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Sep 29, 2009 10:32 PM
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Started as a sort of like, top of the head poem that got pretty deep into my feelings lol, as you can see. Butttt....it wasnt actually good before I dont think, in spite of what people told me <.< I thought it was ass, so i revised it and its like...half decent now XD


F.N.I

Verse 1:

Forever, and ever. We'll always be together.
It's all just part of the plan. Don't mind this bad weather.
We'll make it through this, nobody can stop this man.
I'm invincible when I have you, feelin' like I should just let the beat pan.
But no, I got some words that need spitting, and the way that I do this,
I believe too be fitting. They say never trust a thief,
They'll walk away with your heart, but my heart is with you...
Let me bring this back too the start.
He lies, we all know it, he loves to tell you that you can't.
Now picking back up from where I began...
Don't listen too his lies, I say you can.



Verse 2:

I love you, and don't you love me?
That's exactly how I want this too be.
A bright future awaits us, together for eternity.
We would never be unhappy, but he can't open his eyes and see...
Can't see what you ask? The truth, that thing we're all so blind too.
They say the truth is hard to handle, but I say this too be untrue.
I can see everything, all thanks too you.
You brought me too the light, you shine down from the sky.
Like a beautiful angel, that creates a never ending high.
Beautiful is the key word in this verse, together forever...
For better, or worse.



Verse 3:

He wont let us be together, he has aquitted us to never.
What's his real problem? What does he think he's trying too start?
He has no issue, and he's obviously not too smart...
He won't hold me down, I'm free of his pain.
He cant hold us down, not with his disdain.
He has yet to realize the error of his ways...
Leaving our love outside of his prison, sitting in the rain.
A prison called life, it's much crueler than what it seemed...
"I'm gonna be famous," one young man beemed.
But his dreams we're cut short, his life lead astray.
He's haunted by his past, each and everyday.
But he has moved on, believe it or not.
He has made mistakes, but he has faith in what he's got.
He also resides in this prison, he sits by the window watching the rain.
But he feels terrible knowing, that behind closed doors...
There is a beautiful girl, and she's crying in pain.

Just sorta me venting my frustration, it turns into a major production though with me, im the biggest perfectionist...Lol, but yeah, revision of something i wrote previously, and i named it sorta on the fly as i was putting it in this post...


Dedicate:Too my baby girl, my one and only Alicia :P Love you, just remember like you told me, we'll make it through this, dont you even worry <3


Forever(F)-No matter What(N)- I Promise(I)
chrissy11194Sep 29, 2009 10:37 PM
Come on, hear me out, this might be the best story you ever hear...<3
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Sep 30, 2009 9:51 AM
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Omg that was bootiful :'3

Seriously,you sir ROCK MY SOCKS! :D

I looooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeee youuuuuuuuuuuu.

<3
Sep 30, 2009 12:58 PM
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SEE WHAT I TELLS U?!!? I makes it better ._. I was reading the original one and my only thought was "ASS!" and now its like actually ok :P
Come on, hear me out, this might be the best story you ever hear...<3
Sep 30, 2009 8:32 PM
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chrissy11194 said:
SEE WHAT I TELLS U?!!? I makes it better ._. I was reading the original one and my only thought was "ASS!" and now its like actually ok :P


Well i liked the first one too >.>

This one's likeeeeeeee 10000000x better though :33

I raped it earlier ;)
Sep 30, 2009 9:24 PM
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Rapist child...<33 :P
Come on, hear me out, this might be the best story you ever hear...<3
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