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Oct 27, 2010 8:05 PM
#1
Create your character(s) here, using this template. I highly encourage you to try this test for your character (once completed): http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm It takes some time, but it can serve as a great indicator on the originality of your character. And it says "read the instructions carefully" in giant red letters for a reason. There's important information in there that could throw off your score. Name: Age: Race: Class (optional): Abilities: Personality: Bio: Appearance: List of accepted characters by player AbstractCalamity Marcellus Therecai HaremAllMighty Motoki Kiski, 'Shiki' Sion Vesperina Amarathan Armir 9000Miles Felix Gabbana D-V D-V |
AbstractCalamityDec 12, 2010 1:08 PM
Oct 30, 2010 12:22 PM
#2
Name: Marcellus Therecai Age: 31 Race: Human Class: Channeler Abilities: Marcellus specializes in communicating with and channeling the power of the deceased. He has a connection to the world of the dead, and is capable of interacting with them in a much more direct fashion than the living normally do. He can even give ghosts temporary form, literally bringing them to the very border that separates life from death. He is also an apt survivalist. Personality: His personality is subdued and controlled, rarely showing much emotion to speak of and acting on logic rather than his gut. Through that, however, he is a sympathetic and understanding person. He hates those who harm others, yet he is not against things such as violence and vengeance. He seems to favor the dead over the living, oddly enough, and is significantly more honest and open with them. Bio: Marcellus was born able to see and talk to the dead. His parents, afraid of what might happen if people discovered this trait of his, hid him to the best of their ability. Marcellus's very existence was a fact that few knew. As such, the dead became his only friends. It was only once he was old enough to understand that his abilities must be kept a secret that he was even allowed out of the small cottage he lived in. He had learned some about the outside world from his poltergeist acquaintances, but it proved to be largely a mystery to him. Rather than being intimidated by this daunting world, though, he sought to explore it. And so, that's exactly what he did as soon as he had the chance. At the youthful age of 17, he set out into the world, to make a living however he could. He found his abilities to be quite useful, and refined them as best he could without anyone to teach him how. After a few weeks of aimless wandering and bare survival, he had decided that he needed some way of making a real living. He did so by offering up his services to anyone in need -- for a price, of course. His skills at dealing with the other world proved to be quite rare indeed, and as such he managed to do quite well. However, the dead only create so much business, so he expanded into a more tangible realm as well, taking jobs from tracking down lost items to stopping serial killers. He doesn't carry much equipment with him, even when he is on a job. He has a small knife, which he rarely, if ever, fights with; and a simple wooden staff which doubles as a walking stick. Other than those, however, he carries no weapons. Over the years, he has gained a couple of deceased companions that regularly assist him in his ventures. One is the spirit of a girl named Cathrine who was murdered, and refuses to rest until the murderer is brought to justice. The other ghost is a man with a literally undying curiosity and drive to explore whose name is Cyrus. Appearance: Marcellus No sword Companions Cathrine Cyrus |
AbstractCalamityOct 30, 2010 12:27 PM
Oct 30, 2010 2:06 PM
#3
Name:Motoki Kiski, 'Shiki' Age:17 Race:Human Class (optional):Combat Mage Abilities: A style of Magic in which the incantations are invoked in either Latin or Greek, depending on the spell. Motoki specializes in Offensive and stat-boosting magic. Being a combat mage, he is proficient in different forms of armed and unarmed combat. His ring acts a substitute wand. Personality: A suffer of 'Dissociative Identity Disorder", or 'Dual Personality Disorder. As Motoki, he is shy, but kind and friendly. As 'Shiki', he is straightforward, rude, aggressive even and over the top in everything he does. As you can probably guess, Shiki is the reason they are classified as a combat mage. He seems to switch personalities at random, though Shiki will also appear whenever Motoki experiences intense fear or pain. The only way to tell which personality is currently in control, apart from the way they act, is their eye color. Motoki has green eyes, while Shiki has red. At times, it can seem like he is talking to himself, while in fact he is talking to his other personality. Bio: Motoki remembers very little about his family, apart from them being very poor. Sold into slavery, all he has really known is suffering and pain. Despite all the hardship, he still respected his owners. They still treated him as a human, gave him a place to stay and food to eat, even if they were just scraps. Around the time of his 7th birthday, Motoki's owner started to notice strange occurrences happening around him. Distortions, object floating at breaking at random. They called in a professional, and him tested. They discovered that he had vast amount of untapped magic potential. Seeing the chance to make a profit, they put him through grueling training, and forced him to fight in the arena. Even though he was new to it, Motoki fared quite well, those most win where by accident. It was around this time that Shiki appeared. Loud, bad-mouthed and rude, he fought in an entirely different manner to Motoki, beating his opponents to a Bloody pulp. He was disrespectful, refusing to follow orders. Of course, he was punished, through whippings and beatings. Unknowingly, they were punishing the innocent Motoki. One day, during these whipping, Shiki came out. Breaking from his bonds, He beat the living sh*t out of them. Forcing the only conscious one to remove the slave collar, he left to forge a life of his own. At first, he made a living doing simple jobs, all the while learning new spells and growing stronger. When the call for mercenaries was issued, he signed up, thinking it was a good way to make use of his strength. Because of his short statue, and rather feminine and frail looking appearance, many people don;t take him seriously. That all changes when they see him in action. Appearance: |
Oct 30, 2010 2:22 PM
#4
@Harem: looks good, accepted. Looks like you accidentally double posted. I'll leave you to delete one of them, but remember that it WILL lag. Don't accidentally delete both. |
AbstractCalamityOct 30, 2010 2:26 PM
Oct 31, 2010 8:54 AM
#5
Name:D-V Age:28 Race: Human Class (optional): Axeman Abilities: Is powerful and quick, he has two twin double bladed axes Personality: A straightforward person mostly, at sometimes he acts differently occasionally Bio: He has nothing important in his past, he lived as a normal noble, he used to keep watching things happening outside, just waiting, he wanted to become a mercenary for a long time and became one when he was 20 (but the diffrence is he wears a Mexican Jarabe Tapatio in black colors) Appearance: |
D-VNov 20, 2010 3:22 AM
Oct 31, 2010 12:09 PM
#7
@D-V: No go, I'm afraid. I mean, a machine gun? Seriously? Those are centuries away. And do try to add more than just "he's got amnesia" for the bio. Talk a bit about what he's been through after that, at least. |
Nov 1, 2010 5:20 AM
#8
I have a bad headache... and its fantasy... so it can mean I came from somewhere other than earth..... muhahaha |
Nov 1, 2010 11:34 AM
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Nov 1, 2010 1:51 PM
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Nov 4, 2010 8:36 AM
#11
What century is this?? I want it to be 17th cus then I can use Flintlocks : P |
Nov 9, 2010 11:29 AM
#12
Name: Sion Vesperina Amarathan Age:23 Race: Human Class (optional): Knight Abilities: Sion possess the Ultra-rare ability 'Magic Cancellation'. This ability, which is constantly active, cancels out all magic that Sion come in contact with, effectively rendering all spells useless. It is because of this ability that she is considered to be the natural enemy to all Mages. The downside is that its is virtually impossible for Sion to use magic herself. Instead, she utilizes an alternative form of energy, Ki. This energy is the opposite of Magical energy, since it is generated within one's own body, and used mainly in conjunction with sword strikes. A master swordsman, she has great skill with a blade. She is a fearsome opponent. Personality:Cool, calm and composed, she rarely looses her temper. Preferring to get straight to the point, she can come across as cold, put is generally quite a nice person. Very smart. Bio: A former knight, serving the Old Ardiane Kingdom. Sion was an Model Knight, and a excellent leader of men. Hargaus, The Prime minister of Ardiane, was a corrupt man. For 5 years, he spent his free time gathering loyal forces. Performing a Coup D'tate, invading the capital. Even all seemed lost, Sion stayed by her lord's side, fighting desperately to protect him. She fought valiantly, killing a large number of enemy soldiers. But there too many, and she forced back to the Castle Balcony, and cast over the side, into the ocean. A normal person wouldn't have survived, but Lady Luck was on Sion's side. She lived, washed up on the shores of Fuso. She was taking in by a young couple from the Shinmei clan. They took care of her, and nursed her back to health. At all the time, Sion resented herself. She wasn't strong enough to fulfill her duty, to protect her lord. It was then that She swore revenge on the treacherous bastard, Hargaus. After witnessing the swordsmanship of the Shinmei warriors, she was amazed by their strength. They made use of a strange power, able to cleave boulders in two with one strike. This power is what she needed. After much negotiating, they agreed to tell her their secrets, and train her. The secret to their strength was Ki, and the channeling of it. It took many months, but SIon mastered the use of this energy. She trained for many years, building up her strength. She also learned how to channel her natural Magic Cancellation powers into her sword, allowing her to slice through spells, thus making combat against multiple foes easier. After roughly 5 years, Sion left Fuso, and set sail for her homeland. But when she arrived at Ardiane, she was shocked at what she saw. The once great kingdom of Ardiane was abandoned, turned to ruins. After much investigating, she discovered why. After Hargaus took control, he ruled with an Iron fist. This caused discontent between the citizens, and also neighboring nations. They claimed that Hargaus's takeover was shameful, and demanding he relinquish control. Of course, Hargaus refused, drunk on power, and war broke out, leaving Ardiane in a sorry state. Hargaus, being the coward he was, lived, fleeing from Ardiane. No-one knows where he is, or what he is doing now. Sion became a mercenary soon after. Even now, she searches for Hargaus, hoping to take her revenge on him and bring honor to the memory of Ardiane. Appearance: |
ChotgoriinNov 13, 2010 3:04 PM
Nov 10, 2010 3:55 PM
#13
@D-V: Flintlocks, no. However, gunpowder does exist, as do primitive firearms. The guns of this era have a fuse that is manually lit, just like a cannon, but smaller. I'm not very good with history, so I'm not basing this off any real time period, but think pre-Renaissance. @Harem: Looking good so far. |
Nov 12, 2010 5:57 AM
#14
Name: Felix Gabbana Age: 19 Race: Human/Mutant Abilities: Memory manipulation - Ability to erase or enhance the memories of another, only if they are asleep. Good skill with knifes. Personality: Basically emotionless, acts like he has emotions so that he fits into society. Fulfils his killing tendencies by killing random animals or maybe the odd homeless/elderly person. Speaks his mind and unable to control anger. Bio: Grew up in a normal, wealthy merchant family. Until he was 5, when he caught his dad killing a man. Unsure of what to do, he told his mother who then reported him to the police in shock. It was later found out that his dad was a serial killer and that he had gotten away with it for many years. He was then sentenced to death for his crimes. A year later, his mother, who had believed her husband was innocent suddenly went missing, presumed dead. Felix was then adopted into a family of farmers, much poorer than him. Felix hated the family, but knew it was all he had. He helped on the farm, but could not stop thinking about what his father did. Curious to find out what it feels like to kill, he started to kill some chickens. He soon moved up to pigs and then sheep, it became an addiction. His foster father obviously noticed his animals being killed and one day he caught Felix killing a sheep. Scared about how he was going to react, he hid away in the barn. During the night, Felix went up to his foster fathers room, planning on killing him. However, when he touched his foster fathers head, about to stab him, he felt something strange. Felix then experienced a flashback, but not one of his own. It was when he was caught killing, but from his foster fathers perceptive. Confused and scared by this, he thought of removing it and took his hand from his head. The flashback stopped. Felix ran back to the barn, too freaked out to kill anything. The next morning, Felix gathered up some courage to go to breakfast. But to his surprise, his foster father was not angry. Actually, he acted the normal friendly way. Felix decided not to talk about what had happened and it was never mentioned again. When he was 10, he again discovered his power and used it frequently to get away with his little murders. His foster father became concerned about him, he noticed Felix being anti social - not making any friends or spending a lot of time with the family. He spent most days out in the field and he noticed animals going missing, but not remembering how. His foster father also realised other aspects of his memory fading. Just like Felix's mother, he suddenly went missing. Felix stayed with his foster mother, who was also deteriorating because of Felix, until he was 18 and moved out. He has spent the last year travelling around Aesera, doing small jobs to make a living and learning how to fit into society. He now lives around Serakaar, as jobs are in high demand and the high population means that there's more people to feed his tendencies. Appearance: |
Nov 14, 2010 3:12 PM
#16
@Harem: Accepted! That also reminds me, to any future people making characters: creating new places and history for your character is generally a good thing. I've left the setting pretty open, intentionally, so that people could do just that. |
Nov 20, 2010 3:24 AM
#18
I couldn't write much, im sick, and im to lazy to change it |
Nov 20, 2010 2:04 PM
#19
@D-V: Looks OK, accepted. Though I do want you to clear something up for me. when you say "double bladed axes," do you mean blades on each end, or blades to either side of one end? Both are fine, it just wasn't very clear. |
Nov 21, 2010 3:12 AM
#20
2 Blades, one on the left end, and one on the right end |
Nov 23, 2010 3:15 AM
#21
Btw, im posting a character theme song (For D-V) because im REALLY bored and I love this song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lpb_bdeS-CI |
Nov 23, 2010 2:02 PM
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Nov 25, 2010 7:51 AM
#23
Dec 9, 2010 10:59 AM
#24
Name:Armir Age:21 Race: Human Class (optional): None Abilities: The Black Wing. It is a ancient spell, in which the user ingrains several symbols into their Skin, and channel into them magic. Because of the nature of the ritual, their is a high chance that the person will die from the strain. It allows the user to create massive black-chain swords from their right wrist. The chains that connect the swords to the wrist are of a indeterminable length. The swords themselves are controlled through a combination of gestures and mental impulses detected through the skin. Currently, Armir is able to create four blades at anyone time. When the blades are close together, they resemble a black wing, hence the name. Personality: Armir is usually seen smiling, and can come across as a bit of a oddball. He can be cruel, violent and even brutal in combat, but is generally friendly, and willing to help those in need. He has a sort of twisted view of the world. Bio: Armir was born in the southern province of Miscktech, in the small town of Karvelk. He came from a relatively wealthy family, and enjoyed his life. But one day, his peaceful little life was shattered. A traveling gang of Marauders entered the town, burning and killing all before them. Armir managed to escape, pushed through an escape hatch by his big sister, right before she was cleaved in two. Wandering the woods around the town, Armir nearly died of starvation, having no knowledge of what was and what wasn't safe to eat. Luckily, after about of a week, he stumbled across a small village. Originally, the villagers were a but wary of him, but allowed him to stay. It wasn't long before they had accepted him as one of their own. He learned that an old solider lived in the village. At his request, the solider taught Armir how to fight, and performed the ritual, Black Wing. Armir trained for many years in order to master it. At the age of 19, Armir left the small village. He traveled North, to Serakaar, after hearing of the trouble that had arisen there, and the work that required a person of his skill. Appearance: |
ChotgoriinDec 10, 2010 2:24 PM
Dec 9, 2010 12:31 PM
#25
@Harem: Ah, yes, the Seeking Eyes of Death Perception. Definitely one of my favorite abilities. I'm tempted to allow it, but unfortunately it's just too powerful. No go, I'm afraid. |
Dec 16, 2010 12:50 PM
#27
Name: Ibukenu Safa ( first name last, last name first) Age: 17 Race: Human Class: technicain Abilities: Wepara: The ability to absorb weapons seen as belonging to me ( I have to beat the master, purchase it, or make it to do this). the more weapons i have absorbed into me, they will weight me down, if i want more speed, i have to give up weapons, plus, more weapons, the more the weapons can heat up or cool down inside me, making temp differences matter ( in extremes, i get colder more then others, and i get more out of heat then others) Personality: He is a very independent sort of person, though can not do anything on his own. He believes violence can solve almost anything, except when it deals with love. He tries hard to be humble, yet loves attention, it takes time to get him started but once he has, there is no stopping him. He doesn't catch on very fast and yet always seems to be able to improvise. Bio: He adopted too young to remember anything else. Adopted parents used orphans as experiments in summoning. like some 5% or their children they adopt, my procedure went well, bestowing the powers of a goddess ( see abilities). Thanks to the fact that i survived, the parents give me all the support a rich person can imagine, but only support, no spending money, giving me a great place to live, but barely anything to put into it. As time goes own, He discovered a love for writing and find many inspirations everywhere. He tries to incorporate his real life into his books, using the book as a parallel to his life. His books became a little popular with the fantasy group thanks to the unbelievability of his powers and the people he meets. The large family he has does their best to help him whenever they can, but most are greedy and will either try to take from him, or try to trick him. Those that don't usually can't help because they are being ran around by the meaner members of the family. Appearance: Theme Song: |
SafaridorDec 19, 2010 4:17 AM
Check out my poetry on Deviant Art |
Dec 20, 2010 10:07 PM
#28
@Safaridor: Accepted, but do RP in third person. Great power, by the way. And I also see that the theme song idea is catching on. See what you've started, D-V? |
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