May 11, 2021
Honestly I'm quite surprised that nobody's written a review for this? so I thought I might write one. It's a short, but quite perverted age gap Yuri that is quite engrossing but has questionable moments and themes. This is also the 1st part of 2 of this work's story.
//Spoilers likely//
Story: 5
The story starts off at every Schoolgirl's nightmare location... the Train!. And yes sure enough our MC Misa feels a hand touching her somewhere inappropriate. While contemplating what to do about this, she is also somewhat puzzled. This hand... feels different... but eventually Misa gathers strength and turns to confront her molester, only to find
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out... It's a Woman!. The Woman whispers something to Misa, then gets off at her stop, leaving Misa rattled.
Misa then ponders over the encounter and it's meaning all the way through School, even letting her own imagination run wild, which leads her to touch herself during class.
Another day begins with Misa on her usual Train. Only this time... Misa WANTS to encounter that Woman again, but that couldn't happen again right?. Sure enough, Misa encounters her again, only this time the Woman leads Misa to... A Love Hotel! and err...well what happens after that is for you to find out!.
Art: 7
Art is nice for the most part. High points for the clothing detail especially, it's amazing. Misa looks very cute and innocent looking, however I do have a big problem with her hair. I think it needs a lot more shading to it, as it practically matches her skin's colour. Her molester is better drawn and looks beautiful and very unsuspecting. Background is a little on the minimum, but enough to understand the setting and situations.
Character: 6
I'm only going to put Misa, as her molester is not yet fully revealed and would be a spoiler.
Misa just seems your typical Schoolgirl just wanting to make it to and from School without any hassles. Although it seems she has an active imagination and is clearly open about the idea of sex, but is maybe a little young and inexperienced to fully grasp and understand it.
There is no other major characters other than the molester. Everyone else that's featured are background characters.
Enjoyment: 5 & Overall: 10
There's quite the gap between points here isn't there?!, hopefully I can try to explain why this is.
I don't enjoy anyone touching without the other party's consent, especially when it's a much younger girl that's getting taken advantage of, and Misa is a little roughly treated at times. It's not... too unsettling, but it still a little sus.
That said though, there's just something about Misa's molester, SHE KNOWS WHAT SHE WANTS!
and just her sheer brazenness is really quite something.
I've come back and reread this quite a few times because... it's just so different to other things I've read and I enjoy it, but I don't know why...?
Also yes, this work is quite Ecchi with a solo sex act, but it's not Hentai level, just very heavy Ecchi I'd say.
Hard to say recommend or not? as again the theme itself is very questionable. But if it's something you can put aside as the fiction that it is then go for it!
Reviewer’s Rating: 10
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