Your btoom review is good (Y)
but to me, the "story" part was a bit too long. I mean you don't need to write the whole review and express more of your thoughts of the anime.
Baccano is definitely a must watch. If you don't finish it, you'll never know why.
Strange, I don't know why it would do that. The server acts up from time-to-time I guess... Since my anime list states didn't update for at least a month or so. It's still a secure site either way.
Definitely do continue GTO since it is worth it. You think you've got a long line of episodes to watch? Be very afraid of mine. Better yet, there are other people's plan-to-watch list that even I'm afraid of.
Just hit the reply button under the comments and it should open up a box for you to reply in. I just found about it recently and is very helpful. I'm just assuming that you don't know, I apologize if you already knew. You never said sorry before, so no need to add "again" to your apology.
While I'm already here, I'll recommend you my masterpiece anime. Baccano! This is the only anime currently holding a score of 10 out of 10 from me. It might be a bit confusing at the start but is sure to clear up everything by the end of the story. It's a short 13 episodes with 3 special episodes that don't have to be seen to understand the story since it continues after the conclusion of the plot.
I just looked through your anime list and have to say, why did you drop Great Teacher Onizuka? It's a classic that has to been seen.
good job on Mirai Nikki review but it contained spoilers but keep trying and never give up.your review made me want to watch it even more that's what reviews spouse to do :3
Hello. I'm just passing by after reading your review of Mirai Nikki. I had a tough time reading it since everything was so cramped together.
I recommend you to put spaces after commas and full stops to ease that problem. I think expanding on your reasons would be a good idea, but please paragraph them since a massive blob of writing is a pain to read -- worse with no spaces after commas and full stops. I'm just curious, but what do you mean by "graphically?"
I'll have the same thing written here without spaces after full stops etc.
Hello.I'm just passing by after reading your review of Mirai Nikki.I had a tough time reading it since everything was so cramped together.
I recommend you to put spaces after commas and full stops to ease that problem.I think expanding on your reasons would be a good idea,but please paragraph them since a massive blob of writing is a pain to read --worse with no spaces after commas and full stops.I'm just curious,but what do you mean by "graphically?"
Imagine what it feels like to read a slab of writing like this.
Hey,
Your Mirai Nikki review contains major spoilers.
Now imagine…
Mirai Nikki (TV)
Plan to Watch: 25,218
Do you understand what I mean?
I don’t want offense you or smth. I just want to help you.
If you want to continue writing reviews this post will help you to write better works. (http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=575725)
Good luck.
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but to me, the "story" part was a bit too long. I mean you don't need to write the whole review and express more of your thoughts of the anime.
keep it up!
Im a begginer in making review so i dont mind being criticized and Im also new to MAL so i got alot the check on.
Strange, I don't know why it would do that. The server acts up from time-to-time I guess... Since my anime list states didn't update for at least a month or so. It's still a secure site either way.
Definitely do continue GTO since it is worth it. You think you've got a long line of episodes to watch? Be very afraid of mine. Better yet, there are other people's plan-to-watch list that even I'm afraid of.
You're welcome :)
While I'm already here, I'll recommend you my masterpiece anime. Baccano! This is the only anime currently holding a score of 10 out of 10 from me. It might be a bit confusing at the start but is sure to clear up everything by the end of the story. It's a short 13 episodes with 3 special episodes that don't have to be seen to understand the story since it continues after the conclusion of the plot.
I just looked through your anime list and have to say, why did you drop Great Teacher Onizuka? It's a classic that has to been seen.
I never said anything about spoilers.
I recommend you to put spaces after commas and full stops to ease that problem. I think expanding on your reasons would be a good idea, but please paragraph them since a massive blob of writing is a pain to read -- worse with no spaces after commas and full stops. I'm just curious, but what do you mean by "graphically?"
I'll have the same thing written here without spaces after full stops etc.