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| THIS IS A MANGA ONLY DISCUSSION POST. DO NOT DISCUSS ANYTHING BEYOND THIS CHAPTER. ---------------------------------------- weird to introduce the grandfather character so late in... was also hoping for some actual resolution as far as the confession to the police would go. she was invisible during the murder, and with what we've been told about the invisibility it seems unlikely that she would have left any fingerprints on the knife. would she actually get arrested?---'i turned invisible and killed my father' doesnt seem particularly believable, especially if there was any kind of CCTV / video of the murder.theres more to disprove her presence than to prove it. it was an alright series, but i definitely feel the vague ending did not do it justice. |
| Honestly whowould believe her that she killed him? Like her mother crying at the end about her murdering her dad? That would be so hard to believe. The dude that wrote this sucks at writing people, the concept was cool, but then he topped it off with that ending. Which really isn’t an ending, but I guess it is supposed to be her going to a police station, but idk. What a mess. |
| A weird ending, this, especially as this chapter just seems to reiterate everything we learned last chapter anyway. I think the thing to consider though is that it does not really matter to Aya's story whether the police actually buy her confession or not, so much as the fact that she's finally facing up to what she did by going to confess at all. I think showing her confess and, in all likelihood, being laughed out of the police station, would have somewhat undercut the purpose of Aya's entire character arc. That being said, there must have been a better option than what was chosen here, something that would have offered a little bit more closure than what we ultimately got. A decent concept which is, at times, paced rather oddly, but is still interesting due to its strong storytelling and interesting messaging. I still don't buy so many people reacting so casually to Aya telling them that she killed her own father, especially without the context behind it. 8/10 |
| haha i teared up a little bit near the end certainly not a masterpiece but still a good manga, i liked aya's journey as a character. 7.5/10 |
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| Disappointing 4/10. I was expecting a story of revenge, justice or insanity of doing terrible or odd things invisible from the protagonist before reading. After I thought I'd experience a story of how Aya tries to save her mother, which I think would have been more interesting. Instead, it stayed to her rule of morality to turn herself in after she feels she has something to lose, which was happiness from friends... Realistic from a 15 year old, but nonetheless boring. At first her awkwardness and inability to relate to others as a child who's experienced abuse from her father to her mother was captivating, but ultimately felt flat when she "easily" became normal, even while holding the guilt of murder. Her father as an illusion was kinda interesting but meaningless in the end since it could have simply been her inner thoughts instead. The concept of invisibility from literally wanting to disappear out of her worries is cool, but unfortunately the story wasn't great, and the characters were basic. ... Her slowly admitting her crime after a year to turn herself in ... is somehow weird and dull. It had some charm, like how accepting her senpai was of her, but the plots were far too plain. It's still odd and very disappointing how her mother wasn't a main theme of the story since she killed her father to save her, even though she claims it was for own convenience, and not for her mother. The origin of his father and attempt to potentially have some empathy for him was poorly portrayed as well. Her forgiving friends aren't extraordinary either for how simple it's all relayed. |
| There's a sequel chapter out, btw, if you want to check it out |
TheSupremeXtream said: I just checked it out, and I regret doing so.There's a sequel chapter out, btw, if you want to check it out |
Potatoboy11 said: TheSupremeXtream said: I just checked it out, and I regret doing so.There's a sequel chapter out, btw, if you want to check it out Lmao, I actually thought it was pretty based. Apparently, Ogino wanted there to be more romance between Aya and Shiori but Jump wouldn't let him so he made that extra chapter to be like "I intended them to be a couple all along" |
| An open ending is fine because the consequences of Aya's actions aren't the main focus, but her journey to those consequences instead. Regardless, I think that the author left a lot of context in earlier chapters to allow for us to more or less figure out what would happen without having to draw it out. Based on Shiori's reaction to the invisibility, the police won't believe Aya if she told them. If she wanted to display it, Aya probably could not since she lost her feelings of wanting to disappear/despair which is the trigger for her invisibility. With how her invisibility interacts with objects and the world, there's likely no finger prints or anything that would connect her to the crime. And finally the CCTV footage doesn't show her in the area at the time of the stabbing since she was invisible the whole time. I liked the series a lot. |
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