Even for an amateur writer and a intermediate reader, it's pretty clear when the words of a story have little connection with the main themes whether they are the foundation of a metafictional work or an usual writing. This detachment feeling shows its colors in any kind of work that tries to grab more than it can. I mean Zaregoto vol. 8 and probably another piece of fiction that didn't cross my mind in this single moment of reflection. Now, I don't think there is anything wrong with aiming further in concepts and ideas whether preemptively or after the creation scope is constructed. It's just that anything that - even slightly - looks and tries to be a social commentary with a meta approach will be pretentious by nature. Especially when crafted through multiple arcs and volumes. The result is a complete detachment from the words, which are the base and foundation of your script. Not only, but also the wait for something way above its payoff - which will probably not be on the same level of the concept, not saying it's of a questionable quality, just that it will rarely reach a closure that fits to its metacommentary. With this all said, I still believe that it's possible and plausible to create a theme of fitting complexity without breaking the ties of writer-reader.
Thought my gang needed a little bit cuteness XD I think Sakutaro is just as cool as the others though, fighting Erika and Kanon for Maria's sake as if it were nothing. I like that he's the type of person to show bravery even if the scary situation pushes him to the edge of peeing himself
That bed in Penguindrum... I was almost going to get angry at the ending because it didn't show them together, but post credits frame!! I'll let you know about F17. May take some time to get to haha Just doing mydaily prayers to RedInfinity.
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That bed in Penguindrum... I was almost going to get angry at the ending because it didn't show them together, but post credits frame!! I'll let you know about F17. May take some time to get to haha Just doing mydaily prayers to RedInfinity.