| Hello, Fai here, this is a thread for your poems dedicated to the inseperable duo. I'll submit first. this one is untitled. With a half-sighted stare I watch you, My body yearns to feel you, With a desire so strong I want you, And greater then a religion for its god, I need you. The taste of your blood is sweet on my lips. You hold me tight against you, With your fingers on my hips. Your eyes burn into my being, Constricting, and squeezing. I'm suffocating from within, and you're the only one who knows, that when I”m smiling, it's not the truth that shows. With my past following, it's hard for me to say, and i want so bad to tell you, but it's the wrong time, the wrong day. Maybe in the future you'll know, what it is that haunts me, and then we'll be together, just us... just we. And thus i end this rhyme with three word to do, and now would be the time, to say, I love you. All submitted work will be a part of a contest, the best poem wins! and as a prize I shall write a one-shot fanfic strickly for the winner! |
Fai_D_FlowrightNov 14, 2008 6:57 AM
| Heres my poem ^^ It's called My Anchor A smile, a mask My half hearted laugh These are what I am known for Cheerful, playful I sing and dance But only for you to merely give me a second glance My heart, my soul are all but broken Holding on to the shattered pieces You anchor me to these worlds Your gaze, your touch, your presence Are all wonders to me I drink them hungrily like a traveler in the desert parched of thirst Blood ties bind us to one another A red string of fate attached from me to you The thread is fraying slowly Surely in time you’ll notice My smiles are forced One day, sometime soon Our time together will end I’ll grasp tightly at the loose strings Until you let go first By then I hope I’m not afraid to fall |
<('.'<) (^'.'^) (>'.')> (v'.'v) kirby dance!!!!!  |
| OMG!!! I LOVE IT!!! you kick arse! good job! |
| *flushes* waiii ur so nice! But Urs was way better ^-^ |
| <('.'<) (^'.'^) (>'.')> (v'.'v) kirby dance!!!!! |
| thank you, but i liked your more. |
| ^__^ ty so much |
| <('.'<) (^'.'^) (>'.')> (v'.'v) kirby dance!!!!! |
| To him we must say goodbye He wouldn't want to hear us cry... A sweeter man we've never met In our hearts we'll never forget! The angels came to take him home, Now we are left on earth to roam. His time was long, yet seemed too short To memories now we must resort. For everyone he had a smile And he loved to sit and talk awhile. Now in our hearts he still lives on Until our time on earth is gone... Then once again we'll join our friend Together in time that will never end! |
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| T-T that was soooo sad. but it rocked my sox off. this is going to be tough. but it's only two who submitted. but it won't be over until the end of this week. that's what I've decided. thank you very much for your submission. |
| ur welcome^^ |
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| Omg that was awesome ^^ A ryhming poem is hard to do I mixed in both in mine ^^ omg good luck angel-chan! |
| <('.'<) (^'.'^) (>'.')> (v'.'v) kirby dance!!!!! |
| good luck to u to Chibi^^ |
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| ^^ ty |
| <('.'<) (^'.'^) (>'.')> (v'.'v) kirby dance!!!!! |
| THE WINNER IS!!!!!!! Chibi-chan! i printed out the poems and made my friends vote on them. it came close, but Chibi got the most votes by the end of the day. Thank you both for participating. Chibi, I'll get to work on your prize soon. thanks to everyone! Fai. |
| ^^!! Omg thank you! |
| <('.'<) (^'.'^) (>'.')> (v'.'v) kirby dance!!!!! |
| you're welcome. they were both really good. but i don't think my friends liked Fai being dead. lol. that's what they told me, how they read it. ^-^ but they still liked it. |
| LOL ^^ hai hai Angel-chan was very good I thought for sure I'd lose |
| <('.'<) (^'.'^) (>'.')> (v'.'v) kirby dance!!!!! |
| good work Chibi^^ |
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| Thanks Angel-chan you too! |
| <('.'<) (^'.'^) (>'.')> (v'.'v) kirby dance!!!!! |
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