A programmer in training. Currently pursuing a college degree in computer science. Wishes he could bring his dog to college. Leans more towards seinen works.
...you deleted the review that I wanted to criticize....
Ah, well. Let me just read up on your Baccano! review.
Mmm. It's got an interesting hook. I really liked the description you gave in the first three paragraphs... and it all went downhill from there. Only a short paragraph about characters and sound. Really? Why not cover all of them? You could say so much more than just a couple sentences about each topic of an anime. TELL ME MORE, TELL ME MORE, TELL ME MORE! Be more descriptive! When you are, your reviews are interesting! When you're not... you look lazy. Everything else is fine (except grammar, and some of these irrelevant parenthesis), you just need to be more willing to type more in your reviews. Like, why are the characters great? Why should they be fleshed out more? Why is the art realistic? Why is the show accurately depicted as the typical American mafia flick? Why, why, why? Keep working at it, buddy.
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Ah, well. Let me just read up on your Baccano! review.
Mmm. It's got an interesting hook. I really liked the description you gave in the first three paragraphs... and it all went downhill from there. Only a short paragraph about characters and sound. Really? Why not cover all of them? You could say so much more than just a couple sentences about each topic of an anime. TELL ME MORE, TELL ME MORE, TELL ME MORE! Be more descriptive! When you are, your reviews are interesting! When you're not... you look lazy. Everything else is fine (except grammar, and some of these irrelevant parenthesis), you just need to be more willing to type more in your reviews. Like, why are the characters great? Why should they be fleshed out more? Why is the art realistic? Why is the show accurately depicted as the typical American mafia flick? Why, why, why? Keep working at it, buddy.
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