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Is this what dares are between friends nowadays? I could probably like this if this was the case!. Can't tell if he was motivated or demotivated after that though?!.
This was seriously one of the shortest and Little-Dialogue things I think I've ever read. Im gonna try my hardest to not spoil, but trust me on this, it kinda difficult.

So...here goes! //Spoiler warning possibly?//



Story: 2

The story is very simple, a (unnamed) male and a female Schoolmate obviously placed a dare (or bet, whatever word you want to use) on eachother's test scores at School, with the loser having to go through a punishiment of sorts. And ... well...you can maybe tell what that punishment is from the title...



Art: 4

Going to give this average to low... It's kinda nice, almost watercolor effect, nice that it's all in colour. But it's also a little basic with the surroundings and even the girl... you can't even see her face! the rest of her look fine though. The boy looks fine but a little lacking in character and distinction.



Character(s) 1

Err...what characters? there's a boy and a girl. They have no names and all we see of the girl is the back of her.
I...really can't say any much more than this! they don't give any clues to anything about themselves or even their exact relationship with eachother.



Enjoyment 3: & Overall: 4


Definitely more backstory and info would have helped this, as you are just thrown straight in there. I also, for some reason really stumbled on what dialogue there was, it was just really awkward and didn't flow so well. But I guess it was fairly cute and a interesting idea, a rather different take on the dare/bet troupe. I also would have liked this to be longer, but got it's main points across I guess.