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Hello, this is regarding your application for entry into Quiet Discourse. You've been accepted! Please be acquainted with the QD: Club Outline and QD: Club Policies if you aren't already. Also be sure to check out #qd on the Rizon IRC network for chat. We're happy to have you on board, and we're looking forward to seeing you contribute to QD.

On your sample: good stuff! I can see you put a lot of effort into it. One thing I can suggest which would help your argument is to detail what makes Saver your favorite. (What about it makes the tale "gripping"? Is the setting well-developed? The art?, etc.)