Clumsy Child - Progress

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Aug 2011

This is a pretty good idea and it definitely help keep us all in the same loop. When Mika's done with the translations I'll start a similar thread for my editing.

Oct 31, 2011 4:44 PM

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Jun 2011

This volume has been cleaned :) Let me know once the translation/proofing is done and I'll start on this.

Nov 3, 2011 12:55 AM

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Aug 2011

cchhunter said:
This volume has been cleaned :) Let me know once the translation/proofing is done and I'll start on this.

I will let you know when I'm done :)

Nov 28, 2011 10:46 AM

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Jun 2011

I've completed the first part of the proofing that I had (basically chapter 1). Still awaiting the rest, I'll get on that as soon as I get it :)

Also, are we doing the little intro type sketching at the beginning of the book? I didn't do anything with that yet (it's the one page about heating up lunch).

Hope everyone had a great Thanksgiving (if you celebrate ^_^);

Dec 1, 2011 7:34 PM

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Aug 2011

I assumed we were doing that intro typing sketching.

I'm rereading Clumsy Child so I can be sure my cover copy is accurate.

Dec 12, 2011 9:44 AM

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Jun 2011

I'd just like to say to page 70......

I really hate you >_>>>>> LoL. Moving right along though :)

Dec 14, 2011 8:48 AM

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Jun 2011

Alright,

I've gotten through half the typesetting for Clumsy Child and should have no problem hitting my dead line.

I have packaged the first 3 chapters in their own zip file and will be sending those out this evening if I remember. Please note these are only draft resizing for read over purposes. Please look them over and tell me if anything looks/sounds needs changing. This should help reduce the turn around time on changes once I finish the initial typesetting.

The 3 zips range from 16 m - 25 megs. What do you think the best way to get them to you will be? Should I just upload them to the DMG FTP?

Dec 16, 2011 9:34 PM

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Nov 2008

Did you upload them yet by chance? I think putting them in the DMG ftp would be okay. Maybe make a folder called "drafts" and that is an excellent idea!

Dec 16, 2011 9:54 PM

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Aug 2011

Making a "drafts" folder is a good idea. I'll keep an eye out for the drafts :)

Dec 18, 2011 10:01 AM

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Jun 2011

okay, chapters 1 - 3 are on the FTP for download. Please let me know if something doesn't look/sound right. please provide page/bubble and change :)

Thanks

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Dec 22, 2011 2:57 PM

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Jun 2011

Chapters 4 and 5 are zipped in the drafts folder for review. One more chapter to go!

Dec 22, 2011 10:16 PM

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Aug 2011

I'm going to take a look at them ^_^

Dec 27, 2011 7:36 AM

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Jun 2011

Alright, Finished Chapter 6 meaning that Volume has been completed (at least in draft form).

As soon as I get home tonight, I'll upload a draft version for review ^_^; Excited that I beat my deadline of 'by the end of December'. :)

Jan 2, 2012 7:40 PM

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Nov 2008

I just got around to looking at this now. T_T Sorry.... but was a final version turned in yet? :O

Jan 3, 2012 3:50 AM

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Jun 2011

no I'm still taking suggestions for changes, what's up?

Jan 3, 2012 6:56 AM

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Nov 2008

Well the one thing type-wise I noticed is the white border around black text could have been a little thicker, but that's just my opinion and by only like 1-2 pixels (I think) so it's really not worth fussing over. It's fine. I'll prob make mine thicker though.

On pages 007 and 008 there is that line left on the side of the page, from the scans. I think those are the only pages I saw it on.

I only read it quickly but I found some grammar mistakes too.

Page 176: it says "And therefore drawings with only one character tends to get rejected."

I think it should be: "And therefore drawings with only one character tend to get rejected." Though I'm not 100% sure honestly. lol

I know I saw another one around chapter 5, but I can't find it atm and don't really have time since I'm leaving for work soon. >< I'll reread it again after work.

Jan 3, 2012 3:40 PM

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Nov 2008

Are we supposed to do the omake that's under the cover too? I thought it's only the cover jacket itself we leave alone? o.O

Jan 4, 2012 4:46 AM

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