I read the first chapter of your story and it was pretty good. I am sorry to say I did see about two grammatical errors and while not a fan of vampire stories I would rate the prologue+chapter one 6/10, based souly on those parts. (As a side note I generally like anything 5+, and I even don't consider 4's that bad.) Do you still want to collaborate?
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Hm, what would be a good subject?
Ah...okay.
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