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Nov 1, 2016 2:31 AM
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THIS IS A MANGA ONLY DISCUSSION POST. DO NOT DISCUSS ANYTHING BEYOND THIS CHAPTER.
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So we have Tsugumi and Shuu lookalike in light music club setting.

Their disease was kinda silly but they had a good dynamic between them. Kinda sad they both died, they were cute together.

At least the MCs are better than oneshot Raku/Chitoge. I wonder if this manga would work if it got published normally. Ah fuck it, we all know we're going to read it till the end.
Nov 1, 2016 3:16 AM
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Someone was reading Seo Kouji lately huh...Sasuga Komi Naoshi plagiarising like there is no tomorrow...At least Love Hina was an old series tho so it felt like a fun remake...Dont know what to feel about this one...

I will probably read this till i lose all hope like i did with Nisekoi...

Inb4: Harem lol
Nov 1, 2016 3:22 AM
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Nisekoi was shit (jk), but this is something else... <///3
Nov 1, 2016 3:29 AM
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I have a feeling that Seo Kouji helped with this one shoot.
Now my kokoro bleeds :< Plz Komi, don't do anything like that again.

Nov 1, 2016 4:24 AM
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So 15 min left and dude is in school instead of a fucking hospital? Having your heart stopped working isn't a matter of joke.


That aside, decent one-shot although I saw the twist coming.
Nov 1, 2016 4:30 AM
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Frostbytes said:
So 15 min left and dude is in school instead of a fucking hospital? Having your heart stopped working isn't a matter of joke.
It's a magical disease where your heart is programmed to die when plot decides its time...Sooo ye,hospital wouldn't save him...
Nov 1, 2016 4:32 AM
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LoneWizard said:
Frostbytes said:
So 15 min left and dude is in school instead of a fucking hospital? Having your heart stopped working isn't a matter of joke.
It's a magical disease where your heart is programmed to die when plot decides its time...Sooo ye,hospital wouldn't save him...


I know that, but having your heart stop working is not like falling asleep.
It's painful, you're awake as you stop feeling blood flowing, you literally suffocate with excruciating pain. If they knew he was going to get a fatal heart attack in the next day, they SHOULD'VE brought him to a hospital so they could at least put him to sleep, and strong enough to not feel pain.

Well wtv, suspension of disbelief for the plot.
Nov 1, 2016 4:41 AM
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WTF was that heart disease again? 15 min to die? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Nov 1, 2016 5:04 AM
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Owh men :( This is such a good one shot. I knew it! He has also the disease. I realize it on the part where one of his friend look at him. Well, I love it :3


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Nov 1, 2016 6:22 AM
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I read the One Shot and.....

That was one of the most beautiful and depressing things I have ever seen.....There's a twist at the end that I honestly did not see coming and seeing what happens was so beautiful yet painfully heart wrenching at the same time

If you can't tell by now, this oneshot more than delivered in the feels and just about everything else imo.....The main characters are so likable too compared to Raku and Shitoge

In short I loved this with every fibre of my being.....I can't believe that this was written by Komi
Nov 1, 2016 6:28 AM

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Right in my kokoro. I dunno if I want this as an actual series. I don't wanna have an extended version of this lingering feeling of sad. D:
Nov 1, 2016 6:35 AM

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Tokoya said:
I can't believe that this was written by Komi
Because it is written by Seo Kouji...At least %80 of it...Type of disease,name and design of the characters belong to Komi...

And the Legend Continues...
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Nov 1, 2016 6:39 AM

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The story was really heartfelt. Haven't read one-shots like this one for a while.
Nov 1, 2016 8:20 AM
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Was pretty good, but hasn't anyone heard of a heart transplant before? Why didn't they just wait for a donor? It kind of takes you out of it when you think about that.

Eh, whatever I guess.
Nov 1, 2016 10:46 AM

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Well, this is really good for 48 pages, made me at tears at the end. Interested to see how this will work as extended shounen manga.
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Nov 1, 2016 1:05 PM

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I'm impressed Komi, this wasn't total shit.
6/10
Nov 1, 2016 5:43 PM

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Great oneshot IMO. Would be interesting how he would handle that disease when that oneshot would get serialized. Either its going to be short so he can also hide his disease til the end like here or a long running manga where everyone would know that he has that disease and each chapter would sort of be a countdown.
Nov 1, 2016 6:43 PM

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uhmm they got that fancy device and there is no Heart Transplant? OK..

Anyway jokes aside nice twist, I just don't want this serialized.

Komi kinda sticks too much with the one-shot so I'd hate to see 2 dead MC not being together.
Nov 1, 2016 7:02 PM

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The feels....
8/10
Nov 1, 2016 10:42 PM

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I'm still fucking crying. God fucking damn it, 1 chapter made me feel so much

9/10
Nov 1, 2016 10:45 PM

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It was a fine one shot, but I just can't get into the hype train like the others can, I felt like the author just made it sad for the sake of being sad, with his unending twist and turns.
Nov 1, 2016 11:20 PM

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Hey, it was alright.

inb4 serialisation that drags on for years.
Nov 2, 2016 3:46 AM

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I did not see that coming..... I thought it would be a cliche that the guy would try and cure her but fails, but this.... Jesus Christ... my poor heart..... this one shot is the saddest shiz I've read....
Nov 2, 2016 7:42 AM
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My heart couldn't handle the feels of this. I was expecting a cliche that the guy would somehow save her but it didn't happen. He was the first one to leave.

Oh boy was that surprising, Tears were shed.
Nov 2, 2016 12:48 PM

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I hope this doesn't get serialized, because I know he'll somehow milk it and ruin it.
Nov 2, 2016 1:01 PM

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After reading this I feel like my heart is going through what theirs just did :'(
Nov 3, 2016 1:19 AM

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Hmm, this actually wasn't bad. I mean, Takagi and Poppo (I can't take his name seriously) has some decent chemistry.

The heart condition gimmick didn't impress me at first but the story itself connected well at the end.
Nov 4, 2016 2:10 AM

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Some tears where shed while I read this one shot manga.

I hope it receives a adaptation because I want to hear her sing that song.
Nov 4, 2016 4:25 AM

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Tokidoki > Nisekoi

#DealWithit
Nov 4, 2016 2:37 PM

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So touching, they both Smiled in their last heartbeat...
Nov 9, 2016 2:42 PM

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The girl kinda looked like Tsugumi.

Anyway I really enjoyed reading this even tho it was really sad.

WHY no happy ending ='(
Nov 15, 2016 5:02 PM

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Hmmm this one was really cheap..

Also could it be that there's a plot hole? He didn't have any device planted on his chest when they were at the beach? So how was she able to measure his heart beats at the end??
Dec 12, 2016 9:30 PM

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ehh... other than cheap with lot plot device, it was still good thou.. 7/10 personally...
"If taking responsibility for a mistake that cannot be undone means death, it's not that hard to die. At least, not as hard as to live on."
Dec 15, 2016 10:09 AM

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I cried...
I knew it this is from the one who make nisekoi... That guy looks like raku's friend... Forgot his name though...
Really nice...
Make an OVA out of this please
Jan 28, 2017 8:58 AM

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This was just two characters forced into each other randomly, without any emotional back up or any development beforehand. The author expects us to care about two high schoolers who got the rarest diseases dating each other until a silly plot twist which ruined the whole series.

4/10
Feb 25, 2017 4:35 PM

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That plot twist! Very good oneshot.
Mar 3, 2017 4:27 AM

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This one is much better than nisekoi :3
8/10 for me hoho
Mar 12, 2017 8:10 PM
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The feels are real in this one. I really liked this person's take on the anime:
http://strangerwaters.com/2017/02/02/tokidoki-counting-heartbeats/
Mar 14, 2017 10:42 AM
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I don't understand why she need to be in front of him to check the heartbeat, did the app only need ID to check the data? Did the glassed guy gave poppo's ID to her?

I don't understand why poppo just gave the pick to the glasses guy and went to the roof. By doing so he shortened his life right?

Also did anyone notice her smile on the first page and became a grin on the last page?
Mar 27, 2017 6:33 AM

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Finally got around in reading this and I wish I read this one shot a lot sooner.

This is the only one shot manga that has ever made me feel. I didn't cry or anything but damn, that was both beautiful and sad.

9/10- I loved it. This was really fun and touching and sends a good message. I would really love this to become an actual lengthy series...but only if its done right and written well...which is wishing for too much with this type of genre.



Apr 7, 2017 7:39 PM
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This was surprisingly good and to think it came from the creator of Nisekoi! Definitely exceeded my expectations! Did not expect the ending, it was bittersweet but inspiring. Reminded me of fault in our stars. 10/10
Apr 27, 2017 4:11 PM

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Klad said:
This was just two characters forced into each other randomly, without any emotional back up or any development beforehand. The author expects us to care about two high schoolers who got the rarest diseases dating each other until a silly plot twist which ruined the whole series.

4/10

Exactly my thoughts.
May 27, 2017 2:46 PM

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didn't think i'd cry after 48 pages
Jun 11, 2017 9:41 AM

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Ugh the feels, I'd cry if this was a full manga and not a one shot. But man that was depressing
Jun 18, 2017 5:48 AM
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Does anyone know where can i buy this manga ?
Jul 27, 2017 1:14 PM

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So good 11/10, i wish this to become anime someday


Aug 17, 2017 5:20 PM
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The guy was so cute and the girl was adorable! Too bad they both died.
The author should make a sequel where they're both having fun in heaven.
Aug 17, 2017 5:21 PM
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Hmmm this one was really cheap..

Also could it be that there's a plot hole? He didn't have any device planted on his chest when they were at the beach? So how was she able to measure his heart beats at the end??


Hmm I agree with you. Didn't think of that
Aug 25, 2017 12:04 AM
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Great One-Shot! Didn't expect a mere 48 page worth one chapter to make me cry though. At the very beginning, I found this heart condition and disease to be silly but by the passage of time, through further reading, it saddened me as well as made me feel sympathetic completely overwhelming the potential silliness of the premise. However, the final plot twist.. Ah mate, was that heart wrenching. Gah, didn't see it coming one bit and it seriously hit me right in the guts.
Solid 8.6/10...
#Anime4Life be my Life Motto! #PrayForKyoAni


Dec 8, 2017 1:39 PM
🥊 CHAMPION 🥊

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Beautiful one-shot, and the turn in the plot in the last pages was amazing!!!
Yes, tearful ;)
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