Hi! I read your manga. It was pretty cool and I like it. But I think it is somewhat too wordy. Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the next chapters. :D
I just read your manga, it's very good.
But I think there are some little things you can improve, in a couple of panels I felt the proportions and poses a little weird, for example, the first fullpage where she's suppose to be running, looks kind of static; and one of the scenes when she is talking on phone, looks like you tried to make it seen from above, but it doesn't look very well. For last, it's my own opinion you can ignore it if you want, but you re using too much this tone, and I think it's not accurate at all for clothes.
I'm waiting to see how does Momo change the school, good job!
Hey I just read your Manga that you made with your sister and it's AMAZING.. WOW everything looks so clean and good. Also the drawings are very professional like. The only small complaint I have is the font is to big for the bubble. I do typesetting in a group and I know how hard it is ^. But otherwise I look forward to reading more :D
Hi there, I read your manga and it was really good. I started laughing when the delinquents confronted each other. Ninjas and samurais were the last thing I was expecting coming from thugs.
Hi! I've seen you are in ''The Drawing Club'', but it has been innactive for a long time, so maybe you would like to give a try at this other club: Mangaka Desu!
All Comments (13) Comments
you can use this symbolic badge in your profile to show the world your achievements.
But I think there are some little things you can improve, in a couple of panels I felt the proportions and poses a little weird, for example, the first fullpage where she's suppose to be running, looks kind of static; and one of the scenes when she is talking on phone, looks like you tried to make it seen from above, but it doesn't look very well. For last, it's my own opinion you can ignore it if you want, but you re using too much this tone, and I think it's not accurate at all for clothes.
I'm waiting to see how does Momo change the school, good job!
Please, introduce yourself here to the other members.
You can take part in our current activities: Character & background , Best manga you have ever read .
And you can claim for your own personalized club member card .
Hi.