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Kaguya-sama wa Kokurasetai: Tensai-tachi no Renai Zunousen
Apr 18, 2019 4:39 AM
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12/12
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Fate/stay night Movie: Heaven's Feel - II. Lost Butterfly
Apr 18, 2019 4:38 AM
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1/1
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Yahari Ore no Seishun Love Comedy wa Machigatteiru. Kan
Apr 18, 2019 4:33 AM
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All Manga Stats Manga Stats
Days: 139.2
Mean Score:
7.23
- Reading143
- Completed109
- On-Hold10
- Dropped48
- Plan to Read3
- Total Entries313
- Reread0
- Chapters25,022
- Volumes421
All Comments (24) Comments
On a side note...
First, in the following passage, you claim JS follows a formulaic episodic structure:
"Basically: A person is abused or wronged by someone else who is unapologetic and is unable to see their own acts as unjustified. The victim seeks a solution and calls upon Ai for help. However, they hesitate when she reveals that they too would be dragged down into hell when they died. In the end though, the victims are driven to the point of desperation by their tormentors and give in. Jigoku shoujo then proceeds to carry out the revenge. Evil person is sent to hell. Former victim is emancipated, but each look at the scar that appears on their chest as a reminder of what will happen to them when they die.
There. Shoot me. I just spoiled at least 20 episodes for you."
While on one hand this is debatably an incomplete analysis of the show's structure, more importantly the structure you outline cannot be reasonably applied to "at least 20 episodes". I already detailed in my original message that 4 episodes do not even roughly fit this mold, and from episode 14 onwards the story of each episode becomes more about the Shibatas and less about each episode's characters so your proposed structure becomes completely inapplicable.
I do respect that you admitted to skipping 15 episodes, but then that brings me to a second problem with your review that I did not notice until revisting it recently- You have only watched 11 episodes of JS, but you have marked yourself as having watched all 26. I do not know the exact workings of MyAnimeList, but as far as I can tell anime reviews are given extra attention by the site's algorithms when the reviewer claims to have watched the entire show.
As is, your review is inaccurate. I suggest you edit it in order to remove the inaccuracy- first I would recommend amending your MAL Anime List to reflect the fact that you have only watched 11 episode of JS, and then I would recommend heavily editing the passage I quoted above in order to, at the very least, clearly show that your assumption of this structure was not correct but came from the similarities you found in the first 4 episodes.
Despite what I admit is a rather blunt critique of your work that I have given here, I nonetheless respect you. You not only have committed your time to articulating your opinions in the best way you can, but you also gave an extensive reply to a stranger giving an unsolicited opinion on your 9-year-old writing. You are obviously a very cool person, I wish you all the best.
Mind you, I have only watched up until Episode 13 so far, so it may very well be that the show continues to break formula and create more differently-formulated episodes, I do not know. Your decision to skip Episodes 5-19 has given you and everyone who trusts your review an extremely-incorrect impression of Jigoku Shoujo, and this is especially harmful because your review is the second-most highly-rated review for that anime. I do not begrudge you your personal taste, but I do hope you will consider amending your review to correct your factually-inaccurate appraisal of the episodic nature of the show.
much true
very bad WOW!