I go by the username Prind or any other place that people know me will call me Prind. I have recently gotten addicted to animes once again. I'm watching so many different series of anime at one time that it's mind blowing. I hate watching stream anime due to the lack of quality and that's why I download most of my anime, don't ask where :3.
The construction of the whole thing was a little off. To sound more professional, I would suggest you not put all of the necessary scoring categories in one box then just write a quick summary afterwards. Tell the reader what you thought of each individual category. Did you like the art? Why? What was so great/terrible about it? And so on.
I also noticed with the quick summary, you didn't really give much of the plot away, which is good, but you have to make a conscious effort to give at least a summary of the anime. All I remember is you explaining how similar it was to ./hack, but not everyone knows what ./hack is. I'd also like to see how explanatory you can make each of these categories in your own way. As my sixth grade English teacher used to tell me: "Tell me more, tell me more, tell me more!" Describe why SAO deserves a ten. Convince the reader why they should definitely give the anime a try. Work at that a little, and I'm sure your reviews will look fantastic in no time. I hope to read more of your reviews in the future.
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The construction of the whole thing was a little off. To sound more professional, I would suggest you not put all of the necessary scoring categories in one box then just write a quick summary afterwards. Tell the reader what you thought of each individual category. Did you like the art? Why? What was so great/terrible about it? And so on.
I also noticed with the quick summary, you didn't really give much of the plot away, which is good, but you have to make a conscious effort to give at least a summary of the anime. All I remember is you explaining how similar it was to ./hack, but not everyone knows what ./hack is. I'd also like to see how explanatory you can make each of these categories in your own way. As my sixth grade English teacher used to tell me: "Tell me more, tell me more, tell me more!" Describe why SAO deserves a ten. Convince the reader why they should definitely give the anime a try. Work at that a little, and I'm sure your reviews will look fantastic in no time. I hope to read more of your reviews in the future.
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