scales, but she was wrong. She had no time to react. Her opponent swung her tail, hitting Talia from the left sideShe screamed once moreand coughed up some blood. ”I don't have many chances left...” While still on her knees, Talia swung her fist aiming straight at her opponent's stomach, but she jumped away. ”One more move and...I win!” She flew up to the sky again, aiming her hand at her opponent with her palm open. The opponent did not seem please with the taunt and jumped straight at her, getting her tail ready to hit Talia, but that was just what she wanted. At the last moment Talia pulled back her wings and avoided the attack by a hair. She only had this one second and she took it. Her open palm was not a taunt, it was her trump card. With a rotation-like movement she pushed her palm against her opponent's stomach. Her opponent who was still slightly above her coughed out enough blood to paint Talia's hair in red. ”Don't underestimate a mother...” The opponent fell to the ground on her back. She looked at the sky, looking surprised. Talia flew down and stood next to where she was lying. ”My punch aiming at your stomach...you dodged it.” Her opponent's eyes widened and she opened her mouth “So that's how you found out about my weakness?... You're quite strong you know... but the next subordinate is much more talented than I am...” ”I don't need to worry... Her opponent is Evangelin... she might not be very smart, but she surpasses me in both strength and speed... I've never beaten her” Her opponent smiled at Talia “I wish you the best of luck...” her eyes closed slowly. ”She's dead... this world... truly is cruel” Talia took flight once more and headed down the path on her way towards the Lord in hopes to see us. Dio, Julio and Eva: *grin* “My turn to fight!” Next Chapter - Sky Den Challenge Part 2 |
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ISH29 said: Battle after battle is really going to be tough from here on in. Hope the girls can win the battles and you ready to take the crown like the king of monsters. You'll have to wait and see how it goes xP |
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| [b]Chapter 20 - Sky Den Challenge Part 2 I was awfully worried about Talia as another twenty minutes had passed since we got seperated, but there was no time to worry. Our second opponent had already appeared. Dragon Subordinate 2 Me and Julio were already running, the next destination was the Lord. I kept my trust for Talia and Eva and kept running forward. ”Thick scales on your legs and holding on to heavy lances... but then there's that spear on your back and your light armor... I guess I'll have to see how things go” Her opponent grinned and got into a fighting stance “You shouldn't talk about your opponent before you've faced him in a fight” ”I guess you've got a point there!” Eva got in a fighting stance, but her opponent stayed still. Eva ran towards her at immense speed, but her opponent jumped in the air and used Eva's head to jump away as if she was toying with her. ”You managed to outrun me...” *grin* “Finally someone who can let me have fun!” Her opponent was grinning as well “The weakest dogs bark the loudest, come at me!” Eva got back into fighting stance and looked at her opponent, this time none of them moved. The fight turned into a fight of patience. Eva hated this type of fight. She was impatient, so she rushed her opponent after only a few seconds. Her opponent outrun her once more and tried using Eva's head to jump once more, but Eva grabbed on to her leg and slammed her on the ground. ”The same trick won't work twice!” Her opponent got on her feet quickly and got some distance before rushing Eva. Eva tried throwing a punch, but her opponent jumped once more and prepared her lances for an attack, but that was what Eva wanted, she got ready to throw another punch and her opponent shielded herself with the lances. Eva's punch was stronger than the opponent could have imagined and the lances were smashed to pieces. ”Got you now!” She was going to grab her opponent by the throat, but suddenly a dozen of open wounds appeared on her arms and blood squirted out heavily. The opponent had her lance in her hands and was many times faster than previously. “I said not to talk about your opponent until you faced him...and all his weapons” ”You got me there...” Eva's arms were useless, was there even a chance to win now? Despite her arms being useless now, she kept smiling. Her opponent looked confused as she saw her smile. “Why the happy face even though you have lost two strong weapons?” ”I still have a weapo...” Before she could even finish her opponent was standing behind her. Eva looked shocked. She felt like something was missing. She looked to her left and there it was...or rather, it wasn't. Her arm was no longer there, cut off by the sharp spear in her opponents hands. She spoke no more, she looked at her opponent with a look full of rage. Her opponent laughed and grinned. “What are you going to do now that you've lost an arm, huh?” Her face changed in a second as it took even less for Eva to reach her. Eva's speed had surpassed every boundary. With her leg she crushed the spear without a problem and the fear in her opponent's eyes grew. In her hand she held her own arm and swung it at her opponent's neck. The battle was over in an instant. Her opponent's head with a look forever frozen in fear was no longer connected to the body. The pain of losing an arm was so strong Eva's pain was still unfeelable for her. The head fell to the ground, the body crumbled on it's own. From the moment Eva lost her arm, it took only 3 seconds to win the fight. But as soon as the pain reached her, she fell unconscious in an instant. The fight was over, the winner was Eva. Dio and Julio: I felt shivers run down my spine. I had the feeling something bad had happened to both Talia and Eva, but I had to keep going. I had to trust them. I finally saw it, a large area with a throne at the other end of it. The Lord was sitting on it, waiting for us. “Julio, the time!” ”We still have an hour left!” “That's plenty of time!” We kept running until we were standing in front of the Lord. ”I'm surprised you made it this far, congratulations! Sadly, now comes the hardest part of the challenge! Beat me if you can, humans!” “You don't have to ask, we came here with the intention of beating you and that's exactly what we'll do!” Next Chapter - Sky Den Challenge Part 3 |
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| Your combat scene felt confusing this time and hard to read. Perhaps you may work on that a little. But your drawings are awesome! |
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beast_regards said: Your combat scene felt confusing this time and hard to read. Perhaps you may work on that a little. But your drawings are awesome! I wrote the next one on the same day, so let's hope it's understandable would you like to see more drawings? xP |
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| [b]Chapter 21 - Sky Den Challenge Part 3 We were finally here, the “last boss” of Sky Den. I needed to win. Me and Julio took some distance and transformed into our respective forms. He looked more threatening than me, but I could beat him, so I had my hopes up regarding the Lord. The Lord stood up and as soon as she did my knees started shacking. The power of her will to fight was already enough to get me to shake. “Let's do this!” Julio growled and a a beam of purple thunder came flying down towards the Lord. It hit her directly and I took my chance to rush in and throw a punch, but the beam had no effect and with just her palm she had completely nulled out my punch. She was much stronger than I had thought. She was far superior to us. I started sweating and shacking before I could see purple lighting coming out of Julio's body and striking me. ”Fighting among yourselves already?” *grin* “Thanks for that one Julio! It woke me up!” I was feeling better than before. My legs had stopped shacking and I was ready to fight without hesitation. I concentrated and let my sword form itself in my hand. ”Humpf! You two aren't fighting each other? That's no fun” “Sorry to disappoint you!” Julio stepped forward and started striking down his thunder beams on the Lord while I concentrated my power on my sword. Time passed and Julio's beams kept raining down on the Lord who was deflecting them, but I could see that even she was getting a bit tired. My sword started glowing green, my attack was ready. I slashed it and a strong green beam came flying out of it just like when I'd fought Julio. “METEO SLACHER!” The Lord wasn't expecting it and tried deflecting it with her arm, but that's when I saw it. Wounds. There were a couple wounds on her body from the thunder beams and my attack was damaging her. She looked tired after the attack, but I used the opportunity. I rushed her while there was still smoke around and was prepared to slash at her. I could see the shocked face she had. I was sure I'd win...but then suddenly the sword in my hand disappeared, my transformation went undone and the Lord smiled again. I had forgotten to calculate the amount of energy my attack would take from my transformation, it was over for me. She kicked me in the gut with a force I wish I had never had to feel in my entire life. I flew straight into a mountain at a speed I had never thought I could reach. I coughed out blood, I didn't even want to think about how much blood I had lost. I was shacking, I didn't want to die. Julio was still putting up a fight, but his transformation soon went undone as well and he crumbled to the ground himself. I took a look at the timer. Only ten more minutes. “I'm sorry Asa...Big Brother can't go get you...” I looked at the Lord from afar. She was looking at me, her palm facing me as I could feel something accumulating. It was an attack, probably a beam. It was over for me, the Lord fired a huge blast at me from her initial position. “She didn't even...move from where she started...” I could see the attack coming at me as if time had slowed down. I couldn't move, I couldn't speak, I almost couldn't even breathe. The attack was only a few meters away from me when I saw something appear in front of me. White hair and wings. An Angel? I thought I was imagining stuff. The beam hit, but when I opened my eyes I was okay, the mountain was also intact. As soon as I looked forward tears streamed down my face. “Why did you...?” ”Because I love you...” The tears wouldn't stop. I looked at my first love, wounded heavily from her previous battle and burned to a crisp from this current attack. “Talia...why?...Why did you have to save me?...” Her fingers started falling and turned to ash. She was completely burned, her will alone letting her stand and speak. ”How many times do I have to say...not to...underestimate a mother...nor a girl in love...” She kissed me and I held her in my arms, crying as my first ever love crumbled into ash and the wind blew her away. ”I love you...Dio...” “Talia...Talia...why?...Talia...come back...Talia...TALIA! TALIA!” She was gone, gone forever. I'd never see her again. It was goodbye. The rage within me couldn't take it. I started creaming as my tears kept flowing. My crystal reacted to my rage. My body started changing. A new transformation. A transformation created out of pure hatred. Berserk Dio The only thought I remember having was to kill the Lord. Fire came out of my mouth as breath, my power had increased unimaginably high. I couldn't control my own body. “DESTROY! DESTROY!” In less than a second I reached the Lord who was at a distance of at least a hundred meters from me and punched her straight in the face, my fist smashing her face on the ground as it's power was enough to create a small crater. She was in agonizing pain. The challenge would last one more minute. I could still make her suffer much more. I grabbed onto her leg and threw her against the mountain I was just stuck in, my throw powerful enough to make three mountain crumble in a row. Again I reached her in less than a second and grabbed onto her leg while she was still in the middle of flying from my throw. I smashed her on the ground countless times and I kept smashing and smashing. She was long dead and her body wasn't even recognizable anymore, but even so I kept on smashing and smashing until time ran out. Before anything else could happen I threw a beam out of my hand straight at her, eradicating her from the face of this world and creating a kilometer long crack in this world. I had won. It was over...but Talia was still gone. My transformation went undone and I fell to the ground, unconscious. Next Chapter – The Truth |
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| How dare they kill my beloved one now the KING IS MADE AND ALL HELL WILL BREAK LOOSE. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DCiM8kSfb8I PS Please become a nice badass harem king PSS please find a magical way to bring your lover back cause no child should grow up without a mother PSSS BEAT THE LORD AND BECOME THE KING OF MONSTERS |
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beast_regards said: Feather hurricane! :-D I need more attack names xP ISH29 said: How dare they kill my beloved one now the KING IS MADE AND ALL HELL WILL BREAK LOOSE. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DCiM8kSfb8I PS Please become a nice badass harem king PSS please find a magical way to bring your lover back cause no child should grow up without a mother PSSS BEAT THE LORD AND BECOME THE KING OF MONSTERS haha xD did I destroy well? xP PS HAI! PSS don't worry x3 PSSS AYE SIR! |
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| [b]Chapter 22 – The Truth When I opened my eyes I was once again standing in an empty white room, but I wasn't the only one. I searched for the presence I felt and saw Eva sitting there, holding her left shoulder with her right hand. I was going to ask her how her fight went, but I froze as I saw what was missing. Her left arm was gone. Eva had been treated, so she was in no serious danger, but the sight of what happened almost made me puke. That's when I remembered. The image of Talia crumbling to ashes in front of my eyes made me crumble to my knees and cry loudly. I don't know when it happened, but Eva had positioned herself in front of me, wrapping her right arm around me and holding my head close to chest I cried. She remained calm even though she knew what had happened. Seeing her calm like that got me awfully mad. “HOW CAN YOU STAY THIS CALM AFTER WHAT'S HAPPENED!? SHE'S DEAD YOU KNOW!? DON'T YOU CARE THE SLIGHTEST ABOUT H...” My pointless shouting was cut off as I felt her palm hit my cheek. I sorted out my thoughts and wanted to start shouting again as I positioned myself to look her in the eyes, but I couldn't. I couldn't shout because Eva's face was already flooded in tears. ”You idiot...of course I care!...I care more than you could imagine...but...we have to stay strong!...If she saw us crying like this...what would she think!?...don't say that...don't say I don't care about her...” “Eva...what's wrong with this world?...” ”It's...a game...you were told already” “Don't give me that...I'm not that stupid...This world isn't just a mere game...” She wiped her tears with her arm and held me once more. “I guess there's no hiding it from you...” “Tell me everything...” ”Let's start slow...First of all...the 7 habitats you were told about once you got here are floating islands. How they and the waterfall to get one here came into existence remains a mystery, but the voice leading one here is what's pulling the strings...There's a lot to explain, so listen carefully. These islands are higher than you imagine. If you reach the edge of one you'll only see clouds miles under your feet. Jumping is not an option, but your world lies below. Surrounding the island completely, there are also thousands of crystal fragments creating an unpassable forcefield, so even for those who can fly, it is impossible to leave this island. Everything here is done with crystals. The crystals are also the main reason the islands can float this high, but that's besides the point. We aren't allowed to tell the 'players', so I'll try making it as quick as possible. This place is certain death, you can't win. Look at what happened from just fighting one Lord. This is what's planned for every player who actually tries to win, they're supposed to be disposed of. If one is recruited and not selected as a companion, she will be sent to an empty room and wait alone until a Lord is challenged by the one who recruited them. You and Julio, you're males yet you can change forms at will. That is a fact which remains a mystery to even the one pulling the strings. Dio...you have to get your sister immediately...if she is caught, she'll be turned into a creature like me.” “What do you mean she'll be turned into a creature!?” ”The females taken here...we were all originally humans. But once you're here, you'll be turned into a Monster Girl quickly and once that's done, everything about your former self will be deleted. No one will remember you and there will be no evidence of your existence what so ever on the world below. You will be given the 'real' rules and be ordered to simply play the game or die. The thought is frightening at first, but you end up simply obeying...” “Or die?...Are you telling me you'll be killed because you're telling me this?...Don't joke around...sto-” ”Listen to me already! After this, get your sister and leave! Once you leave, all your memories of this place will be erased and you'll be able to live your life peacefully! So just g-” “I DON'T WANT TO FORGET ABOUT YOU NOR TALIA! I don't want to forget about Sadie! I don't want to forget about the times we were happy together! I don't want to forget about the love we share!” Hearing my words brought tears to her eyes. She was crying louder than earlier as I tried to understand everything she had told me, then as I was thinking she started talking. ”I miss my mommy...I miss my daddy...I don't want to be here anymore...I wanna go home...I wanna be normal again...” I walked to her and held her in my arms. “I'll get you out of here...” As I held her I looked at the emptiness in the room. “I wonder why you won't show yourself?” I then heard the voice of a female, the voice that leaded me here “So you noticed me?” Next Chapter – The Changes (Chapter 23 and 24 will contain loads of changes, so if it seems too fast paced please bear with me as it hopefully will not take too long to slow down) |
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diogora said: These islands are higher than you imagine Jumping obviously isn't an option, flying on the other hand is. With plenty of creatures that are able to fly and working abilities that defy the laws of physics, so having floating island is basically no restriction at all. |
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beast_regards said: diogora said: These islands are higher than you imagine Jumping obviously isn't an option, flying on the other hand is. With plenty of creatures that are able to fly and working abilities that defy the laws of physics, so having floating island is basically no restriction at all. I did remember that and spend quite some time trying to find a solution and had one...did I srsly forget to write it down?...*prepares rope to hang myself in shame* |
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diogora said: Surrounding the island completely, there are also thousands of crystal fragments creating an unpassable forcefield, so even for those who can fly, it is impossible to leave this island. added a sentence I forgot to write, hope my readers aren't mad at me :( |
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Darkness-Ryu said: A nice interesting twist on things. I like it! Pretty dark honestly; but still a nice twist on things and look forward as to see who's really pulling the strings. I bet his sister is the actual Dark Lord (well, Lady) or whatever big bad tittles herself. |
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ISH29 said: It is time for a new king of this world. Rewrite these rules where it can be fair for everyone including you. Right now your lovers/friends problems are your problems and those problems must be solved to make better lives for all to come. PS save your sister PSS become King of monsters and end this crazy rule game PSSS become a nice badass king of the monsters to help everyone in the game. PSSSS Don't try and lose your lovers/friends or else its GAMEOVER can you read my mind? xD PS I will! PSS might take a while, but I will! PSSS YOSH! PSSSS I won't let the game end that way! Darkness-Ryu said: A nice interesting twist on things. I like it! Pretty dark honestly; but still a nice twist on things and look forward as to see who's really pulling the strings. glad you like it :) |
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| [b]Chapter 23 – The Changes I had now heard the voice that had brought me here once more as I held Eva in my arms. “Don't touch her” I heard a giggle “I'll only dispose of her later, don't worry” it sounded as if the voice had come closer. “After everything you've heard, do you plan on continuing to play?” “You bet I do! I'll beat the hell out of you and take everyone back!” The voice giggled once more “Very well, let's move on to the prize then! I shall grant any 3 wishes, but beware that turning a girl back to normal is impossible!” 3 wishes huh?...That's all I need... “First wish...bring Talia back to life...” “Hmm...I can bring her back, but she will have no memories whatsoever of anyone she's ever met” The voice replied. “That's fine, just do it!” I was happy enough about the fact that she could be brought back, so I took a deep breath. “I've granted your wish, she should be somewhere in this world” “Second wish...Eva will not be killed nor will she die in any caused accident” The voice giggled “You're not that dumb for a brat. But since I didn't mention anything of the sort in the wish rules I shall grant your wish.” That was the information I needed. I grinned. “Third wish...Let me rewrite the game!” The voice's giggle turned into laughter “You've done it now kid! Very well! Rewrite it as you please!” I did it! With this, I can do it! Two long sheets of paper appeared on the ground in front of me. One with the real rules and an empty one on which I was supposed to write the changes on. On my hand appeared a pen for me to write with. Let's do this! Eva had lost consciousness in my arms, but she was breathing and okay, so I lied her down and started writing the new rules. ”-The habitats will be fused into one instead of being divided into seven! -The Lord System will be removed, therefor making the Lords normal Monster Girls on the Island! -The point of the game is to take down the voice pulling the strings! -Recruiting will no longer exist! Whoever wishes to accompany you will do so! -Alliances will be removed and an option to create a guild will be created! Humans and Monster Girls will both be seen as members! -The guild house will grow with every new member and there will be quests to enrichen the guild and to upgrade it. -A house will be given to every 'player' and it will grow with every new member of your guild. -The guild will be as close as possible to the Leader's house! -The land will be divided into territories. Every guild starts with it's own territory which is only of 10 cubic meters around the guild. -To gain more territory you must complete specific quests or buy it. -To gain the territory of another guild you must either defeat it in battle or have them become part of yours. -With every birth comes a blue crystal! -The island will be one, but there will be seven warp points for better transportation purpose! -No one is allowed to kill unless in the final battle! (This rule exists because no matter how we look at it, the last battle won't be taken lightly) -Humans from the world below will no longer be taken to the island under any condition! -Human Females still on the island will no longer be turned into Monster Girls! -Once the final battle is won, everyone will be returned to the world below and they will be remembered! -These rules are permanent and can not be changed under any circumstances by anyone!” I put down my pen and took a deep breath as I grinned, then signed the sheet with my blood. “This will do!” Eva had woken up in the process of me writing the changes and seemed rather happy. We were both able to smile even after what happened. The voice giggled once more “Be wary human, I am not weak.” “I know that already...so I'll defeat you” She seemed rather amused and laughed “Let's see if your rules can save everyone” With a clap of her hands, suddenly everything started trembling. An earthquake? No. The floating islands were turning into 1. The new rules were being put into place and the earthquake was caused by that. Knowing I had caused something like that made me feel quite proud of myself. I had 3 current goals in mind. Regroup with Aza, find Talia and win this game, but I knew that I needed more power to win. After a while, the trembling faded and the voice told us the changes had been made. With another clap of her hands I was blended by a bright light and when I regained vision I was in the middle of a town, everyone around me applauding. I looked around and saw Julio and his companions, Eva and everyone else I had recruited aside from Talia close to me as we were in the center of the circle the crowd had made around us. I couldn't bring myself to talk to them, but they just smiled and didn't say anything as they felt the same way. I noticed a map in my hand, so I obviously opened it to check. It was much bigger than the previous map because the islands had been united. The location we were at and the location our house was, was marked on the map. We weren't far from there. The applauding crowd didn't bother me. I had a goal and I was going to see it through. “Let's go everyone...this was only the first battle...there's more to come...and Julio, I suggest we cut ties for a while...I'll see you again” After speaking those words Julio nodded and left with his companions before me and mine head home. On the way we saw no one since it was very close to the town. No one talked to each other the entire way, so when we got to the house I opened it with the usual key. It had gotten bigger since I had more people with me. Before entering I looked at Eva. “I'm sorry for not getting you your arm back...but it was either a wish to spare your life or get your arm back...I had to do it...” She just smiled at me as she tried to reassure me and we walked inside. There were not too many changes. Multiple rooms, a bigger kitchen and a bit more overall space for everyone. The room with the huge bed seemed to have gotten twice as big along with the bed. That day none of us talked, we just each went to our respective room, me having the one with the huge bed, and we were mentally getting ready to accomplish our goals. I was unable to fall asleep and soon Eva sneaked into my room, lying down next to me under the covers, using her arm to wrap mine around her. She felt warm, yet the events from that day mostly made me feel cold. I shivered as I couldn't drift off to sleep. I wanted someone to hold me as well. My wish was granted as I suddenly felt a pair of arms wrap themselves around me. It was Nelly. I decided not to react and soon fell asleep. Next Chapter – Amnesia |
diogoraMar 28, 2015 6:51 AM
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| I was browsing the club after I've read next after I saw all of the "big stories" EmeraldTryst suggested to me, and run into this one. Tag suggested it is supposed to be wildly different, and it is. This time is world is a real game, not a fantasy universe. Still a solid Light Novel, I remember your other story and you keep the style. This time, however, I am little bit confused thanks to the game setting. |
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Malise said: I was browsing the club after I've read next after I saw all of the "big stories" EmeraldTryst suggested to me, and run into this one. Tag suggested it is supposed to be wildly different, and it is. This time is world is a real game, not a fantasy universe. Still a solid Light Novel, I remember your other story and you keep the style. This time, however, I am little bit confused thanks to the game setting. All I can say is that I hope you enjoy it x3 |
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| [b]Chapter 24 – Amnesia The next morning I woke up feeling empty. The girls were asleep, Sadie in a small bed next to my huge one. I didn't have time to waste. I needed to find Talia as soon as possible. I was told she wouldn't remember me, but I didn't want to believe it. Or rather, I was happy enough with the fact that she was alive. I walked out the door and saw how early it was. The sun hadn't even risen yet. I didn't mind it though. I started walking. I had no way to follow. I thought about how to find Talia and after a while I just stood motionless in the middle of the forest. I thought about all kinds of ways of finding her and my final conclusion was the following. I'd just follow my heart. I knew that at that moment it sounded lame, but there was nothing else for me to try. To not distract myself from anything else I started humming to myself as I restarted walking. I don't remember how long I've walked nor how many people I had seen sleeping in the forest without anywhere else to stay, but before the sun had even risen I was already giving up. The landscape around me was still mountain-like, which meant I was still somewhat in the reptilian region even though some of the girls I'd seen sleeping were of a different type. The sun then slowly rose from behind a mountain and I could feel the rays of light hit my face. They were so warm. I stayed motionless for a while, then my head lost it's will to stand and hung down, making me look at the ground in front of me. The ground was wet and it kept getting wetter. I told myself the following. 'It's raining', but I was only trying to hide the fact that I was crying from myself. “TALIA!!!!!!!!!!!” I kept screaming out her name from the bottom of my lungs as it was the only thing I could do. I kept screaming and crying like an idiot. My voice grew weaker with time and I was again going to give up, but then I heard a voice behind my back. ”Dio?...” I quickly turned around as I recognized her voice instantly. There she was, my Talia. ”Are you...Dio?...” I ran towards her and wrapped my arms around her as I held her tight. “Yes...Yes that's me...It's Dio” ”Dio...who am I?...who are you?...Why don't I remember anything but your name?...and why...why does it feel so warm when you hold me?...” She had really forgotten who she was, yet she still remembered me. I looked at her and saw her cry as I held on to her. She probably felt scared. Waking up in a world like this, not knowing who you are and not knowing why someone can make you feel better...it ought to be a scary situation. I stayed with her like that for a while and tried to explain the situation in detail. I wasn't the best at explaining, but it was enough to make her understand the basic things that happened. Knowing she had died once made her even more afraid, but not remembering she loved me seemed to sadden her. I gave her a soft kiss as I tried to make it as similar to my very first kiss with her. She obviously blushed after everything I told her, but she didn't get mad. I held her hand and walked back to our house with her. As soon as I opened the door I could hear a loud voice coming my way. ”Where the heck did you go!?? We were worri-...Talia?...” Her screaming soon stopped as she started crying tears of happiness. After explaining the Amnesia to her I made sure to show Talia around the house a bit. She cried as she saw Sadie crawl on her lap and drink from her breasts. The fact that milk was actually coming out made her believe that she was a mother ever more. I didn't want to stress her out too much and it was already evening, but there was still something I had to do. “I'm leaving for a bit. The others will take care of you and help you feel comfortable. I should be back before sundown, so try to be patient” ”Okay...thank you...” I tried my best to smile, but on the inside I was extremely depressed. I tried telling myself that I was happy to see her alive and I really was, but her having lost her memories made me feel useless. I warned the others about me heading to town and started my little journey there. It's already late and I'd love to go find Aza, but for the moment I should go start the guild I planned on creating As soon as I stepped into town a huge crowd gathered around me. The news about me defeating a Lord were already out and rumors about me being the one who changed the rules were already spreading. I tried not to get distracted by the crowd and looked for the usual cabin. I walked in and the usual old man was inside. He wanted to say something, but after seeing my expression he probably changed his mind. “I'm here to create a guild...” He brought out the usual kind of document and smiled at me. “The usual” I took a small pocketknife that I brought from home and carefully made a small cut on my finger to make it bleed before signing the contract with it. “Show me your map please” Without much thought I gave it to him and he marked the guild location. It was only about half a kilometer away from the house. “Tomorrow once you head there, you should be able to see it. A name and a crest please” “Well, for the name, would 'Monster Den' do?...and for the crest...I guess I have to draw something...” ”We both know I'm the better drawer here!” I immediately turned around to face the voice coming from behind me. Next Chapter – Introductions |
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| Hope your family and other girls are fine after the new rules have been established. What I hope is none of your girls get hurt or get into death situation's but then again possible not. The thing you need to do now is build your guild and show you is the Boss around here like the FairyTale Guild. PS Take control of the place in a non violent manner PSS Become a nice badass king of monsters PSSS Hope your family/girls do alright PSSSS Don't lose at any game or else its GAMEOVER |
| IM A ISH! http://i.imgur.com/XsnQ67O.png |
| It's similar to the concept of Madoka series where main character was allowed to make any wish and she used it to rewrite the laws of the universe. It backfired heavily, but your end wish didn't really solved the thing. First, you actually didn't solve any of the problems of the world. People are still trapped in the world without any other way out unless you win some final battle, forced to fight even if they don't want. Everyone who is Monster Girl in time universe was rewritten stays this way, regardless if she likes it or not. Guilds and alliances were basically same thing, called different way, so it is cosmetic change. Also Eva lost her arm, but she is now effectively immortal. This could backfire heavily as she still can age or suffer injuries, but can't die at any circumstances. That means a lot of pain. She will not die even if someone cuts her head off and be alive, but can still be harmed. What a lot of suffering for her ahead. Even if you made her effectively immortal and immune to harm (instead death only) from caused incident, she will be effectively invulnerable to anything but ageing, but can also backfire greatly. |
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| [b]Chapter 25 – Introductions Tears. Those were the first things I felt as soon as I turned to face the voice I heard. There she was, safe and sound. My cute little sister was okay. ”So you become a big deal and you don't even come look for your sister first chance you get? What kind of big broth-” I fell down to the ground on my knees as I started crying louder. I was so happy to see my sister unharmed, but my depression didn't let me enjoy this happiness to the fullest which made me cry like an idiot. I heard Aza sigh before she kneeled down in front of me and hugged me. ”I missed you...you have a lot to tell me after we're out of here...now let me draw something good for you” She gave me a kiss on the forehead as the old man gave her a pencil and a sheet. It took a while, but Aza drew the crest. Monster Den Crest Before we could leave the man gave us some final information. “Dio is officially the Leader of the guild and currently the only member. To register yourself in the guild you simply need the Leader's approval. At the guild itself there is a list on which all the member names will be written down, so once you someone writes their name on it with the Leaders approval, that person will be officially a member. Then there are the positions: 1 Leader, 1 Co-Leader, 1 Guild Manager, 20 Commanders, 5 Officers and an unlimited amount of members.” I just nodded and waved him goodbye as I left the cabin, Aza holding onto my hand as we heard the man say one last thing. “Feel free to make your name big any way you like!” I got home as I was still holding Aza's hand. I had gotten here barely before sundown like I promised and took a deep breath. “There's a few people for you to meet in here...” ”I know...I heard them when we last talked over the crystal” I slowly opened the door and walked in with Aza. Eva was cooking for everyone and didn't seem too happy from seeing me bring a girl she didn't know. While Eva cooked Nelly prepared the dishes. Talia was sitting on the couch with Sadie in her arms and still looked depressed. The rest of the girls were in their rooms. ”Who might that be?...” ”Another Lover?...” “Well...I'd like all of you to meet my little sister...Aza...” Their anger soon turned to happiness as they greeted her. ”Hellooooo!” ”Nice to meet you!” ”Nice to meet...you...” “The dragon girl with the scales is Evangelin. She can be mean sometimes, but she's rally kindhearted most of the time. The girl with the snake-like body is Nelly, I'm sure you'll get along” I giggled as Aza's shy side was showing again and walked her to Talia who was holding the sleeping Sadie. “This is Talia and Sadie...Talia lost her memory...Sadie...Sadie's her and my daughter” ”Nice to meet you...” ”Nice to meet you too” I was surprised that Aza wasn't getting mad from the fact I have a daughter, but I didn't say a word. I showed her to her room, then we were called to eat dinner. Everyone sat at the table and I introduced everyone to Aza. We hadn't had such a lively dinner for a while, but there was obviously still sadness. After dinner the night was short. Everyone went to bed soon. Eva slept by my side and Talia, even though she was obviously still scared, insisted on doing the same. Nelly slept in her room that night and I planned on just falling asleep and starting the guild the next day, but before I could fall asleep I heard the door open. Aza came in holding onto her pillow and lied down between me and Eva. ”I missed you...” “I missed you too” I smiled as she held on to my and we both fell asleep. Next thing I remember was waking up with the sun hitting my face. I looked down and saw two of the cutest things I knew. On one side Aza was sleeping with half of her body on top of me and some drool dripping from her mouth on my shirt. On the other side Talia was holding on to my arm, resting her head on my shoulder. I then looked around a bit to see Eva still sleeping, snoring softly as she was holding onto her pillow. “Hey sleepyheads, rise and shine” First girl to open her eyes was Talia. She blushed as soon as she noticed she was clinging on to me and let go of me, hesitating for a while, but then kissing me softly. ”Good Morning...” Next girl to wake up was Aza. She looked at me with a still half asleep look as she stood up and yawned. ”What's for breakfast?...” Lastly Eva clung on to me as soon as she got a chance and burried my face in her breasts, energetic as always. ”Good Morning!” Next Chapter - Monster Den |
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| I am looking forward to see how are you going to deal with the outcome of your wishes. They were made in haste, were barely thought out and have a huge potential to create more problems that they can ever solve. |
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