Wow, it's been a while~
Kinda liking it so far, but I made the mistake of seeing the fourth episode just before the third.
Finding it a bit dramatic and heavy, but I like this kind of direction (realistic and dramatized at the same time, not unlike Yesterday wo Utatte or White Album, maybe Hyouka and OreGairu too).
Plus the sport is one of the few that I genuinely like. I like tennis, badminton and ping-pong all with the same love, because they are dynamic sports that can be played individually. Well, I dislike them when it's about playing in team, but I understand that in a show teaming helps for drama.
xD no it was my review that I copied then pasted x)
Finally I didn't ask him anything, the only stuff that almost inspired me that much was "she innocently asks me" because the innocent picturation of Yukino is something unseen and it's interesting for further writing...
Okay, so save for the pararaphs' lenghts which are too often jumped, this was an awesome read. I recommended it to some friend into yuri but this was perfection. I guess how erotic and passionful it is makes it enjoyable if you're predisposed for yuri, and thus for both genders.
And also, well, those characteristics from Yui and Yukino are so unseen (I've read some fanfictions of this fandom, at least fifty...) that I kind of want to ask you on private message some things :p
If I was to rate it on characteristics then on average it would be then with the following graduation :
Enjoyment : 9/10, we need many more fanfictions like this, I kind of want to write some now...
Vocabulary : 7/10, there were a few words I picked up and interesting formulations, such as "jolt"
Style : 8/10, can't really be measured yet it's as enjoyable as light yet filled with little comments.
Story / Plot : 7/10 Well, four plots in a fiction, above average, shower so perfect.
Average : 7,7/10, you are an author worth reading and I'm gonna investigate to see if I follow you.
-- Now end of review and some sort of ps : Except I forgot to add something about paragraph lenght, you must do shift+enter as on Word to have nice formed paragraphs, but this is a minor detail. You must click on the number of reviews (in blue normally) to see them.
Read the review I wrote, I rated it 7,7 (though mines are really bad fanfictions, and also he's done one more yuri fanfiction on my fandom Oregairu :w :p
I wanted to ask you something else, because you specially are French. Let's say my sister is 23-24 years-old and for her birthday (in two days) I bought her a manga, do you think she'd like it?
She's the kind of average girl in France I suppose, it means she likes music (Booba/JuL, rap and not nightcore at all), she wears make-up, she loves to buy clothes, she watches tv series such as Les Feux de L'amour and movies...
Would she like the Attack on Titan manga? Is there a way? How did you discover manga and anime?
Heeey, I know it's been at least a month, but I wanted to know : as you did watch Saki, is it an awesome anime? Because I watch it for the mahjong part, but the pinkhaired girl is actually wonderful and there is hint of yuri.
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Kinda liking it so far, but I made the mistake of seeing the fourth episode just before the third.
Finding it a bit dramatic and heavy, but I like this kind of direction (realistic and dramatized at the same time, not unlike Yesterday wo Utatte or White Album, maybe Hyouka and OreGairu too).
Plus the sport is one of the few that I genuinely like. I like tennis, badminton and ping-pong all with the same love, because they are dynamic sports that can be played individually. Well, I dislike them when it's about playing in team, but I understand that in a show teaming helps for drama.
HAPPY NEW YEAR,
Have an excellent time this year and my best of blisses
And off topic but, do you play Pokemon?
Finally I didn't ask him anything, the only stuff that almost inspired me that much was "she innocently asks me" because the innocent picturation of Yukino is something unseen and it's interesting for further writing...
And also, well, those characteristics from Yui and Yukino are so unseen (I've read some fanfictions of this fandom, at least fifty...) that I kind of want to ask you on private message some things :p
If I was to rate it on characteristics then on average it would be then with the following graduation :
Enjoyment : 9/10, we need many more fanfictions like this, I kind of want to write some now...
Vocabulary : 7/10, there were a few words I picked up and interesting formulations, such as "jolt"
Style : 8/10, can't really be measured yet it's as enjoyable as light yet filled with little comments.
Story / Plot : 7/10 Well, four plots in a fiction, above average, shower so perfect.
Average : 7,7/10, you are an author worth reading and I'm gonna investigate to see if I follow you.
-- Now end of review and some sort of ps : Except I forgot to add something about paragraph lenght, you must do shift+enter as on Word to have nice formed paragraphs, but this is a minor detail. You must click on the number of reviews (in blue normally) to see them.
has 3000 of it :p
It's a yuri fanfiction (not from me) of my favourite anime so you may like it :p
She's the kind of average girl in France I suppose, it means she likes music (Booba/JuL, rap and not nightcore at all), she wears make-up, she loves to buy clothes, she watches tv series such as Les Feux de L'amour and movies...
Would she like the Attack on Titan manga? Is there a way? How did you discover manga and anime?
Le Lennon de ton coeur
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=7J_MkejRAu0
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