| @Canaas: Could I at least say she could do feats like shooting arrows while midair, and stuff then? I will make it more general like, she could shoot it a bit stronger than elite Longbowmen then Okay then. I think Avnore's power is clearly superior. Prediction alone would put it above emerald eyes, and the variety of visions used is more than emerald eyes too. Night vision by emerald eyes is not complete night vision like using goggles, it just means that she'll be able to see a lot better than normal people in low light conditions, if you know what I mean. Seeing that they're have clearly different styles, I don't think similarity is much of an issue either. |
| Name: Evangeline Boozle (Eva) Age: 19 Birthday: 12th June Species: Human Gender: Female Appearance Description:
Personality Description: Evangeline's a very sweet and kind girl. At the same time she can also be very emotional. As you can see from her picture she's very childish. Despite this she is quite smart and uses her brain a lot. Total Star Points: 20/20 Primary Power: The power of the mind
Secondary Power: NONE (Reminder costs 8) Weapons: A sword that can turn into a sniper rifle. (She doesn't have to use her power to turn it, as she has modified it to change when she desires) Attributes:[list] Abnormal Strength Abnormal Agility Biography: Evangeline was an orphan. She was found at 8am on a Saturday with a little piece of paper with the word 'Evangeline' in her hand. The orphanage took her in. She didn't know anything about her old family. Her old family were a bunch of scientists who had drugged her mother in order to give Evangeline special abilities. They were ruthless and they did anything for what they wanted or believed in. When she was old enough she joined a school, she believed school was extremley fun and loved tests. One day she was walking with her friends she got upset that her friend had a phone but she couldn't as she had no money so she dismantled the phone. Her friends had no idea what happened and neither did Evangeline. Soon she learnt about her powers and told her friend. She told her friends and so on. After that day everyone in her town knew of her and her power. Evangeline got stalkers and even death messages saying that she needed to die because she was a freak. After all of that she decided she was going to have as much fun as possible because any day could be her last with all these death threats. A week after deciding that she was killed. No one except for the orphanage worker went to her funeral. Additional Information: She enjoys carnivals, tests. |
MysticalPhoenixJun 15, 2016 9:24 AM
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| She needs to have focus. I've added that in and got rid of intelligence |
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| @Canaas I've modified it so she can't disassemble things. |
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| @MysticalPhoenix Approved! |
Age: 29 Birthday: May 12th Species: Half-Ghoul, Half-Human Gender: Male Appearance Description: Personality Description: He has lost all sense of self from before and has became a broken shell of his former self: A complete monster. He will betray you, beat you down, brag about it, eat you alive, and smile when you're reborn. Someone that people should never take lightly, he can be the worst thing to ever be created. Total Star Points: (count all points you have spent and list it here (ex. 8/20, 12/20)) Secondary Power: Centipede: Stage 1 With this ability, he is able to make a centipede-like tentacle come out of his lower back. The length it can go up to is 20 feet, it moves as fast as a normal human can run (this will change if given higher speed), and it can go in any direction Akimoto commands it to in his head. It can't pierce through metal, but it has no problem breaking skin and/or bone. Weapons: Black Sword of Crows- Just a normal sword with a black blade. A ball of wire. Attributes: -Prime Agility Biography: He grew up with his father, Soujiro, barely around due to his movie career. When he was around, he told him about his own childhood and told Akimoto to never trust authority. At Akimoto's first high school, his best friend became the SC president of the school. Due to his father's words, he chose to barely trust his friend. When a fight broke out, which Akimoto was in, his friend came to help him, despite his position. From then, Akimoto began to respect authority, but Soujiro didn't like it at all, so he brought his son to Ace High. At Ace High, he fell in love twice, but both ending in disaster. The first was a girl name Fuyumi that was killed in front of his and the other was a girl name Miyuki that chose his friend over him. Also, his father and mother turned evil, making him the one to kill both...or so he assumed. (There was a third girl that he kinda liked, Sakari, but it went nowhere.) With Soujiro gone, he became headmaster, but when a Third World War hit, the only thing holding him together and keeping him sane was his friend, Kurokawa Jr., and the girl he liked, Miyuki. Since Miyuki went with Kurokawa, Akimoto lost all sanity and closed himself in the headmaster penthouse, leaving Alius in charge of the school. Near the end of WW3, when Wicked invaded Ace High, he demanded that everyone leave Ace High and fought them alone. With the rings, he was able to defeat Wicked before Soujiro entered the gates of Ace High, shocking him. Soujiro activated his secret powers, revealing himself as the Ace of Spades. After explaining what they were, they fought with Akimoto being on the losing end. All of a sudden, the symbol above the school started falling and it blew the school to shreds, killing the two. A month later, Akimoto found himself on the rooftop of a building in Tokyo with the Dark Sword. Memories flooded in of God telling him everything he needed to know and Akimoto decided that he was gonna end Wicked once and for all. However, he ended up joining Wicked and going crazy with an even crazier girlfriend. This ended in disaster for both of them when they were killed off in a battle against the people of Ace High. Additional Information: Akimoto Yamashita is from Ace High Academy. |
| @SoulXtreme It doesn't look OP to me, plus you know the rules best (your the owner of the club xD) Unless anyone disagrees. |
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