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Dec 26, 2008 1:29 PM
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post your poems about love here
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Dec 27, 2008 2:14 AM
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Awww....if it's about suffering...i have many

I don't know but maybe this will do...

DKG's Poem said:

My Self Expression of depression

My Self Expression of depression
The Feeling of Incineration
A girl came to me
then My Heart beats like the sea
her word is like the Goddess
letting me think of her even at Rest
One Day i discovered the girl does not exist
She vanished in my life like a mist
Melancholy Everywhere
Here and there
Excruciating Redemption
My Self Expression of depression






Dec 27, 2008 1:13 PM
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here is a very very very very very very small one^^ ;;;;:

try to forget someone you love
is like remember someone you've never seen
Dec 27, 2008 4:14 PM
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called= raining eyes

in these tear filled eyes i see a goddess dressed in white
an angel of happiness and delight

i feel the light hits me just right

all from my angel of delight

you make me fear not at nigth the way you do is better than any fight

you are a true angel of delight

you hold me up whin i feel alomp the life i live with my angel of delight

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Dec 28, 2008 5:20 AM
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titlr =world end


over there i see a light
in a realm of darkness
a lonely light
a light which is blossoming on the darkness
not scared or full of fear
KABOOM !


THE LIGHT IS DESTROYED,WORLD IS DESTROYES ,THE END
Dec 28, 2008 5:25 AM
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i cant let go
its too hard !
i dont want to let u out of my arms
ur wartmth is all i need to live
without it ,im a flame which is about to burn out
u dazzle me,sparkle me,
u make me sad
u make me happy
u fight with me
u love me
all these things are something i dont deserve

but u are always by my side
u help me to spread my winds and glide along the air currents of the azure sky
Dec 28, 2008 5:33 AM
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i like world end better !
Dec 29, 2008 11:06 PM
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Love is a lie.
Love is a truth.
Love is death
Love is life.
Love is here.

Fall in Love.
What the fuck. Who cares?

Dec 30, 2008 6:35 PM
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I was talking to a friend a couple days ago, and just venting my feelings, when I said something that sounded poetic. I wrote it down, and just now finished the rest of the poem. This is the first piece of poetry I've written in years, so it is by no means extraordinary, but I thought I'd share it anyways. :)

Reconciliation of a Dream

I just wanted someone to hold me...
I didn’t know that that was so much to ask for...
When all I wanted to do was to curl up and die,
I kept it inside and forced my smile even more...

I can’t keep up this charade much longer...
I feel like I’m drowning in my doubt...
My indecision will ultimately be my undoing,
Yet knowing this only makes me want to lash out...

I don’t know if I’m dreaming, or if this is really happening...
Even though I’ve found my soul’s other half,
There is still much that separates us yet...
Why is it that I can never buy what I need to have?
Dec 31, 2008 1:54 PM

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Thanks, Replay. ^_^
Jan 5, 2009 1:36 AM

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Yes I'm sending this in a hurry, my love for you is like a fury: of emotions so tender and sweet, I am forever yours to keep. I love you. Clean_Bum152 11:30 p.m. on 3/18/0
This was sent to me by my wonderfully loving husband before we were wed.

Jan 5, 2009 1:38 AM

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I'm so glad you entered my life. I was a tomented soul before I met you, now your going to be my wife. I hope I never lose you. I love you Sin152. Clean_Bum152 8:49 a.m.
3/21/08

Once again from my husband before we were wed. I could keep this coming for a while. He had enough tl make me cry at times.

Feb 19, 2009 5:50 AM

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In the blanket of love:
You get the chance to laugh
You get to be happy
You get the feeling of the best times
Without the shield of love
You get crushed
You get tortured
You get burnt to crisps
And you eventually die.

So come back to me my love.
What the fuck. Who cares?

Jul 1, 2009 11:05 PM

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It's been a while since I left nay poems so here's three:

EMPTY

Standing in this empty vessel
Without a single note of sound
For all my life I thought
Silence is comforting… peaceful
Now I can yell my throat sore
For just one rhyme of wind
My ears are filling up with blood
I can’t fight the emptiness
No more can I feel strength
Numbness took over, too dominant
Sometimes I even wonder if we
Should be protecting our hearts
From this undeniable vacancy
But it too is just empty
God, if I could get one more wish
Then mercy from emptiness
Is the only thing I desire.

Sketch a storm

Tranquility rustles in the leaves,
Putting aside the future worries of tomorrow,
As an element of peace
Settles into my heart.

Birds sing in an enchanting light,
Killing the sorrows
Of which I had fought
In the past night.

I look up to the sky
As the inevitability of imperfection
Begins to sketch a storm
That begins to engulf a light breeze.

From everything I had felt in the past moment,
Everything seemed so perfect.
For one second,
I had forgotten the meaning of reality.

(for this I don't have a title)

Now and then I used to see
Bright, flashing colors of glee.
But I no longer see color
Only flashes of gray, getting duller.
All I am asking you is
How much hatred can one person hold?
Before the heart becomes this cold?
We all will die someday
Why wish for it today?

Please give feedbacks!
thankthelordJul 11, 2009 10:30 PM
What the fuck. Who cares?

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