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Systems_Jun 18, 2010 6:26 PM
| ok ok comedy huh |
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| start it up :p wut kind of comedy u wana make? like school or sumthin :pp |
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| hmm i was just thinking a slice of life type, which could include school |
| ok ok dats cool.... now now wut u wana do girls only or with guys or sumthin like dat |
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| maybe like two guys and their adventures of normal city life |
| yeah like fail womanizing? or sumthin like dat? |
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| that could be good for a couple of their stories, like doing normal random stuff and once in a while trips :P |
| yeah and like wut more :p how do dey meet like childhood friends or like their both otakus or sumthin like dat :pp |
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| just to be clear, we are doing a 4 panel type? :P |
| yeah i know :p at least let em know dat their some kind of buddies right? |
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| im sure we could just pull it off that way, maybe make a prelude to explain alittle. childhood friends works |
| black and white should be good |
| ok ok... den we need a trademark :p |
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| you mean like a catch phrase or something that happens alot? |
| like the thing that he usually says like me i usually say "pretty much" right ? hmmm comedy.... i think i dunno bout dat is kinda cool |
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| we'll work in the catchphrase, lets try for something universal |
| hmmm ok leme think on sumthing else u too :pp sumthing unusual :ppp dat only him says it :p |
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| "I know"? its like wenever he enters an conversation and he doesnt know wut their talkin about and he says "I know" if dey ask him or sumthing like dat not just a word sumthing dat he will do wenever he gets shy or sumthin :ppp |
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| ok so finally on topic, what about our first chap, what type of story. i had an idea |
| ok im thinkin about mine :p and at ur story we need a joke |
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| yea i thought that over :P didnt seem as funny after written down. the guy gave them an expired coupon was suppose to be the punchline |
| yeah wait im gathering info by reading mangas |
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| ok ok i think i know mine at the start... the other guy pull an all nighter and the other guy ask him and he said he pulled an all nighter for theexam... the other guy didnt know there was an exam and panicks. the test starts... 2nd part... the other guy who didnt studied got f for all.. and then he ask his friend wut did he got... he showed his buddy dat he got an 4 f and 1 d and his friend asked why?he told him dat he concentrated too much on 1 subject..... |
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| thats not bad at all. we can work on that story if wez agree :D |
| :ppp hmmm wait lets think up more stories :ppp ur turn next :ppp |
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| i think after his buddy said dat he concentrated on 1 subject he should say.. "I DUNNO ABOUT THAT" |
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| hmmm, im not creative tonight. how about we work one block at a time lol, make it more coherent. put up another story if you have it |
| ok den :p hmmm i got sumthin wait |
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| Ok heres another one.... the other guy is askin his buddy to ditch school... and his buddy(the looks intelligent but actually dumb guy) said dat they got an exam today rain or shine... the other guy said that their good... why? the other guy ask... BECAUSE ITS SNOWING OUTSIDE... :ppppp the intelligent looking guy said I dunno about dat :pppp |
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| i dunno about dat catchphrase lol. stories first k :P not bad good idea |
| the carefree guy ask his buddy why hes trying so hard to study... the intelligent looking guy said dat its his dream to be ride a boat overseas... the carefree guy wondering and said How? the other guy said,, I HEARD OUR TEACHER SAID DAT WE CAN HAVE A FREE SCHOLARSHIP IF WE GET GUD GRADES... :p the carefree guy said... I DUNNO ABOUT THAT! :pp so wutcha think? |
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| they are lol stories :P we should use this one not close to the other one lol you can also do out of school too |
| yeah im thinkin about dat :ppp so wut are we gona use? |
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| we could use all but different weeks? we can keep planning tmwr too b4 we're concrete on a story for the first one |
| yeah.... so u think we merged 2 stories into chapter 1? cause they seem short :P |
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| trust me, 4 panels is more then you think. ok how bout we pick this up tmwr, i wants to watch a little tonight k :P |
| sure ok lets stop for now :p |
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| picks up where left off. Do we want to use one of these or make some more stories then pick :P |
| its up to you... afterall from wut i know the big guy decides wut to use and if u wana know mroe about manga and stuff to do u should read bakuman :p read it :p its just like us |
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| i suppose i should get more employees lol i suppose a couple more story lines wouldnt hurt, plus we can use these later on |
| ok leme summarize some up :p thinking of more now :pppp |
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| kk, im dead on creativity right now. |
| ok wait wait... |
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| we need a name for this 4 panel. |
| hmm ok i think uhh.... maybe well think about it if we got the story we want :p and oh wut do u think of our catchphrase :p I DUNNO ABOUT THAT! |
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| catchphrase can wait a bit till we choose a story first lol |
| ok ok.. its really hard to think about it :p just give me time loaf around 1st il lthink for more stories :p |
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| ok here goes for today.... the cheerful guy is actually down and depress an his buddy ask him wuts the reason... the cheerful guy said dat he wants girlfriend. the (intelligent looking but actually dumb guy) said dat dont worry based from wut i read in terms of love wut u need is chemistry.. and the cheerful guy replied. dats why wer treated like toxic waste huh? the other guy said I DUNNO ABOUT THAT! :p dont know if u like it but ill post another one :p ill just eat 1st |
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| could replace toxic waste with something closer to chemistry lol calm down with the catch phrase lol |
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