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Aug 6, 2009 4:23 PM
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Aug 6, 2009 4:48 PM
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This is just a quicky. I haven't finished it. I don't know if I will.

On my way to the light
I saw your face
Glowing as bright
As the shining star you are
But my dear I can’t fight
With the weaknesses that I have
So just promise to hold me tight

The rhythm is like

la la laaaa la la laaaaa
la la la laaaa
laaa la la
la la laa laa la la
laa la laaaa la la laa
la la laaaa la la la la
la la la la laaaaa la la
What the fuck. Who cares?

Aug 6, 2009 6:13 PM
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maherin_nidhi said:
This is just a quicky. I haven't finished it. I don't know if I will.

On my way to the light
I saw your face
Glowing as bright
As the shining star you are
But my dear I can’t fight
With the weaknesses that I have
So just promise to hold me tight

The rhythm is like

la la laaaa la la laaaaa
la la la laaaa
laaa la la
la la laa laa la la
laa la laaaa la la laa
la la laaaa la la la la
la la la la laaaaa la la


that pretty good i like it 9/10 btw you should finish it it would make a great song.
Aug 6, 2009 6:16 PM
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i know u should finish it and ur good i like that quicky
Aug 6, 2009 6:19 PM
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6 or 7 on a 1-10 scale. You should finish it. ^_^
Lyric - should be sweet sounding stuff - Poetic. What you wrote felt forced and it's not smooth. So...7.
faceless-code said:

that pretty good i like it 9/10 btw you should finish it it would make a great song.

Why give it a 9? C:
Aug 6, 2009 6:31 PM
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I don't write lyrics. It is not my fault it is bad. If you told me to write a poem I would have been WAAAAAAAAY better.
What the fuck. Who cares?

Aug 10, 2009 4:20 PM
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that is really cool. 8.5 out of 10. Very Unique but yet familiar.
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Aug 12, 2009 10:26 AM
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these are god song lyrics! Good job i wish i could write stuff like that
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