| Well its no fun if there's no climax ;) |
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greatgreenman said: Well its no fun if there's no climax ;) Spoken like a certain Sphinx, GGM. };) And truly, thanks for all of the wonderful compliments! I've mentioned before that this is story is my first time writing in the eroge style, and the first h-scene in Sun Garden is literally the first h-scene I ever wrote. It's nice to hear that I got stuff right! |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
tygertyger said: Shit... who told you :S?Spoken like a certain Sphinx, GGM. };) lol Seemed alright, I typically skim through the h-scene. Enough to know what went down and it sounded natural without focusing too much on the details lol. I don't wanna watch you guys screw X.X..... but I will peek :3 lol |
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tygertyger said: I blew Aziza a kiss and said, “Meep, meep!” Then I dashed off to my next station. lol ah classic |
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| I made you such an awesome, extra-long special comment, and you didn't even bother to carry it over. I'm hurt tyger, I'm hurt. Ehh, instead I'll leave this tribute here to the one and only......the two and only Nefret and Bahiti, now go make a h-scene for the twins. |
KamikadzeTMAug 8, 2014 5:53 AM
| Nice! And I must admit that I'm stumped by that riddle! |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
| That's because that riddle is more like a koan...there can be no REAL answer unless you transcend reality. But screw that...I'd rather be one with two than one with everything. =P |
| I need to post a comment here. I wanted to say this since I finished reading your story, a lot of time ago. But, it's awesome! I can't find words to describe how much I enjoyed reading you. Your characters, the plot, the descriptions... You've written something very special, and I wanted you to know that it has arrived me to the heart. Loved your story, tyger. |
| Angels, they fell first but I'm still here Alone as they are drawing near In heaven my masterpiece will finally be sung |
| One of the best stories I've read so far! There are many wonderful stories around, at least those I've read so far, but this one really stands out in how it feels when I read it. It's truly amazing how complete, thought through and yet easy to read this story is! Truly, it is a work of the true professional, I admire you! I still have to think how many hidden references I missed though, as there must be plenty. |
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| Took a while for me to read through it but I manage and I just have to agree with the others. Fun to read, never got that sleepy feeling I get when I read books and so many refernces and i saw them all. :D Since I know you are a real writter I can tell you on thing, you are the only one who manage to get me back to read though it all. Because most of the time I just skip them if I didn't like em. Don't think there is anything else I wanna say other than it was a great story. |
Carn0 said: Took a while for me to read through it I'm not surprised. I did a word count on this story and it comes out to the length of a short novel. So to those who don't normally read novels, kudos for getting through this one! Thanks for all the compliments! I'm glad that you enjoyed my story, and rest assured that there is a sequel in the works. And I have not forgotten my promise to work in an h-scene with the twins! |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
| And now for something not so different. Pictures of my lovely brides! First Aneksi ready for work... http://love-in-sepia.deviantart.com/art/My-Avatar-Votre-Femme-Fatale-146580137 ...and then Beset ready for bed! https://www.pinterest.com/pin/490048003174501633/ |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
tygertyger said: And now for something not so different. Pictures of my lovely brides! First Aneksi ready for work... http://love-in-sepia.deviantart.com/art/My-Avatar-Votre-Femme-Fatale-146580137 ...and then Beset ready for bed! https://www.pinterest.com/pin/490048003174501633/ Nice to have some pictures with the story :-) |
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