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@tuba mind checking my char once again then?

Sep 24, 2016 2:04 PM

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Name : Viole Zahard
Alias/Stage Name/Nickname: The Exiled
Level: 1
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Class: Rogue
Appearance:
Total Power Points: 12/12
Main power: Blood curse
Requirements:
- 20 Mana

When Gae Bolg inflicts a wound deals that is deep enough after enchanting his attack a curse is activated, the minimum for this is a light wound so 6% hp dmg must be dealt in order for this to be activated. This inflicts 50% of the initial attacks damage every post for 3 posts.

This effect isn't stack able and when 15% hp dmg has been inflicted to Viole the curse will stop.

Cooldown: 2 posts after finished
Stats
Total Stat Points Boosters: 3
- Strength: Lv. 2
- Endurance: Lv. 1
- Stamina: Lv. 1
- Mana: Lv. 2
- Speed: Lv. 3
- Agility: Lv. 3
- Mana Regeneration: Lv. 1
- Perception: Lv. 2
Final Force: Death Flight
Requirements:
-50 mana
-When thrown the enemy must be in eyesight

Viole throws Gae Bolg at full force, during this throw it will continue to follow its target until it has hit them once if they are cursed. If it is blocked with a shield then it will lose power due to the loss of Kinetic energy, making the damage it deal less damage.

If the target is cursed and the spear will follow its target then the spear targets the chest area. And because of the massive velocity of the spear, it behaves like a missile in the fact that its fast, but it can't make sharp turns.

What happens after the block will be different depending on the shield that is used. If it is a shield that is in your hands that is part of your power then the shield will block it but the damage will result in damage to the arm(s). If it is just a equipment piece then it will go through the shield, the damage dealt will also depend on the endurance stat at all times.

The speed of Death Flight is dependent on Strength and Mana stats
*The added speed of the spear is equivalent to strength stat.
*The initial speed of spear is equivalent to the mana stat.
Counter Force: Healing Exoskeleton
This can only be activated when he is 50% hp or less. When it is activated a lobster like exoskeleton forms on the exterior of his body which heals his wounds. However it can only heal 5% hp every turn until he has recovered 20% or if the exoskeleton has absorbed 15% hp damage making it disappear.
Equipment and Weaponry:
Gae Bolg: A spear that was previously owned by his father before his death, he has promised that he will use it until his last fight.
Skills:
- Master Spearman
- Excellent at throwing
- Multitasking
Biography:
Viole was born in a clan of proud warriors who lived in the mountains, he was the son of a well respected man in the clan and the daughter of the chief of the village. But because his father had done something unforgivable by bringing a outsider to the village he had been executed, this would normally also mean his death if it wasn't for the fact that he was the grandson of the chief.

He had been spared with punishment of exile at the age of 11 years, knowing what was best and not going for revenge he lived his life training and becoming stronger in order to prove that he was worthy of becoming a clan member again and meeting his mother. In order to at least keep him safe seeing as that he didn't want his grandson die he gave him a treasure of their clan, The Healing exoskeleton as a prayer of safety.

During his voyage of strength he met with the banner of Olympia, he thought that there he would find true strength that could show his clan that he belongs with them again.
Personality: He is a fierce warrior that enjoys combating a worthy opponent, but he truly wants to believe in justice but knows that its sadly enough not real in this world and is easy to get to known and get along with. He has a playful attitude and a carefree approach to life, but takes it serious when in battle. He has no opposition to killing but would like to hold it as a last resort, but he doesn't think take nicely against anyone who insults him and finds it unlike able if someone disrespects someone whom follows a path of solitude and misfortune for someone else.
Additional Information: Gae Bolg can't be used by anybody else because of the blood curse
Theme (Optional):
Residential Preferences:

-Is your character okay sharing a roof with people of different genders: Yes
-Do you have a preference for which existing characters to live with? If not then your character will be assigned randomly: No

ByakugaranSep 25, 2016 1:53 PM

Sep 25, 2016 12:35 AM

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@Uniqvoid
If you don't mind, I'll be taking over some of the characters.

she then emits a enormously fearful wail making her enemies shake in fear.

This is effectively powerplay:

What is powerplay?

For this to be used Ranaa needs to have been stabbed atleast 3 times in the fight, either by herself or the enemy.

Which means she can stab herself, dealing slight amount of damage to herself compared to what her opponent could do. It'd better to have a certain health threshold when you can use it.

Minor Power: Sub-zero dominance
After a delay of 1 second, Ranaa can freeze a spot. When contact is made with this the opponent loses -2 speed for the next post. The freezing can only be done where Ranaa's hands or chains are and costs 10 mana per spot. The spot dissapears in 2 posts.

What happens if Ranaa freezes a living being? Does it then lose speed or is it then Frozen for two posts? How big is the area? As big as what was touching the spot? That could be really strong for a -2 Speed, which costs 10 Mana. Can she also touch her own weapon to apply this? Making it, once again, pretty strong for a 10 Mana thing.

Oh, and. How long does the debuff on her Final Force last?

Sep 25, 2016 12:44 AM

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@simplicityknight
yeah sure is fine too.

Changed the first two things mentioned, dont really have time to look at the power right now however. I also dont really get what you mean by the debuff on her FF, maybe i overlooked something.

Sep 25, 2016 12:53 AM

#106

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@Uniqvoid
I overlooked it. Sorry for that. The debuff is where you lower other's Stats.

Sep 25, 2016 12:55 AM

#107

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With her current level she can carry 10 vials, with the contents of her pouch revealed at the beginning of every fight.

Due to the low amount of drawbacks this power has, I'd also ask for a low amount of variety in combat, lowering the amount of vials she can carry. At least needing to pick one above the other, 6 vials would do the trick.

Antidote vial: Cure a biological affliction such as poisons, burns and other status impediments. The effects last for two turns before the recipient is susceptible to afflictions again 25% toxicity

A burn shouldn't be able to be stopped by a potion. Unless that potion is water that is thrown over the place of the burn.

Res vial: Cures stat related afflictions, such as an impairment to strength. 30% toxicity

What is the max amount of debuff this can rewind? What if the affliction was -5 Levels of Strength, or -10 Levels of Strength.

I was also wondering if the buff vials stack, as well as the duration of those. The Oculus Vial also increases a higher amount of stats for a lower amount of Toxicity than the Berserker Vial. If one potion is stronger than the other, you'd expect it to have more drawbacks, not less.

She can currently carry 7 of these into a fight and, as with the medicinal vials

Same thing with the bombs, I suggest making her choose one over the other. Since these bombs are much stronger as well, I'd suggest an even lower amount of bombs/fight.

Since these bombs already give a debuff, adding Toxicity to it would increase it's strengths. As of now, there are no drawbacks to these bombs. Their radius also isn't mentioned.

Regardless of the amount of health vials inserted, healing cannot exceed 21%

This seems unnecessary to me, you can heal more than 21%.

Sep 25, 2016 1:02 AM

#108

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When Gae Bolg inflicts a wound deal enough, the minimum for this is a light wound so 6% hp dmg must be dealt in order for this to be activated. He can the choose to pay mana. If he chooses to pay the mana a curse will be on the target on the next 3 posts this inflicts 7% hp dmg every turn.

I suggest he should pay the mana to put the curse onto his next attack. Like an enhanced attack. Other than that, I also suggest that the damage inflicted after should be an amount dependent on how much damage the initial attack dealt that had inflicted the curse.

If the target is cursed and the spear will follow its then the spear targets the chest area. And because of the massive velocity of the spear, it behaves like a missile in the fact that its fast, but it can't make sharp turns.

How fast? Many projectiles depend on the user's Strength to add velocity to it.

Does the homing effect only happen if they're cursed?

Sep 25, 2016 1:18 AM

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-A enchanted attack in fine by me but because of the chance of failure can i lower the cost of the enhancement.

- Do you mean like the curse does the dmg inflicted by the spear on the initial attack over 3 turns?

- I was thinking that the speed is same amount of as my characters agility.

- The homing effect is only when cursed, this is because Plinius said that it was powerful too always home

Sep 25, 2016 1:25 AM

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-A enchanted attack in fine by me but because of the chance of failure can i lower the cost of the enhancement.

Fine with me.

Do you mean like the curse does the dmg inflicted by the spear on the initial attack over 3 turns?

A percentage of that damage, for example.

I was thinking that the speed is same amount of as my characters agility.

What is the reason for it to be the same speed as your character's Agility? Since it uses Magic to move like that, Mana would be the stat many would think of. Strength would aid in initial speed.

- The homing effect is only when cursed, this is because Plinius said that it was powerful too always home

That actually depends on the drawbacks. But it is fine like this.

Sep 25, 2016 1:35 AM

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@SimplicityKnight

-How high of a percentage do you want like between 70% or 80% or lower?

-The thing with the speed of the spear is that it should go around the 4 speed stat since that is the fastest speed a character can go right right now. But if its dependent on my mana stat then it will be really slow since i don't have a large need for that stat.

Sep 25, 2016 2:00 AM

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@Byakugaran

-How high of a percentage do you want like between 70% or 80% or lower?

Since it's a constant damage over 3 turns, it should be dealing at least 1/3th of the initial damage each turn, making the full amount ( after the effect has ended ), at least 6%+2%+2%+2% = 12% Damage. Anywhere between 33% and 67% should do it depending on mana cost.

-The thing with the speed of the spear is that it should go around the 4 speed stat since that is the fastest speed a character can go right right now. But if its dependent on my mana stat then it will be really slow since i don't have a large need for that stat.

That does not give a valid reason to use Agility as a stat to justify a magical spell. If it is merely to counter the fastest Speed Character, will you be asking for a raise in Agility once someone has level 5 Speed? Or what if your character does not have the necessary amount of CRE to go up, and would be stuck below Superhuman class stats for awhile, would you ask for an increase in Agility to match that person's speed stat?

The Final Force would become your need for that stat.

Sep 25, 2016 2:20 AM

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@Uniqvoid
Please tell me once you're done looking at the power.

Sep 25, 2016 2:22 AM

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Final Force: It's Literally a Grenade
Johnny takes out a basic fragmentation grenade, unpins it, and throws it or drops it nearby his opponent/s. It explodes by Johnny's next turn after it is thrown. It has a five meter radius. The closer you are to the grenade when it explodes the more damage it will do.
For some unforeseeable reason the grenade requires 60 mana to be thrown, and he can't have higher than 65% health to throw it.

Not sure what I should think of this. I think that grenades can just be equipment of choice/weapons of choice, if handguns are allowed.

Sep 25, 2016 2:58 AM

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The speed of Death Flight is dependent on Strength and Mana stats
*The initial speed of the spear is equivalent to strength stat.
*The speed of spear is increased equivalent to the mana stat.

Logically speaking, Strength is where the speed is increased, while the Mana Stat dictates the base speed. But Strength only aids in the first launch, once it is blocked, it loses momentum. Once it is parried, it loses momentum. Once it misses and has to take a different path, it loses momentum.

Sep 25, 2016 11:37 AM

#116

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@simplicityknight

Looked at the power for a bit, i tried to follow your directions. But some of the stuff was a bit hard to visualize, so apologies if i missed something

Sep 25, 2016 1:34 PM

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I'll add these to the sheet when I'm at my laptop.

changelog said:

instead of bringing all her vials she now comes equipped with three vials or bombs, and can produce new ones at a rate of one per each dedicated crafting post (must actually make them and cannot do anything else for the post she generates one in).
That should deal with the quantity and drawback issues.
I gave that less toxicity because it's in the system the shortest (one post). I'll change it to 27%
buffs can stack but that's the point of the toxicity, it's a way of limiting it without limiting it completely.
I'll remove the burn thing
I'll remove the inhibited health cap too.

Sound good?

WhoremoansSep 25, 2016 1:44 PM

There's a lady who's sure
All that glitters is gold
And she's buying a stairway to heaven
When she gets there she knows
If the stores are all closed
With a word she can get what she came for
Oh oh oh oh and she's buying a stairway to heaven

Sep 25, 2016 1:38 PM

#118

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@Whoremoans
Yes, it does.

Sep 25, 2016 1:42 PM

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@Uniqvoid
Imagine your character touching another character, and then freezing that spot of the person. If she touches their entire body, or limbs, they could immobilize their target. Or, instead of becoming frozen, will they have their Speed lowered?

Is it stackable? Like, if the opponent steps on two areas after another, would their speed be reduced by 4 then?

Sep 25, 2016 1:49 PM

#120

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@simplicityknight

When making direct contact the same effect is just in play as the spots for now, namely losing speed. And no this is not stackable, that would be pretty broken lol (imagine losing 6 speed after stepping on 3 spots)

Sep 25, 2016 1:58 PM

#121

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Byakugaran said:

Name : Viole Zahard
Alias/Stage Name/Nickname: The Exiled
Level: 1
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Class: Rogue
Appearance:
Total Power Points: 12/12
Main power: Blood curse
Requirements:
- 20 Mana

When Gae Bolg inflicts a wound deals that is deep enough after enchanting his attack a curse is activated, the minimum for this is a light wound so 6% hp dmg must be dealt in order for this to be activated. This inflicts 50% of the initial attacks damage every post for 3 posts.

This effect isn't stack able and when 15% hp dmg has been inflicted to Viole the curse will stop.

Cooldown: 2 posts after finished
Stats
Total Stat Points Boosters: 3
- Strength: Lv. 2
- Endurance: Lv. 1
- Stamina: Lv. 1
- Mana: Lv. 2
- Speed: Lv. 3
- Agility: Lv. 3
- Mana Regeneration: Lv. 1
- Perception: Lv. 2
Final Force: Death Flight
Requirements:
-50 mana
-When thrown the enemy must be in eyesight

Viole throws Gae Bolg at full force, during this throw it will continue to follow its target until it has hit them once if they are cursed. If it is blocked with a shield then it will lose power due to the loss of Kinetic energy, making the damage it deal less damage.

If the target is cursed and the spear will follow its target then the spear targets the chest area. And because of the massive velocity of the spear, it behaves like a missile in the fact that its fast, but it can't make sharp turns.

What happens after the block will be different depending on the shield that is used. If it is a shield that is in your hands that is part of your power then the shield will block it but the damage will result in damage to the arm(s). If it is just a equipment piece then it will go through the shield, the damage dealt will also depend on the endurance stat at all times.

The speed of Death Flight is dependent on Strength and Mana stats
*The added speed of the spear is equivalent to strength stat.
*The initial speed of spear is equivalent to the mana stat.
Counter Force: Healing Exoskeleton
This can only be activated when he is 50% hp or less. When it is activated a lobster like exoskeleton forms on the exterior of his body which heals his wounds. However it can only heal 5% hp every turn until he has recovered 20% or if the exoskeleton has absorbed 15% hp damage making it disappear.
Equipment and Weaponry:
Gae Bolg: A spear that was previously owned by his father before his death, he has promised that he will use it until his last fight.
Skills:
- Master Spearman
- Excellent at throwing
- Multitasking
Biography:
Viole was born in a clan of proud warriors who lived in the mountains, he was the son of a well respected man in the clan and the daughter of the chief of the village. But because his father had done something unforgivable by bringing a outsider to the village he had been executed, this would normally also mean his death if it wasn't for the fact that he was the grandson of the chief.

He had been spared with punishment of exile at the age of 11 years, knowing what was best and not going for revenge he lived his life training and becoming stronger in order to prove that he was worthy of becoming a clan member again and meeting his mother. In order to at least keep him safe seeing as that he didn't want his grandson die he gave him a treasure of their clan, The Healing exoskeleton as a prayer of safety.

During his voyage of strength he met with the banner of Olympia, he thought that there he would find true strength that could show his clan that he belongs with them again.
Personality: He is a fierce warrior that enjoys combating a worthy opponent, but he truly wants to believe in justice but knows that its sadly enough not real in this world and is easy to get to known and get along with. He has a playful attitude and a carefree approach to life, but takes it serious when in battle. He has no opposition to killing but would like to hold it as a last resort, but he doesn't think take nicely against anyone who insults him and finds it unlike able if someone disrespects someone whom follows a path of solitude and misfortune for someone else.
Additional Information: Gae Bolg can't be used by anybody else because of the blood curse
Theme (Optional):
Residential Preferences:

-Is your character okay sharing a roof with people of different genders: Yes
-Do you have a preference for which existing characters to live with? If not then your character will be assigned randomly: No

Approved by Your BOI

Sep 26, 2016 4:56 AM

#122

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Name : Ranaa
Alias/Stage Name/Nickname: Ranaa the slaughterer, Ranaa the cold
Level: 1
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Class: Duelist
Appearance:
Total Power Points: 12
Main Power:
None
Minor Power: Sub-zero dominance
After a delay of 1 second, Ranaa can freeze a spot. When contact is made with this area the opponent loses -2 speed for the next post, direct contact with the opponent has the same effect. The area's can only be created where Ranaa's hands or chains are and costs 10 mana per spot, and 15 mana when creating a spot via the chains. The spot dissapears in 2 posts. Spots can not be created in mid-air, and the spots can not grow larger then the size of the part that created it. Speed loss is not stackable.
Stats
Total Stat Points Boosters: 4
- Strength: Lv. 5
- Endurance: Lv. 1
- Stamina: Lv. 1
- Mana: Lv. 1
- Speed: Lv. 3
- Agility: Lv. 3
- Mana Regeneration: Lv. 1
- Perception: Lv. 1
Final Force: Wail of the broken
Ranaa's aura starts getting really cold and her eyes start bleeding, she then emits a enormously fearful wail which tries to inspire fear into her enemies. They lose 1 speed, 1 agility and 1 strength for 3 posts. And if their endurance is level 1 it has a chance to reduce their will to fight.

For this to be used Ranaa needs to have been stabbed atleast 3 times in the fight, either by herself or the enemy, and this needs to have caused atleast 20% damage. It costs 45 mana. This doesn't work if they don't look her in the eye. She starts preparing for 1 post, the scream comes in the post after that.
Counter Force: Mind field
Raana's Eca forces her mind in full defense mode, Losing 2 speed but gaining 2 agility and 3 perception. She uses 15 mana for this ability. State lasts for 3 posts
Equipment and Weaponry:
- 2 Large chains made out of stainless steel, about 2 meters long and conductive in heat and electricity. Seeing as Ranaa always carries them with her they feel a bit cold to touch
-A small knife
-A set of gloves for when she decides to lock her power, mostly weared out of combat.
Skills:
-Eca (Excessive Concentration ability)- Ranaa is able to concentrate enormously on one task, rapidly improving the efficiency of it, and allowing her to learn things effectively.
But the downside is that other things around her go completely past her.
-Small time lie detection- Ranaa is able to tell up to a certain degree if someone is lying or not when watching their body movements.
-Chain fighting-She is quite effecient as using chains as a martial arts weapon.
-Knife fighting- She can fight with her knife if she lost her chains somehow, but never with the mastery level of her chains
Biography:
Personality:
Ranaa is simply said murderous, she loves killing and hurting others, but she acts in a graceful way normally. She is also able to be very evasive, since she spend a lot of time dodging cops. Ranaa also is good in manipulating people, since she lured countless of people to their demise by acting as a girl you can trust. Once in a while Ranaa shows lesbian behavior, acting very seductive to girls she likes. this is also the moment she is probably the scariest.
Additional Information: If you somehow manage to make her guilty of her deeds or remind her of her youth, you can temporarily break her. Reducing her to a cowering, crying ball of despair. This will not work in battle however.
Theme (Optional):
Residential Preferences:

-Is your character okay sharing a roof with people of different genders: No
-Do you have a preference for which existing characters you want your characters to live with? If not then your character will be assigned randomly: No

Approved by Your BOI
Your house is B-2
Not too much yuri pls

Sep 26, 2016 10:15 AM

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Honestly, I'm kinda just too lazy to come up with a more creative FF for Johnny, and I don't really mind if I could get a grenade otherwise. So, unless you think I absolutely should get a different FF, I'm okay with sticking with a grenade.

Sep 26, 2016 10:23 AM

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@MontyMars
How about just an up in Stats?
I do not mind the Grenade as FF, but if that is the case, you could add some additional effects to it. Throwing a grenade should not cost Mana or have a one-time use.

Sep 26, 2016 10:24 AM

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@Whoremoans
If you've finished editing, please tell me.
Also, in my earlier response, I forgot to tell you that you've used more than 6 Points. Please edit it accordingly as well.

Sep 26, 2016 10:47 AM

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I added an extra ability to the grenade to make it a bit more unique.

Sep 26, 2016 3:46 PM

#127

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@MontyMars
That's an incendiary. What you're describing is an incendiary. More commony known is the Molotov variant.

Sep 26, 2016 4:41 PM

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SimplicityKnight said:
@Whoremoans
If you've finished editing, please tell me.
Also, in my earlier response, I forgot to tell you that you've used more than 6 Points. Please edit it accordingly as well.

(^o^)/

There's a lady who's sure
All that glitters is gold
And she's buying a stairway to heaven
When she gets there she knows
If the stores are all closed
With a word she can get what she came for
Oh oh oh oh and she's buying a stairway to heaven

Sep 26, 2016 8:37 PM

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Lin's ready to get some people deady
I'm f*cking delirious, need some of Mom's spaghetti
Gotta keep 'em memes comin' like I'm Crocker, Betty
Gonna go to sleep and hope I don't wet my beddy

Sep 26, 2016 11:20 PM

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@Whoremoans
Your total power points still mention it being at 6. This is actually 12.

The Eros bomb seems a lot like powerplaying.

The antidote still affects burns.

Berserker vial seem to increase perception, did you mean strength by any chance?

Sep 26, 2016 11:44 PM

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@Tuba

she is refunded 50% of the mana used for the ability and her next four basic attacks are free.

I suggest making it either/or. Not both.

and the travel time of the bolts are increased to the speed of an arrow,

The speed of an arrow is variable. But the part after mentions its speed.

Your FF has way too many bonuses for it's prerequisites and conditions.. is what I'd say if I knew what you meant by state of focus.

Sep 27, 2016 8:19 AM

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Changed the passive to an either statement
FF now details state of focus, removed 25% mana on cast, added prerequisite of 8 successful basic attacks/4 abilities

Sep 27, 2016 8:36 AM

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@Tuba
What I meant is that you choose one of the two to stay, the other goes. So she either gets mana refunded, or she gets 4 free basic attacks.

Since the CF doesn't have any prerequisites other than the standard Health prereq, + the self-incapacitation condition, it seems to give way more than it could. +6 Stat levels in total, increased effectivity of her ability, disabling all drawbacks as more bonuses are added. And this for a total of 5 turns. It seems highly unlikely that the enemy won't be defeated by then, unless she fights against higher ranks. But compared to equal ranks, the condition doesn't seem to mean much.

Sep 28, 2016 6:19 AM

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Changed passive to only include 4 free basic attacks
FF prerequisite tweaked to 6 basics / 3 abilities
Deleted 2x damage on CF, if it's still too overpowered I'll edit the duration of the CF

Sep 28, 2016 8:12 AM

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@Tuba
This is just to clarify, but what is the damage on a normal round?
Other than that, I think it's fine.

Sep 28, 2016 11:57 AM

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Should be in order now

There's a lady who's sure
All that glitters is gold
And she's buying a stairway to heaven
When she gets there she knows
If the stores are all closed
With a word she can get what she came for
Oh oh oh oh and she's buying a stairway to heaven

Sep 28, 2016 12:03 PM

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@Whoremoans
Once again, the Eros bomb seems a lot like powerplaying.

I think you have to tweak your FF in order to fit the updated power, or maybe not. It still says "Must have at least 3 slots free" [ And so does your CF ], while you can only fill 3 slots. This would mean that you would have none of your vials/bombs and try and create a mixture of.. well.. those 3 that are not there.

Unless you mean something else by slots. If that's the case, pay this section no heed. Only the first sentence.

Sep 28, 2016 12:18 PM

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It's a one turn stun, how is that powerplaying? Pssh, fine, I'll change it to some other means of stunning. And done.

She starts with three, she can make more. They just take a post to make.

There's a lady who's sure
All that glitters is gold
And she's buying a stairway to heaven
When she gets there she knows
If the stores are all closed
With a word she can get what she came for
Oh oh oh oh and she's buying a stairway to heaven

Sep 28, 2016 1:30 PM

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@Whoremoans
The way it was described is powerplaying. > The Nitrogen bomb needs a freeze duration.

Your FF and CF require 3 slots being free, in which they mix every vial/bomb they have into one vial/bomb. But the problem here is, there are only 3 slots, so they have nothing to mix once the FF/CF is activated.

Sep 28, 2016 4:13 PM

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By that I mean that the slots Are loaded. Considering the radius isn't it obvious what it would freeze? Fine I'll make it one post. Just approve it now.

There's a lady who's sure
All that glitters is gold
And she's buying a stairway to heaven
When she gets there she knows
If the stores are all closed
With a word she can get what she came for
Oh oh oh oh and she's buying a stairway to heaven

Sep 28, 2016 10:38 PM

#141

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Elise Midnight (Subject M-17)

"Midnight, targeted and shooting"

Name : Elise Midnight (Subject M-17)
Alias/Stage Name/Nickname: Midnight Shooter
Level: 1
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Class: Sharpshooter
Appearance:
Total Power Points: 12/12
Main Power: In the Midnight
In the midnight is an ability that gives Elise or Subject M-17 the power to control the darkness. Using her modified body, she could use these powers to give her an advantage when sniping her enemies.
Dark Smoke: Using the darkness, Elise could have a burst of dark smoke come out from the shadows. This will act as a smoke screen to anyone, but with Elise's enhanced body she can see through the smoke easily. This effect is especially enhanced when she is placed in a nighttime setting. In a nighttime setting, the smoke becomes much thicker and will be harder to blow away. This smoke will stay for a duration of 5 posts with a cooldown of 4. This ability also costs costs 20 mana
Nighttime Flavor: Elise pushes dark powers into her current sniper mag which gives the bullet a dark aura. That dark aura releases dark smoke when shot and will spread through out the area. If smoke is already present, then the bullet will be shot faster through the smoke. The smoke however will be easier to blow away and only has a duration of 2 posts. The cooldown is also 3 posts and its mana cost is 10 mana
Zero Shadow: Elise shoots a shadow out of her palm to create a flashbang like explosion. The flash won't be a sudden bright light, but instead a dark explosion that releases particles that blinds her target for a short time. This doesn't affect their vision soon after the effect wears off and while in effect, they are still able to use their other senses. The duration is 2 posts and the cooldown is 2. She only has 3 each battle, each helps her get out of situations where the enemy has found her and gets up close. Each grenade however needs to be filled with dark smoke in order to be usable. Each grenade will cost 10 mana.
Tactical Nightfall: The darkness will create a rope in which allows her to grapple down to a certain location. She can use this to get down from big ledges, jump from floor to floor, and she can even hang upside down to snipe someone. It allows her to get a good sight line if she needs it and it can also pull people and objects to her if she wants. She can also use this to climb to places where normally you'd have to climb or fly up to get to it. The grapple though isn't very durable and can be cut or shot easily. There is no duration or cooldown, but using a grapple will take 10 mana.
Minor Power: None
Stats
Total Stat Points Boosters: Costs 2 power points, increases stat level by one each
- Strength: Lv. 1
- Endurance: Lv. 1
- Stamina: Lv. 1 + 2
- Mana: Lv. 1
- Speed: Lv. 2
- Agility: Lv. 2
- Mana Regeneration: Lv. 1
- Perception: Lv. 3 + 1
Final Force: Re-Stratos
Requirements:
- M-17 must be in control
- Must be inside her dark smoke
- She had been spotted by an enemy.
As Subject M-17 is in control, her body is enhanced with bright green particles that comes from her back, knees and elbows. With that, it enhances M-17's speed and agility by +1. Her powers will also emit the green particles this time and her bullets will also emit the particles, even if Nightmare Flavor isn't used. The smoke is also much thicker and can also be manipulated like wind is blowing it by M-17. She could also shoot her Zero Shadow ability without using her grenades. Instead, it is shot out of her palms and the explosion will be bright green instead. She can also use her Tactical Nightfall and grapple farther than normal. The rope is also indestructible and very sturdy. Though this might be a powerful ability, it does have a duration. it can only be used for only 7 posts and when used, it will weaken M-17 by decreasing all stat points that isn't level 1 by 1 point.
Counter Force: Subject M-17
When Elise is under 50% health, her alter ego takes over her body. Her hair will turn white and her eyes will be red with a scope like appearance. With M-17 in control, her personality changes and her shots become more accurate giving her +1 in perception. Her close combat abilities are also better and since M-17 is the one who had the Midnight power in the first place, the abilities will have +1 duration time and -1 cooldown time. However, M-17 is much more reckless and likes to put herself into dangerous situations in order to carry out her plan. She also doesn't listen to any allies that gives her orders, but instead tries to carry out her own plan. She is also one who doesn't like to stay in one place so she would usually move everywhere even if she doesn't take a shot.
Equipment and Weaponry:
Midnight Sniper: Midnight carries a sniper that was given to her by her adopted mother. Elise treasures this for this is from her first and only family she has now. This sniper holds a combat knife inside its holster and has a scope that can zoom from 40 feet away to a mile with her sniper's ability to switch scopes. This sniper also shoots shadow bullets that cannot penetrate through flesh and armor, but can do a considerable amount of damage. Each hit will feel like a sledgehammer hit them.

Supersoldier Combat Knife: In the Midnight Sniper's holster, a knife is able to be unsheathed for close combat encounters. Its blade can be activated to vibrate to cut through flesh more effectively. From M-17's supersoldier institute, this knife was part of its armory in which she uses to escape the institute.
Skills: Hiding, singing, photography, video recording, first person shooters, hunting
Biography:
Personality:
Elise Midnight
- Quiet
- Caring
- Friendly
- Careful
- Generous
- Introverted
- Calm
- Brave
- Stoic
Subject M-17
- Loud
- Cocky
- Careless
- Selfish
- Tomboyish
- Playful
- Childish
- Violent
Additional Information: Elise cannot communicate with M-17, but M-17 can.
Theme (Optional):
Residential Preferences:
-Is your character okay sharing a roof with people of different genders: Yes
-Do you have a preference for which existing characters you want your characters to live with? If not then your character will be assigned randomly: No (Don't put her in the same house as my char)

Avnore_AlterOct 7, 2016 10:55 PM

Sep 29, 2016 8:21 AM

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@SimplicityKnight
I was planning on letting the opponent decide based on their endurance level/where it hit, as long as they can justify how much the bolt does logically

However, if you want my estimate:
2 shots to a limb = 10%
2 shots to the upper skull = 30%, lower skull (jaw) = 10%
2 shots to the body = 15%

These damage numbers are based off a normal endurance human

Sep 29, 2016 11:07 AM

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Whoremoans said:

Name : Dr. Pepper Potter
Alias/Stage Name/Nickname: Little Minx sunshine
Level: 1
Age: 29
Gender: female
Class: Rogue
Appearance:
Total Power Points: 12
Main Power: Apothecary

Pepper's main threat comes from her team benefitting and opponent-crushing concoctions. However, placing a stronger emphasis on style than functionality, she has room enough for only three of these vials or bombs. Though she can produce new ones, accomplished at a rate of one per each dedicated crafting post (must actually make them and cannot do anything else for the post she generates one in). With the exception of the nasty and blind bombs, none of the bombs have a radius of effect. Sticky in texture, they must be latched onto an individual where they are pierced by a series of tiny protruding needles that will instantly administer the effects of the chemicals. Both vials and bombs are accompanied by a specific toxicity level. At 50% toxicity, the affected individual will incur a 5% health loss per turn. This will increase at a proportional rate of +5% health for every 10% of toxicity. Toxicity reduces at a rate of 2.5% per turn.
Her health vials are as follows:
Health vial: Restore 7% health to herself or an ally. 10% toxicity
Antidote vial: Cure a biological affliction such as poisons, and other status impediments. The effects last for two turns before the recipient is susceptible to afflictions again 25% toxicity
Res vial: Cures stat related afflictions, such as an impairment to strength (2LV rectification cap at current level). 30% toxicity
Dexterity vial: Provides a two turn boost of one stat level to speed and agility 15% toxicity
Oculus vial: Provides a two turn boost of two stat levels to perception 25% toxicity
Venom bomb: Inflicts 30% toxicity on an enemy
LN2 bomb: A small 60 cm radius liquid nitrogen bomb that snap freezes anything in its radius.
Medusa bomb: Reduces speed and agility to 1, regardless of level, for one turn. 15% toxicity
Blind bomb: Renders the affected's sight useless for one turn 10% toxicity. 5 meter radius
Nasty Bomb:Explodes to produce a thick fog of repugnant smell that forces anyone in the area to reposition. Has a 10-meter radius of Effect. 24% Toxicity
Stats
Total Stat Points Boosters: 3
- Strength: Lv. 1
- Endurance: Lv. 1
- Stamina: Lv. 1
- Mana: Lv. 1
- Speed: Lv. 4
- Agility: Lv. 4
- Mana Regeneration: Lv. 1
- Perception: Lv. 2
Final Force: "I am become death, the destroyer of worlds"
Prerequisites:
- Must have 0% Toxicity
- Must have at least 3 slots free
- Requires one post of uninterrupted work
- Must have more bombs than vials
Pepper combines the effects of all her current bombs into one volatile concoction carrying all the effects of the inserted bombs (same effects stack) and toxicity. Working on this inflicts 55% toxicity upon herself. The radius of this bomb increases at a rate of five meters per bomb used.
Counter Force: "No one is useless in this world who lightens the burden of another"
- Must have 20% Toxicity or higher
- Must have at least 3 slots free
- Requires one post of uninterrupted work
- Must have more vials than bombs
- Team fight prerequisite: Must have at least one ally excluding herself below 30% health
Pepper combines the effects of all her current vials into one godsend of medication, carrying all the effects of the inserted vials (same effects stack) but with half the amount of toxicity. Working on this inflicts 35% toxicity upon herself. The radius of the effective range of this concoction increases at a rate of five meters per vial used.
Equipment and Weaponry:
A high-tech sword capable of being loaded with the same chemicals used in her venom bombs.To administer this chemical she must have either a venom bomb on her person or spend one turn in crafting phase (cannot attack or do any action other than craft for one turn). The sword deals 5% toxicity to an opponent per every venom bomb loaded into it. The current level cap is set at four bombs.

Other than that she carries around a small knife

And a standard pistol
Skills:
- Extensive knowledge of biochemical engineering and toxicology
- Proficient acrobat (high agility + speed)
- Commendable short distant sprinter(high speed but held back due to low stamina)
- Great acting abilities
- Expert gambler, if one can exist huehuehue
- A 7/10 stand up comedian
- Knows how to do all the kinky things with her body
Biography:
A doctor, an actress, a gambler, a pornstar; Pepper has already had her hands seeped in countless professions throughout her short life, both in terms of how long she has lived and how much longer she will live. Destined to die by the age of forty, she has never wasted a single second of her life, hence her impressive resume of professions. Now, her eyes look towards legion city, where she plans to add 'fighting champion' to her many lists of titles.
Personality:
Additional Information: Has a foot fetish and a kink for having an ear bitten. Also has a congenital disease that cuts her natural life span in half and makes her cough blood every few minutes but lets focus on the first two, shall we?
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Sep 29, 2016 11:10 AM

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Tuba said:

Name : Lin
Alias/Stage Name/Nickname: Little Nightingale
Level: 1
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Class: Duelist
Appearance:
Total Power Points: 12/12
Main Power: Hexfire
Lin is extremely proficient in dual wielding pistols. As metal is rare to come by in her home city, she opts against metal ammunition and instead utilizes her own mana as ammunition in her custom made firearms, Sodom and Rapture. The projectiles from these guns do not pierce through flesh like normal bullets but instead inflict wounds by burning through matter. Essentially, think of it as a bolt of plasma that dissipates on contact. Normal bolts cost 5 mana per shot, and can be fired at a rate of a single bolt per second (essentially two bolts due to dual pistols). Each bolt has an effective range of 2.5 meters (8.2 feet) before they fizzle out, but this range can change if Lin uses one of her active abilities. The bolt travels at a rate of 60 meters per second (134 miles per hour), but once again, this can be dependant on her active abilities. The rest of her main power are actives and passives:
- Recast (Passive): Anytime Lin uses an active ability that hits an enemy / an entity with a health bar related to the enemy successfully, her next four basic attacks are free. If Lin successfully hits two actives in a row, the free basic attacks do not stack, only refresh. The cooldown of the refund is three posts, while the free basic attacks have no cooldown.
- Quickdraw (Active, 15 Mana, 3 Posts): Lin’s speed and agility are increased by one level for 1.5 seconds, allowing her to reposition for her next attack or retreat if needed. Hitting a basic attack after five seconds of using Quickdraw will activate the passive.
- Piercing Round (Active, 10 Mana per shot, 5 seconds): Lin fires a bolt of mana from both guns that have no travel time and instead damage anything in a 5 meter straight line from the pistols. These bolts individually do half the damage of a normal shot. Lin can opt to fire only one round rather than firing both pistols.
- Loaded Slugs (Active, 10 Mana per pistol, No cooldown) Lin increases the density of her next two bolts in one pistol, doubling their range and damage in exchange for halving firing rate and projectile speed. After firing one, Lin must fire the other. Only one hit must land for the passive to activate.
Minor Power: N/A
Stats
Total Stat Points Boosters: 3
- Strength: Lv. 2
- Endurance: Lv. 1
- Stamina: Lv. 1
- Mana: Lv. 2
- Speed: Lv. 2
- Agility: Lv. 3
- Mana Regeneration: Lv. 1
- Perception: Lv. 3
Final Force: Lambs to the Slaughter

Prerequisites
- Lin must not have activated her Counter Force
- Lin must have activated her passive
- Lin must have used 50% of her maximum mana in spells
- Lin must not be in a manic or depressive state
- Lin must either have hit 6 consecutive basic attacks or 3 damaging abilities
Lin prepares herself for the final confrontation, gaining increased fire rate and mana efficiency. Each bolt’s cost is reduced to one mana each, and the travel time of the bolts are increased to the speed of an arrow, or 90 meters per second (200 miles per hour). Additionally, the rate of fire is increased to 2 bolts per second for each pistol, an effective firing rate of 4 bullets per second. This effect lasts for five posts, in which she can only use basic attacks.
Counter Force: Last Breath

Lin’s body begins working past human limitations, gaining +2 levels in Speed, Agility, and Perception. During this time offensive abilities and Recast have no cooldown. Quickdraw is unavailable during this time. This effect lasts for 5 posts, at the end of which Lin will immediately incapacitate herself due to exhaustion if the enemy has not been defeated yet.
Equipment and Weaponry:
-Sodom and Rapture (w/ Silencers)
- Prescribed lamotrigine
- .3 meter (1 foot) dagger
- Hood and normal clothes
Skills:
-Dual-Wielding Pistols
-Information-gathering and Logical thinking
Biography:
”The girl was born in the city of Sodom as an anomaly. Born with a disorder and albinism, her family soon gave up on her after 5 years of economic hardship- unfortunately typical of poor class families. She was left to fend for herself on the streets.”

“To survive was to commit sin, she learned that quickly. Not a single clean consciousness stood in the city of Sodom: those that did stood 6 feet under the ground. To evade the police, she learned how to move stealthily when committing theft. Not stealthily enough. She soon learned how to commit murder, and when she learned how the police tracked her through her kills, she learned to cut off fingers, pull teeth, burn the bodies. How her morality protested the first few times, but soon she adapted.”

“Her next target was a man in a black suit, with combed black hair and grey eyes. The black-haired man strayed from the main road, into a darker one, with no other inhabitants in sight. Based on the way he carried himself, he was most likely of the upper class- an easy target with wealth on person. That kind of person looked down upon the slums of the city. They believed they were untouchable, that the filth of the city had no right to gaze upon them. Surely, Lin would prove him wrong.”

“As she approached him, her arm raised in a deadly arc, knife gleaming under the lamplight, his hand shot out backwards to meet hers. Face turns to meet face, and that was the first time Lin met me.”

“A year passes, and Lin has found herself content for the first time in life. Her birthdate- or what she believes is her birthdate, is celebrated. A loaf of bread, topped with rosemary and olive oil, freshly stolen from a high-class bakery, would do as a makeshift cake. Her gift, two-custom made pistols- ornately crafted and practical, requires no worldly ammunition- only her own reserves. The day goes off without a hitch. A couple robberies, some murders, but no problems. What could be better?”

“When she wakes up the next morning, I am missing.”

“She has dealt with misery and hardship her entire life. Never until close to present has she ever had someone else to rely on. Now, without me, she decides to do something brash, something she hopes will help her only friend once again.”

“The police are astonished when she turns herself in. The 18 year crime spree, ended voluntarily by the criminal herself? It seems too good to be true. But Lin, the smart girl, has a reason. Her warden will be omnipotent, that she knows. And then, all she needs is to gain his favor.”

“She knows it is a risk. She knows that she is giving up her freedom. But, if she has a chance to meet her only friend, even if it’s only one more time, she’d willingly give up her life.”
Personality:
Lin has Bipolar disorder, but ever since her incarceration, takes medication (Lamotrigine) to cope with it. When on meds, she is usually grim and focused on her only goal in finding her unnamed friend. When not on meds, she is either extremely depressed and will not feel like doing anything, or extremely manic and will be gleeful even in the most disrespectful times to be that way. She can and will swing rapidly between those two emotions.
Additional Information: The multiverse theory states that all possibilities can occur over an infinite number of parallel universes. By this thread of logic, for every universe with an inhabitable earth inhabited by the human species, there has been, is, or will be a version of the Lin currently residing on Olimpia.
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Oct 4, 2016 4:28 AM

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