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12345trent8 said: flame, Black Cat is great!!! Yeah, I know. I've written another story using Creed and Echidna. I just need to finish typing it up. But it's not chapter two. |
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| @ Gunslinger90 Read some of Saving Sakura. It's interesting but the writing is too abrupt. You need more description in order to create better flow. Instead if outright stating someone's name or appearance, for example, it would be better to somehow incorporate that into the description of a character's reaction to something and/or facial expression. Just subtleties. They would make it flow better and make it a lot more enjoyable. |
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