| Page 1 1. Richter [25 year old doctor. He’s a hot and young doctor, but can blow up easy. He’s been researching with MiND since he was 15 years old. He is the successor of his father, who has been researching this stuff for 25 years. Assistant doctor of Osmond, but does just as much research]: Finally !! 2. All the knowledge of the world … condensed in this serum [lawl, plz change] 3. 13 years of research, testing, and formulating all comes down to this… 4. Now we can finally perform our first test on human subjects! Page 2 5. Richter: *turns to test subject* Are you ready? 6. Test Subject: Of course I’m ready 7. To obtain all knowledge of the world with a simple shot? 8. What are you waiting for!??!? 9. Richter: Proceed to begin experiment 24201… 10. *to test subject* This will feel just like a shot you get at the doctor’s check up… Page 3 11. Test Subject: yes….Yes…YES…YES!!!! 12. I can feel it!! 13. I CAN SEE EVERYTHING 14. THE ANSWERS TO EVERYTHING IN THE WORLD 15. THIS IS IT 16. THIS IS EVERYTHING! ETERNAL KNOWLEDGE!!! 17. I’VE NEVER FELT SO EXHILERATED IN MY LIFE Page 4 18. Test Subject: BUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA *beeping noises* *eyes roll back, blood squirms out of mouth and nose* 19. Nurse: Something’s going wrong! 20. Ricter: How can this be??? Our test was supposed to be flawless! 21. Nurse: Retrieve the defibrillator *all the nurses attempt to save him**head explodes!* Page 5 22. Ricter: DAMN IT *throws a fit and breaks glass and throws stuff at the wall* 23. This is the third time it’s happened… 24. Nurse: The first test was a brain surgery which killed the patient immediately once he awoke. The second test was a pill that killed the patient instantly- 25. Ricter: YOU DON’T NEED TO FUCKIN REMIND ME. 26. Shit… we’ve done 50 experiments on animals and not ONE of them died… 27. Why is it when we test it on humans, they die instantly?? Page 6 28. Ricter: 35 years of research… 29. When will the answer come? Page 7 [Cover Page] Page 8 30. Commander: Commence testing of ARMS Prototype-ASCALON. 31. Vincent: *show big picccy of mecha :3* Roger that. All systems clear to go. Just give me your signal, captain! *panels of the ARMS-ASCALON destroying junk* Page 9 32. Trisha Lang: [She’s similar to Melissa Mao from FMP and Rakshata from CG. She is the COO of all ARMS units and created the latest model, ARMS-ASCALON. She has long hair and is really sexy and spicy ;D] Commander… tell me a bit about the young man who is piloting my new ARMS unit. 33. Commander: Sergeant Vincent Clyde? 34. *switch to picture of Vincent* He’s the youngest member of the Astrum Ordo and has been a pilot in training since he was 14 years old. He’s the most prized member of the team! He only got his pilot license recently now that he’s become of age. 35. Trisha: It shows. *switch to frame of Vincent piloting the ARMS-ASCALON* His abilities are quite remarkable. In fact, I’d say he’s better than 90% of the pilots we have in Astrum Ordo. And he’s quite good lookin too… 36. Commander: In addition to that, he serves as a programming technician for Astrum Ordo. Take a look at this. Page 10 37. Commander: It’s a miniature spying device that Sergeant Clyde has worked on ever since he joined the Astrum Ordo. 38. This is a nano chip that crawls into the back of the target’s head and record’s information directly from their brains! 39. Trisha: And you’re telling me this kid is only 17 years old!? 40. Commander: He’s quite extraordinary, wouldn’t you agree? We’re quite lucky to have someone like Sergeant Clyde on our team. 41. Trisha: End the ARMS-ASCALON test and send Vincent down. 42. *grin* I’m dying to meet this kid. Page 11 43. Vincent: *enters the room* Commander? Why did we end the test run so quickly? 44. Trisha: Are you Sergeant Vincent Clyde? *sexy smile* 45. Vincent: *in head: H-H-HOLY SHIT!!!! @_____@* *says this out loud* YOU’RE HOT. *@__@!!! Covers his mouth* 46. Trisha: *laughs* And you’re quite the looker yourself *attempts to seduce Vincent* 47. Vincent: @_______@!!!!! *faints* 48. Trisha: ah…he fainted. 49. Commander: yeah…he fainted. Page 12 50. Vincent: *after a few minutes of recovery* Commander! Why was I asked down here! 51. Commander: Well you see, Sergeant Clyde… This is Trisha Lang and she wanted to assign you to a mission! 52. Trisha: That’s right, little Vincent. 53. The commander told me all about your little nano gizmos and I thought they’d be useful for a little spying mission. *attempts to seduce Vincent* Are you willing to comply? 54. Vincent: @_____@!!!!!! *faints* 55. Trisha: ah…he fainted again. 56. Commander: yeah…he fainted again. Page 13 57. Vincent: *after several minutes of recovery* Officer Trisha Lang! Inform me please of the assignment mission you want to assign me to …yeah! 58. Trisha: You’re so adorable when you can’t speak straight… *seductively gives him a folder of documents* 59. In here, you will find a list of military rivals to the Astrum Ordo. The one that is concerning me the most is the one right here *pulls out a document that says “MiND Institute”* 60. These little rascals are called the Military Neurological Development Institute… aka MiND. Page 14 61. They’re cooking up a little project called “Project 24229”… All we know is that it’s some kind of brain corruption research, and the level of threat it can be to the nation. 62. Could you be a dear and retrieve a little more information on Project 24229? I know your spying skills are top notch…If you help me out, I can give you a little gift in return… 63. Vincent: @____@!!!!! OFFICER LANG I TREASURE MY VIRGINITY X______X!!!!!! 64. Trisha: *little chibi clapping* good job on keeping it safe 65. Commander: *also a chibi* yes, there should be more men like you out there in the world. Page 15 66. Trisha: Anyways, there are plenty of other companies we want to spy on, but let’s focus on MiND institute for now. 67. *transition to Vincent in his apartment, on his computer* Trisha VO: You have 35 days to gather information. Send me whatever you’ve got on the 35th day, whether it’s a page or a whole archive. I’ll be counting on you. 68. Vincent: Mind institute… |
| Page 16 69. Teacher: So our choices for the science field trip are Heart Cross Hospital, Biological Zoology Research Institute, and the Astronomy Museum. Are there any more suggestions? 70. Anyone? 71. How about you, Mr. Clyde who is sleeping all the way in the back? 72. Vincent: *waking up* Whaa…? 73. Sherri: *whispers to Vincent* The teacher wants you to choose a place for a field trip Page 17 74. Vincent: *still in half awake state cuz he was researching MiND all night* MiND institute…. 75. Teacher: Oh, the MiND Institute Museum! Are you willing to give the class a brief explanation? 76. Vincent: *still half asleep*… it’s some kind of Mind research facility where they look into …stuff… like how the brain works… 77. *whole class is interested* 78. Teacher: Okay! Let’s vote on where to go for our field trip! Page 18 79. *big building* Tour guide: Welcome to the MiND Institute Museum! 80. *show a frame of the enthusiastic Sherri, and Trudy, Vincent has his hands in his pockets* Sherri: YAAAY The MiND Institute! 81. Vincent: So this is it, huh… 82. Sherri: KYAAA!!! Look look!!! This building is HUGE!!! 83. Sherri: KYAAAA!!! Look look!!! This statute is SO COOL! 84. Trudy: KYAAAA!!! Look look!!! SID IS SO HOT!!!! And he’s coming this way!! I can’t be caught staring at him!! *turns away* 85. Sherri: *blushes* 86. Sid: *walks past sherri, and as he walks past her, he rubs her chin* Page 19 87. Trudy: *didn’t notice* Omgg~~~ is he gone? 88. KYAAAA!! When I think of him, I can’t help but think of getting married~~~ 89. Sherri: …when I think of him…I can’t help but think of j-johnny piercings… 90. *inside the building, there are 2 lines for the metal detector and sherri is standing right next to Sid on one line. Vincent is right behind Sherri.* 91. Vincent: *on his mp3 player with a mic attachment* Aiden, can you read me? 92. Aiden: *from his van* Loud and clear, Vince. You in the building? 93. Vincent: Yeah, but we’re about to go through a metal detector. You know the procedure. Cut out all cameras and any kind of devices that will interfere with the research. 94. Aiden: Yeah yeah, no need to doubt the skills of the superior Aiden! Page 20 95. Security Guard: Clear. Next. *Sherri is next* 96. Sherri: *walks through the metal detector* *detects something in her head* 97. Security Guard: Ma’m, is there something metal in your hair? 98. Sherri: Whaaa? *thinks of Metal Gear* 99. Another Security Guard: oh, it must be her butterfly pin. 100. Sherri: Ah! Silly me x3 101. Sid: *walks through metal detector* 102. Sherri: *glances over at Sid* *beeping goes off at Sid’s pants* N-N-N-N….NOOOOO WAAAAAAAYYYYYY *runs off* 103. Sid: *takes out keys from pocket* Oh, it must be my keys. Page 21 104. Vincent: *casually walks through the museum* *notices sherri cuddled up by a corner* *walks up to her* …boo. 105. Sherri: KYAAAAAA!!! NOT THE JOHNNY PIERCING!!! 106. Ah… oh, it’s you Vincent! *phew* At least I know that you don’t have Johnny piercings! 107. Vincent: …how would you know that -__-? 108. Sherri: Oh~~ Cuz I know you don’t have the balls to <33 109. Vincent: *smacks her* Anyways, I’m off. 110. Sherri: NOOOO!!! DON’T LEAVE ME!!! THE JOHNNY PIERCINGS MIGHT COME AND GET MEEEE!!! 111. Vincent: …too bad -_-. Page 22 112. Aiden: Lawl, haha, Vincent has no balls~ 113. Vincent: Aiden, you’re fired. 114. Aiden: Whoa whoa buddy, you can’t do this mission without moi. Anyways, listen up. Once you hit the archives there might be a certain point where they can detect any communication signals. Until I can pinpoint the area that they detect signals, we’re gonna have to keep a low down on the chit chat. 115. Vincent: Give me the direction to the archives and contact me immediately as soon I’m out of the communication detection field. That way we’re not wasting time. 116. Aiden: Yeah yeah, Aiden knows the drill. Page 23 117. Aiden: See that room over there? You're gonna havta walk towards it, then turn right or something like that. 118. Vincent: Damn field techies… 119. Aiden: Now you're in the research and development wing. 120. Look to your left and whoopsie doo, you’ll see an elevator! Go on and hop on and go on the 18th floor 121. But oh ho ho. There’s a key next to the 18th button. That’s cuz you need, well, a key. But you know what, Aiden has a little easy trick for you that he saw in the movies. 122. Push the button to the 17th floor and as soon as the elevator starts goin up, kick the top hatch of the elevator and climb on to the roof. 123. Once the elevator stops, the 18th door won’t be too hard to reach. Just hop right up and I’ll open up the elevator door for ya at promptly 2:30 when all the guards go on break, but it’ll only be open for 60 seconds. 124. From here, just walk yourself down until you see the reconstruction center. 125. Aiden: You're in luck, since there's an exhibit being set up. So just keep eye contact down to a minimum. Page 24 126. Vincent: Wait… 127. He expects me to memorize all that!?!? 128. *walks down the hall* left…right…ah …crap!!! Page 25 129. Sherri: *in head* Ah…crap…my head hurts… 130. Trudy: Sherri? Is there something wrong? 131. Sherri: Oh no! I think I’m just gonna go to the bathroom to uhhh…pee! Yeah! That! *runs to the bathroom, butterfly pin falls off, Sid is in the BG watching sherri* Page 26 132. Vincent: *holding on to expanders of elevator for dear life* I… I HATE MY JOB Q____Q!!! 133. Jumping floors in an elevator tunnel looks easier in the movies q___q Arghhh!!! *jumps* 134. *elevator door opens* Wow…the door opened right on time… *looks around, all that is there are file cabinets* 135. Aiden: Vinny~ Do you read me? There are no communication detectors on the 18th floor, so I can talk to my beloved Vinny! 136. Vincent: …shut up and tell me what to do… Page 27 137. Aiden: There should be something labeled "Physiological Weapons System". Everything is digitally locked, give me a sec to get the password. 138. Vincent: Upon entering this section, Vincent realizes many of these cases are sealed, meaning they are closed off, failed, or erased projects *to himself* Mental Collective Project… 24150-24302… 139. Aiden: The password is … Rirshe… what a weird password. Page 28 140. Vincent: *Opening the cabinet, there is one file folder much thicker, and much more used than the rest of them.* …Project 24229 141. Aiden: Yes! That one! Project 24229! Open it. Right now. Page 29 142. Sherri: Q__________Q!! I’ve been having so many headaches recently!!! 143. Aaaah >__<!!! They hurt so so much q___q Ah!! 144. *in head* Where’d my butterfly pin go? 145. Sid: *from behind, brushes Sherri’s bangs back and puts butterfly pin on her hair, Sherri is blushing* *show panels of Sid’s eyes…his eyes say “omg…I want sherri…”. then show sherri’s eyes, then a frame of a very luscious Sid…slowly closing his eyes and reaching down for a kiss* Page 30 146. *full page of Sid kissin Sherri ;D* 147. TBC~ -end <333- |
| i couldnt come in 2 edit but i can tell u my ideas of the script now! first off when you wrote ..... melancholy said: 26. Shit… we’ve done 50 experiments on animals and not ONE of them died… i just realized tht in the first chapter sherri was testing her power on the animals if the animals brains didnt explode when they gave them shots/pills or watvr y would they explode now. n plus how would they no all tht information got in the animals brain anyway? dont animals have short term mermory? n if they could get it stuck in an animals brain then they wouldnt need a human to no all tht knowledge cause the animal would be able to speak if it knew all tht info (which is pretty damn cool if u think about it) anyway... yea u got my point |
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melancholy said: 88. KYAAAA!! When I think of him, I can’t help but think of getting married~~~ married isnt a thing i would think trudy would say.... shes more of a whore to think of getting married.... idk its just how i c the character instead she should say like... trudy- KYAA!! whenever i think of sid, i think of... uhh i shouldnt say sherri- *shivers* i think of his johnny piercings.... trudy- haha..... me too. (obviously in a different way than sherri) |
queenwafflegirlMay 26, 2009 3:53 PM
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melancholy said: 146. *full page of Sid kissin Sherri ;D* - yaaaaaaaaay!!!! <33333 |
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queenwafflegirl said: married isnt a thing i would think trudy would say.... shes more of a whore to think of getting married.... idk its just how i c the character instead she should say like... trudy- KYAA!! whenever i think of sid, i think of... uhh i shouldnt say sherri- *shivers* i think of his johnny piercings.... trudy- haha..... me too. (obviously in a different way than sherri) I agree with this, it sounds alot better |
queenwafflegirl said: i couldnt come in 2 edit but i can tell u my ideas of the script now! first off when you wrote ..... melancholy said: 26. Shit… we’ve done 50 experiments on animals and not ONE of them died… i just realized tht in the first chapter sherri was testing her power on the animals if the animals brains didnt explode when they gave them shots/pills or watvr y would they explode now. n plus how would they no all tht information got in the animals brain anyway? dont animals have short term mermory? n if they could get it stuck in an animals brain then they wouldnt need a human to no all tht knowledge cause the animal would be able to speak if it knew all tht info (which is pretty damn cool if u think about it) anyway... yea u got my point OHHHHHH. when you told me this earlier i was like "whut? i dun get it..." NOWWW i get it lawl. so the only way around it is... the first few experiments were to test by putting information into the animal's brain, which was sucessful once they start making sherri, then they use the animals as casualty tests, NOT scientific tests. and they prolly made sherri so powerful that now she can kill animals too :P i'll prolly tell you this at club lol... |
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