| lol... getting scolded for getting in too trouble with no intent to do so. I'm still going with "in the calm seas swims the ugliest". When mdude is done with this story and there are no death or disformed things only then have ya convinced me. Plus this is only da beginning. |
| This sort of thing is like 80% of why I made that badass Kaori general an orc. Sometimes I think we all need to see a cute girl with a trunk full of junk that can also kick some ass. I wonder what she can really blame you for here...Relieving yourself? Not screaming faster? And then how is she going to mete out justice for said crime? I like this wolfie, and not just because she seems to get excited about "nerd" work. |
beast_regards said: Mdude is starting to be "normal" again, all mamono are turning into ugly and badly disfigured creatures which lost all their exotic beauty It is fair to expect their aggressiveness and bloodthirsty nature will only increase in following chapters. I guess it cannot be helped. It is definitely mdude as we known him, just teasing us. But the orcs were neither ugly not murderous, just horny with low-classed manners of speaking. |
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mdude009 said: But the orcs were neither ugly not murderous, just horny with low-classed manners of speaking. I imagined them like this (minus Kalasnikovs) when you mentioned snouts. |
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beast_regards said: I imagined them like this (minus Kalasnikovs) when you mentioned snouts. Like that but cuter, I hope! |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
| the only mutant variety so far is the 6 tig old bitties.. no death or destruction.. *checks temperature* mdude are you feeling okay? |
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beast_regards said: mdude009 said: But the orcs were neither ugly not murderous, just horny with low-classed manners of speaking. I imagined them like this (minus Kalasnikovs) when you mentioned snouts. Admittedly I should have written it a little more clearly but I wrote "far too human" snout to kind of get a pig theme across, I guess that might of come off to some people as them actually having pig faces. Also how do you know they didn't have kalashnikovs? They might have just been hidden. |
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| [quote=mdude009]Also how do you know they didn't have kalashnikovs? Modern Warfare: Monster Girl edition isn't popular with GM's. |
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| 6 of them huh? idk why i never considered the posibility for that. ive played MQG and have worked at vets and petsmarts. hmm great chapter, looking forward to more *tries to post then gets told there r 25 others XT* |
Clarus_NoxAug 24, 2014 8:27 PM
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beast_regards said: mdude009 said: Also how do you know they didn't have kalashnikovs? Modern Warfare: Monster Girl edition isn't popular with GM's. I'd buy that CoD.... no wait... never mind i don't think i'd like shooting them ok caught up fr real this time still great so far |
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Clarus_Nox said: still great so far And we haven't even gotten to the second companion yet! I'm glad I managed to get people to like it this early in. |
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| Part 6: Warning, this chapter contains Do not read at work or if you are under aged in front of your parents A few days passed since our encounter with the monster (I later learned they were orcs). After that our travels remained mundane a peaceful, not so much as a single traveler crossed our path to the city of Alnor oddly enough. However I can't saying nothing happened as something was happening today. Lauren had been acting strange all day. Her generally upbeat yet professional nature turning into a nervous wariness. Eyes constantly darting to and fro, mostly towards me. An occasional opening of the mouth and short noise as if to ask something, but quickly closing before a word came out. I was getting worried, I did know her too long but I knew this wasn't normal behavior for her. "Hey Lauren, is everything ok? You seem a bit out of it." She seemed to jump a little, maybe believing I didn't notice she was acting a bit strange. For a woman so perceptive about everything happening around her she sure is oblivious to her own actions. "I-it is nothing... You remember I said I would never do anything to harm you right? I swear, on my honour as a guardswoman of Alnor, that I meant that." That was even more concerning the second time... *** I could barely tell you how it got to this point. The kind and gentle giant that had guided me for so long hunched over me naked using her clawed hands to keep my shoulders pinned to the ground. Eyes glowing brightly enough to give her face a golden sheen to it as if a fire of hellish intent was burning inside her skull. Bladed teeth drawn in a sinister dagger grin and veins full and popping with adrenaline. It seemed odd when she wanted to stop for the night before the sun had even set. But I decided not to question it. It'd been like any other day besides her odd behaviour. I helped her remove her armour and we began setting up the fire. At least, that's how it began. But then it happened. The sun finally descended and the silver light of the moon took it's place. A moon that was round and full. I thought nothing of it though besides just a passing remark to Lauren. I believed since she was already essentially in her wolf form the full moon thing meant nothing to werewolves in this world. I was dreadfully wrong. Before I even knew what was going on Lauren lunged at me, grabbing be by the arms and holding me in place before telling me she was truly sorry about this. There wasn't a drastic physical change, her muscles filled out even more, her veins popped and her skin grew hot. The biggest change was her eyes, slowly the reflection in them faded and they seemed to become even more vibrant, a soft illumination filling them gradually until they glowed as bright as the fire itself. Her lips peeled back and her face slowly moved towards my own. Reacting completely out of fear I swung my hand towards her face, my thumb unintentionally hitting her directly in her eye with enough force to make her yelp and stumble back, losing her hold of me. Her odd mood during the day now clear. She wasn't the same Lauren I'd known for the past few days. Now a vicious snarling animal she turned to me with one eye half closed and face tight, letting out a low resonating growl. Slowly taking a step towards me her constant growl occasionally breaking into a roar before returning to the low rumbling. "That wasn't nice" she snarled out with barely subdued anger. I ran, what else could I do? Before this she could easily defeat any man I'd ever met and now she only seemed to have more power in her colossal body. There was nothing to hide in and if there were she could sniff me out is seconds. But in truth running was just as futile. She didn't give chase at all, just stood there and watched. Finally after I'd run far enough for her to just almost be out of my sight she lunged forward, landing on her hands and feet, and charged towards me at speeds no human could possibly achieve. The gap was closed in seconds before she kicked off the ground and landed right on me, quickly flipping me onto my back and pinning me. And here we were. Her staring me down with a wide grin and my own body in a state where I might as well have been paralyzed for all I could do. Her face once again slowly moving towards my own, this time with no hope of retaliation, her spike filled jaws slowly parting wider and wider as they descended. I slammed my eyes closed hoping I wouldn't have to see my inevitable gory death, I've seen An American Werewolf in London, I knew this shit was gonna be messy. At least that's what I thought until her face almost crashed into my own, instead of her teeth it was her cheek that met my own. Her teeth did connect but it was the lobe of my ear they closed on, not hard enough to rip it off but just enough to cause some blood to begin trickling from them. She pulled on the lobe, lifting my head off the ground just enough to her to bring her paw behind and take a strong grip, moving her mouth from the ear to my lips. I can't exactly call what happened next a "kiss," at least not how humans generally kiss. It was more like a dog discovering you had peanut butter in your mouth. She ravenously began sucking and licking my mouth, jamming her large tongue in and roughly dragging it along any surface under the flesh that she had access to, the only thing keeping her from ramming it down my throat were my closed teeth. And when she found her tongue alone wasn't enough to part my jaws she instead pulled her tongue out and dragged it from my mouth to my hair, leaving the skin slick with a thick trail of salvia. In fact she seemed to have quite a lot of that, so much so that large globs of it leaked out the corners of her mouth and fell on my face it with quiet slaps. "Do you feel that?" She attempted to emphasize her meaning by grinding her hips along my trapped legs. "I hope you don't burn easy" a low throaty laugh came from the back of her throat. She was hot, and I don't mean she was attractive. Between her legs her womanhood emanated an almost furnace like heat that made my legs moist with sweat even in the chill of the nights air. I was worried I actually would get burned if I came in contact with her entrance, the thing truly did feel like it gave off enough heat for that. The joys of werewolf biology I suppose, now with built in marshmallow roasters! With one swift move she grabbed my kilt and tore it off, tossing it to the side and exposing me to the wind. My mind was struggling but my body evidently didn't care much for my protests. Without even a moment of hesitation she took the rod into her hand, gripping it tightly enough to make my hands clench and my face cringe, and stabbed it like a blade into her waiting entrance. The sensation was not entirely unpleasant, but it's not exactly a eyes rolling back and mouth gapping pleasure. It was the equivalent of plunging your hand into a bucket of hot water that was just slightly below a scolding heat, you wanted to pull out but if you stay in it becomes slightly tolerable. But pulling out wasn't an option, her muscles contracted holding me with a vice like force intent on keeping me inside her, and her weight would have been impossible to push off. The only option that would have theoretically been available to me was to get used to the heat and the tightness. Though Lauren didn't seem to be a big fan of theories as she spared no time and began her assault. Moving her hips up and then slamming them down onto my pelvis with enough force and speed to not create a slap but a full blown hit that would almost certainly bruise by the morning if I survived this night, thankfully the night was free of any loud cracks or snaps. Though it was not exactly gentle or even painless I cannot deny there wasn't some pleasure to be had. A pressure was surely building up as the burning flesh slid against my shaft with enough grip to pull my pelvis a few centimeters up with ever rise. She certainly seemed to be enjoying herself, her grip on my shoulders only a few pounds of force away from snapping them. Mouth agape with her tongue hanging down to her chin, bouncing around with every hump and indiscriminately tossing around beads and strands of her drool to cover both our bodies in drips and splats of the warm slimy fluid. The pressure kept on building, more and more until finally the familiar sensation of inevitable release filled me. It was obvious where it was all going, she probably couldn't even hear me and I couldn't hope to overpower her. It was almost like she knew it was going to happen, her hips moving even faster and harder threatening to smash my pelvis into pieces. But the thing that saved me was the climax oddly enough. All at once I exploded into her harder than I'd ever ejaculated my entire life. Her own body going stiff and tense as she bit hard on her own tongue and arched her back, her vaginal walls clamping down harder than they ever did before like she was trying to squeeze everything out me. Again and again I sent shot after shot deep into her until finally it slowed to a light dribble and eventually just some dry twitching. She slid off me leaving me to lay there, breathing as if I'd just run a marathon (odd considering I did no moving). Bringing a hand to my ear to feel the liquid that now covered it and ran down the back of my head, blood of course. Lauren in a now slightly more relaxed mood laid next to me, wrapped her arms around my pained body and brought me close to her body and once again moved her mouth to my ear. This time however taking a far less aggressive route and lightly licking at the wound. Despite my aching body, bruised and cut by her own hand, I felt little fear towards her, instead almost instinctively curling up into her and allowing her to nurse my pierced ear. |
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| lol I knew it was coming eventually lol Well that puts a little bit of fear into me about the inevitable h-scene with my own wolfie... damn you full moons! Though I hope there's a little less drool :3 Now onto the walk of shame! (y-you know 'cus she's gonna feel guilty after all that) |
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greatgreenman said: Well that puts a little bit of fear into me about the inevitable h-scene with my own wolfie... mdude's story is mdude's. Everything is ugly in mdude's world. |
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beast_regards said: mdude's story is mdude's. Everything is ugly in mdude's world. Not anymore... :D |
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beast_regards said: mdude's story is mdude's. Everything is ugly in mdude's world. Don't pretend you didn't at least feel a little wiggle down there. |
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| What did you expect, folks? What part of monstergirl did you not get? And thank you, mdude, for restoring my faith. I knew this story wasn't going to be all shiny-happy. |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
| Why is everyone saying this was a dark chapter? Isn't getting raped by MG's one of the main points of MG's in general? |
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mdude009 said: Why is everyone saying this was a dark chapter? Isn't getting raped by MG's one of the main points of MG's in general? Well, yeah. But rape is pretty dark regardless. Even rape fantasies are rather dark, though a rape fantasy isn't about being raped. It's about giving oneself permission to enjoy sex by giving up all illusions of control. |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
| I personally found the h-scene to be funny. Big sloppy puppy-dog kisses, saliva everywhere as her tongue flops around with each motion and a full blown ahegao face. Sure there was a little blood but I got the feeling that she did not even mean to make his ear bleed. |
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tygertyger said: Well, yeah. But rape is pretty dark regardless. Even rape fantasies are rather dark, though a rape fantasy isn't about being raped. It's about giving oneself permission to enjoy sex by giving up all illusions of control. Ultimately I'd consider it more of a rough sex scene than a rape scene really, trust me, you do not want me to write a genuine rape scene. |
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| no we don't want that... we've seen your genuine rape scenes b4 *shiver* |
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| Impressive, I'm really without words. I mean, it's probably better if I don't eat anymore while reading your chapters... *puts cookies away* but still amazing. Can't wait for more. |
 "You keep changing the shape of your eyes. How does that even work?" -AbhLeaderKrelian |
| *adjusts monocle* I see. What you've done here is explore the relationship between the moon and her desire to reproduce. Quite lovely. Now we will have to observe the interaction between the ever-rare female alpha and her chew toy. |
| Attempts to write a sexy chapter, everyone thinks I've reverted back to the dark stuff. Good to know I apparently cannot stop myself from writing about bad shit even when I'm not even trying to. |
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| Hey... I'm on you're side. This wasn't even close to the stuff you used to write. :P |
mdude009 said: Attempts to write a sexy chapter, everyone thinks I've reverted back to the dark stuff. Good to know I apparently cannot stop myself from writing about bad shit even when I'm not even trying to. I don't think it was all that bad at all. The character was already established as a pretty decent sort, so it felt like a bit of a surprise. Not a bad surprise, and I'm honestly more interested in the aftermath =) |
SydoKiller said: it's probably better if I don't eat anymore while reading your chapters... *puts cookies away* but still amazing. It's probably best if I don't tell you what "eating a cookie" is slang for, then. };) |
| "When you have bought your own load of hooey, you know exactly what it is worth." -- Bruce Sterling |
| @tyger: *facepalm* you just can't help yourself can you? @Sydo:... go eat some more cookies @w@ @mdude: well certainly seen more graphic examples from other writers, but you always put your own unique spin on "graphic". Some people are into the fluid swapping (or drenching?), and some prefer it a little more clean. I for one don't like having to put down a towel before doing the deed but that's me. Some don't mind a waterfall of saliva and other various fluids lol. Though on the whole, I wouldn't say it was "bad", I would just say it was certainly fit the mold of the mdude brand :3 |
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| Part 7: "I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY I'M SORRY!" I can't exactly say waking up that morning was quite as nice as the other nights. Unlike other mornings my chest hurt a little, I quickly discovered the reason for this was a mountain of a woman was holding me tightly enough to keep my ribs from expanding. Never expected a wake up in the form of a game of 'try not to suffocate while the constant apologies of a crying woman threatened to give you permanent ear damage,' you know, the game all the kids play these days. "It's fine, I'm not mad at you! Please just calm down so we can talk about this." At least that's what I meant to say, without a translator it sounded more like: "Iiiiiiiiih *gasp* can't- *wheeze* Breeeeeeeeeeeath! *gasp*" I tried pushing her off but she seemed completely oblivious to anything I did right now. She was too caught up in her apology to realize she was killing me, an event which would inevitable lead to more apologies. Air was low, I suspected I'd pass out any second now. I had no choice, I didn't want to hurt her but I needed to get her off me. With all the strength I had left in my body I lifted my fist, stuck out my thumb, and with all the force I could muster I sent it right into her eye and pushed on it hard. Thankful we weren't operating on Chinese cartoon logic where your strength directly affects how much pain you can feel anywhere on your body. A loud scream shot out her throat, reeling back with her hand over her eye. Dropping to the ground I coughed and gasped, trying to take in as much air as possible as my lungs burned. I was thankful just to have survived that. Could you imagine? Death by apology! Now wouldn't that have been ironic? Though irony is only fun for so long, and everyone can catch their breath eventually so long as nothing ruptured or broke. My distractions were gone forcing me to realize what I'd just done. I reluctantly looked to see Lauren still clutching her eye but not in severe pain, at least not physical. She just kneeled there silently sobbing while staring at the ground. I slowly approached her "Lauren, I..." "I understand" she quickly cut me off, not even looking up at me "I swore to you I would never do anything to harm you and then I did those horrible things to you. You have every reason to despise me." Her voice was what made my guilt intensify. She was absolutely disgusted, practically spitting out her sentence as if remembering her vow made her feel like filth. This woman was already in so much pain and all I did was attack her. Shit, I had to do something and I never handled a situation like this before. Without even thinking I swiftly went right up to her and reversed the events of my arrival, embracing her tightly as best I could and saying comforting things. "I'm sorry, I didn't want to hurt you" I apologized. "You? Sorry? But, I'm the one who..." "Please don't hate yourself, I get it, it was an instinct thing because of the full moon... And it was kinda fun honestly." She stopped crying, but it wasn't because she felt better. She just completely froze for a few second before she finally placed her hands on my shoulders (which were still very sore might I add) and pushed me away so she could look at me directly, her own tear covered face filled with confusion. "What!?" She screamed, "fun? Look at you! You are covered in bruises, your ear is torn up, your shoulders..." When she realized she was holding me by my bruised and cut shoulders she quickly let go. "I promised I would not hurt you and that is exactly what I did, how could you possibly forgive me for that, and then go on to say you enjoyed it?" I knew whatever I said here would probably just make her even more confused but I decided confused was better than depressed, so I let out quite possibly the single worst thing I could have said in the situation. "It was basically just really rough sex with a giant monster woman, not exactly something you can complain about." Smoother than fucking glass that was! Jesus Christ on a tricycle made of dragon dildo's, I think I just made the situation infinitely worse. I was about ready to awkwardly stammer out a reply that I hoped wouldn't make it worse (and considering what I just said that was almost impossible to fuck up) but Lauren spoke first. "You are a very odd person" certainly not the reply I was expecting. She brought her hand up to gently take hold of my ear, observing it carefully. "hmmm... Well at least it did not seem to get infected." "I think you had something to do with that," I referenced her licking. "Most likely, werewolves salivations does have some minor medical properties. I would however like to treat it properly." She paused for a second before bring her hand back down and looking me in the eyes again. "You do not hate me for this? We can still maintain a friendship, correct?" I smiled "of course we're still friends." It was nice seeing her smile again. |
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| She was hella into that apology. Can't say I wouldn't try the same thing if I was being crushed to death...hmm...maybe that would depend on the context =P Dang it...this is making me want to write more. Maybe after my quasi-secret project is done, I'll sit down and try to make some magic happen. =) |
| You couldn't attempt a nipple twist? Go straight for the eye pluck? Maybe she would have instantly realized you were okay with it if you placed your hand a bit... further south :3. I'm sure she wouldn't have minded a finger stuck in there instead lol |
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greatgreenman said: You couldn't attempt a nipple twist? Go straight for the eye pluck? Maybe she would have instantly realized you were okay with it if you placed your hand a bit... further south :3. I'm sure she wouldn't have minded a finger stuck in there instead lol Whispering Eye...I see what you did there =P |
| right for the eye huh? |
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| To be fair there was very little oxygen in his brain, you know, with all the suffocation and all. |
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| so he's not into autoerotic asphyxiation? |
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| The eyes! Why is it always the eyes! |
| I don't have to know what I'm looking for. I just have to know when I find it. |
dcw2021 said: The eyes! Why is it always the eyes! They're the ultimate weakpoint, painful and easy to hit. |
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dcw2021 said: Why is it always the eyes! He should save arousing moved for girls which hasn't been beaten by ugly stick. Sadly, there are not any in his version of universe. I wonder how long after the original story this takes place. |
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beast_regards said: He should save arousing moved for girls which hasn't been beaten by ugly stick. Sadly, there are not any in his version of universe. Lauren was described to be very attractive thank you very much. "She was certainly quite the attractive woman, her raven black hair accented her feminine features well, her skin (or the parts of it not covered in fur or armour) was a chocolate brown that contrasted her golden eyes and made them stand out like gold from stone." Chapter 1, Part 2 beast_regards said: I wonder how long after the original story this takes place. After the war arc, maybe a few months or so, the Knight of Chitin still is a small time mercenary/bounty hunter at this stage. |
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mdude009 said: After the war arc, maybe a few months or so, the Knight of Chitin still is a small time mercenary/bounty hunter at this stage. spoilers? |
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Clarus_Nox said: mdude009 said: After the war arc, maybe a few months or so, the Knight of Chitin still is a small time mercenary/bounty hunter at this stage. spoilers? Not really, the war arc is in the chapter index, and the main is referred to as the Knight of Chitin casually in a very early chapter. The whole story focuses on the main hunting the bounty on Patches so that's not a spoiler at all. |
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| tis for me, i didnt know any of that :T |
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Clarus_Nox said: tis for me, i didnt know any of that :T You would have after pretty much the first chapter. Also what are the odds you'll even read my old story now that I'm currently putting out a new one? I mean sure it's pretty infamous in the club for being the first story that explored how horrible the world could potentially get but I'm totally not trying to convince you to read it with this speech... |
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| well its not in this group, to my knowledge. plus im still catching up on a bunch of other stories (like dcw's atm) but i'll get to it eventually, assuming i ever find it. |
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| You can find it pretty easily in the "finished" section of the story links thread, first post. Though granted it's in a dropbox text document as opposed to a thread due to the fact I wasn't around to reupload it when the vault was made. Also notice how all the old timers keep going on about how they expect me to go back to my dreadful roots with this story? Well let's just say there's a reason the old story is infamous. Read at your own risk. |
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mdude009 said: After the war arc, maybe a few months or so, the Knight of Chitin still is a small time mercenary/bounty hunter at this stage. Kami's story suggested that it is taking place 30 years after end of your story when Knight of Chitin is badass leader of mercenary army. |
beast_regardsAug 28, 2014 12:36 AM
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beast_regards said: mdude009 said: After the war arc, maybe a few months or so, the Knight of Chitin still is a small time mercenary/bounty hunter at this stage. Kami's story suggested that it is taking place 30 years after end of your story. I never really intended the epilogue (which took 30 years after the final arc) to take place in the time the stories were being written. Does he specifically mention the Talon Company in his own story or just make reference to the Knight of Chitin, I'm still only on chapter 60. |
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mdude009 said: Kami's story suggested that it is taking place 30 years after end of your story. He made deals with Talon Company directly and your underlings, dialogue says Knight of Chitin is person in charge. If it is basically 30 years ago, it works to us perfectly as in the meantime majority of hideous deformities could die out and only few remain. It was already puzzling how to handle MSG when you turned everything on the island into Reavers. But since you were one and only person who finished story back then we were in ideal position to set out distance and follow up when you left. |
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