No, leave your BRS review alone. It's already said and done. It's best to use that as an example of some of your earlier works. Think of it as "nostalgic motivation." You can view it as the first of a long line of continually improving reviews.
Your review on Black Rock Shooter raised some concerns for me.
What did I just read?
Nothing too serious, but I feel that your review isn't very explanatory. Many times in your review you tell the reader to simply watch the anime to understand what the anime wants to say, but why take your word for it if you can't even tell us yourself? You need to be more descriptive and detailed with your review if you want people to take your word as one who actually watched and payed attention to the subject. Keep this in mind.
Not something I normally touch on, but the review was also quite short. Length isn't exactly an issue with reviews as long as the format and content is complete, but yours felt a little rushed. This may tie in with the fact that you weren't very descriptive, but regardless, your review in a nutshell in my mind simply screams "incomplete."
Hopefully if you continue to review you can fix these things up. You're on the right track, and I feel some potential from your train of thought, but you need to gather the facts and use them effectively. Until then, happy reviewing!
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What did I just read?
Nothing too serious, but I feel that your review isn't very explanatory. Many times in your review you tell the reader to simply watch the anime to understand what the anime wants to say, but why take your word for it if you can't even tell us yourself? You need to be more descriptive and detailed with your review if you want people to take your word as one who actually watched and payed attention to the subject. Keep this in mind.
Not something I normally touch on, but the review was also quite short. Length isn't exactly an issue with reviews as long as the format and content is complete, but yours felt a little rushed. This may tie in with the fact that you weren't very descriptive, but regardless, your review in a nutshell in my mind simply screams "incomplete."
Hopefully if you continue to review you can fix these things up. You're on the right track, and I feel some potential from your train of thought, but you need to gather the facts and use them effectively. Until then, happy reviewing!