Hi, dont be discouraged by seeing negative reactions to your review. That tends to happen for anyone who writes too early for a new anime(and i sort of agree with this).
I voted your review not-helpful but I wanted to leave constructive criticism as well, you often make assumptions on the reader(from their personal life to assuming they're familiar with everything you reference and compare to) and your narrative and explanation tends to be rambling, i.e. you don't make any real comments on many things and don't adequately bring out the merits and shortcomings of the series. You also do the dreaded "synopsis" in a review when commenting on a story which tends to make people skip over. :(
I really hope you don't mind me saying too many negative things. i just wanted to pass along feedback to a first time writer.
Ya I hated how twilight ruined the vampire love genre. What they did wrong is playing down the nature of seeing humans its food. That could of been great for romantic conflict but nope they tried to make them perfect which fails!
Thanks for letting me know and I gotta ask since I'm getting what people think about this.What do you think of romantizing vampires? To me its a mix bag as I'm all go for new ideas like how zombies is going when it comes to comedy but so far its proven to be a bad idea since twilight came with some few exception.
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I voted your review not-helpful but I wanted to leave constructive criticism as well, you often make assumptions on the reader(from their personal life to assuming they're familiar with everything you reference and compare to) and your narrative and explanation tends to be rambling, i.e. you don't make any real comments on many things and don't adequately bring out the merits and shortcomings of the series. You also do the dreaded "synopsis" in a review when commenting on a story which tends to make people skip over. :(
I really hope you don't mind me saying too many negative things. i just wanted to pass along feedback to a first time writer.