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I was bored so I typed this up. Enjoy :)



Akari: Haaa~~ warm and comfy
Aika: Hot springs after all this time, it's the best isn't it...
Alice: Dekkai Heaven desu.
Akari: Isn't it the first time with just the 3 of us?
Alice: Now that you mentioned, it sure is.
Aika: Hmm, yeah...
Alice: Hey Aika-senpai, you were having ice cream in a rather friendly manner with Al the other day weren't you?
Aika: S...ssssso what, Kouhai-chan?
Alice: Nothing, I just said what I saw.
Akari: Aika, your face is all red.
Aika: Oh yes Akari, I also saw you with Ponio at Pallia Bridge.
Akari: Oh that, that was when Akatsuki was waiting for his brother and he told me to stay with him to kill time.
Aika: You...really...
Akari: What?
Aika: Since it's come down to this, I'll ask you frankly. What are your feelings on Ponio?
Akari: Hohe~~? Akatsuki is my very first customer and he's a huge fan of Alicia and he lives in Ukijima and...
Aika: I'm not asking for a character introduction!
Akari: Ehhhhh?
Alice: Aika-senpai, then what about you and Al?
Aika: Hmmmm I'm starting to feel hot, I should get out soon.
Alice: She's completely dodged the question...
Aika: I'm going to have some coffee milk.
Akari: Waaahi! Me too!
Alice: Hey, wait for me please senpais!

Akari: Ahhh, that was a good bath
Alice: It's dekkai-warmed me up.
Aika: Okies, let's eat ice cream.
Alice: Aika-senpai, you just drank coffee milk right after getting out of the bath. If you have ice cream on top of that, you'll get indigestion.
Aika: It's fine it's fine if I become cold, all I need to do is to splash down into the springs again.
Akari: Yea...then maybe I should have some as well.
Aika: Akari, what flavour do you want?
Akari: Vanilla!
Aika: Then...I'll have chocolate chips.
Akari: Hmmmm...it's cold and delicious!
Aika: Hmmmm...ice cream after a bath is splended!
Alice: Give me some.
Aika: Kouhai-chan, didn't you not want it for fear of indigestion?
Alice: I never said "no".
Aika: You've become jealous after seeing us eat?
Alice: Nunu...
Aika: Kouhai-chan, you're still just like a kid when it comes to this. Your PJs are also a whole-body Muk-kun.
Alice: It's my freedom to pick any PJ.
Akari: Alice, is strawberry fine with you?
Alice: Yep. Hmmmm...it's sweet, cold and delicious. Ice cream right after hot springs is the very best.
Aika: Hmmm, the best, the best!
Alice: This hot springs rents a wide variety of PJs. Even with this, I thought hard about it.
Akari: It's really cute, Alice.
Alice: Is it, really?
Akari: The way you look from the back really is like Muk-kun.
Alice: Yes, I really like Muk-kun.
Aika: Oh yea, I saw walnut bread in the shape of Muk-kun the other day.
Alice: I know about it, Athena-senpai bought some for me before. Oh yea, she told me she shared some with Akira as well.
Aika: Oh so that's it. I thought she got it from a fan or a customer.
Alice: Aika-senpai, why don't you come up with the thoguht that maybe it may be from a person close to Akira?
Aika: Really? It's a Muk-kun walnut bread.
Alice: She might have got it from a guy who likes Muk-kun.
Akari: But...in reality, it's from Athena right?
Alice: Yes, but what I want to say is that...
Aika: Yea you have a point there, we never hear a romantic rumour about Akira. I wonder what the situation actually is?
Akari: I've seen her having tea together with the postman before.
Alice: Which means...she likes older men.
Aika: That was when she was confiding with him about her life, and really there's no lead to that postman.
Alice: Then is the older brother of Akatuski possible? He's older than Akira.
Aika: Blehhh
Alice: What is that "bleh"?
Aika: Oh yea, what about Athena? Isn't there anyone?
Alice: Hmmmmmm...
Aika: Oh! Have you thought of something?
Alice: Nope, I've searched all corners of my memory to see if there's anyone but I couldn't come up with a person.
Aika: Oh.
Alice: Athena has a lot of fans who are children so she might prefer younger men.
Aika: That's a bit...
Alice: Akari-senpai, what about Alicia?
Akari: Hohe, Alicia? I wonder how it is...at work, we have breakfast and dinner together, but I don't know what happens after she goes home.
Aika: D...DDDon't say there's someone?
Akari: I've never asked.
Alice: But we can't discount the possibility of her having a boyfriend.
Aika: Arrrgh, I don't want it that way, never! This talk is prohibited, prohibited, prohibited!
Akari: Hahiii, Aika!
Alice: Aika-senpai, that is called selfishness, when you already have Al.
Aika: Hey, Kouhai-chan! How does Al come into this?
Alice: Then, what would you do if Alicia's boyfriend was Al?
Aika: Hah?
Alice: Although it doesn't look that way, Al is the same age as Alicia. It's completely possible.
Aika: But, that's simply not possible!
Alice: How can you be so sure?
Aika: Eh? That's because...
Alice: Because?
Aika: Becau...
Akari: You and Al are...
Aika: Gyaaaasu!!! Embarrasing statements prohibited!
Akari: Ehhhhhh~~?
Akari: Aika, where are you going?
Aika: I'm feeling cold so I'm going to the hot springs again.
Akari: Aika, your face is all red.
Aika: Shut up, shut up, shut up!!!
Alice: She's gone with such haste...Akari-senpai, what were you about to say a while ago?
Akari: Hohe? What?
Alice: After "Al and Aika are ai..."
Akari: Ohh, I was about to say Al and Aika are close enough friends to eat ice cream together.
Alice: Akari-senpai?
Akari: What, Alice?
Alice: You're dekkai-pure (as in naive).
Akari: Ehhhhhh~~? Pure? Oh, are you talking about the hot springs?
Alice: Pure/Naive statements, HUGELY PROHIBITED!
Akari Haaahiiii~~~
NV2301Sep 3, 2008 10:49 AM
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Sep 3, 2008 10:49 AM
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I love ya. Thanks. It's great.

Hmm.... Marriage foreshadowing?
Sep 3, 2008 10:57 AM
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Yea, this must have been a follow-up on the whole marriage thing at the end.

There's picture drama #4 on Youtube. You can love me all you want but I'm not going to translate 3 more - this took me 70 minutes!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pPg1T2-x-YI
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Sep 3, 2008 10:58 AM
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Akari: Hohe, Alicia? I wonder how it is...at work, we have breakfast and dinner together, but I don't know what happens after she goes home.

...
You really are pure, hahi-chan.

Alice: But we can't discount the possibility of her having a boyfriend.
Aika: Arrrgh, I don't want it that way, never! This talk is prohibited, prohibited, prohibited!

Oh man, I am reminded of the "sudden marriage" shitstorm that plagued us not too long ago.
Sep 3, 2008 11:22 AM
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O________________o

Wow. Drama #4 is made of CRACK. At least we can see what Akatsuki thinking 'bout all the time.

@Freedom
Then I don't love ya. And we will torture you, 'till you translate the rest. Muhahahahaw!!! <shot>
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70minutes!?!??!?!??!?!??!??!??!????!!!!!!!!?!?!??!!!?!???!?!?!?!?!??!????!!!?!?!?!

:v
You don't have to do it... but we'll all hate you for eternity :3

So who wants to start up Aegisub and set this :v
Sep 3, 2008 8:40 PM
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So who wants to start up Aegisub and set this :v

Lol, timing. Not something I'm capable of.

Regarding the first pic drama, is it just me or did one expect Akari's nightie to be more of something Aika would wear?
Sep 3, 2008 9:25 PM
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70mins...is that supposed to be long or short? This is actually the very first time I translated something.

These picture dramas are heavy on dialogue which makes for a great deal of typing, versus "scenery-fillers" we get in the animation.
Hyouka and real-life Takayama comparison blog: Completed 31/10/2015
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Sep 3, 2008 9:51 PM
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this is probably a stupid question, but where would i find the first picture drama? or what's it actually called so i can hunt it down myself?
Sep 4, 2008 4:24 AM

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Tokyotosho, dude. Try that.

I'm sure the whole Aria whole woulf love for you to continue subbing, Freedom (well, maybe not whole Aria whole, but just this club. XD)
Sep 4, 2008 10:20 AM

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I have no idea what I am doing :v


I have never tried this before :D
Sep 4, 2008 10:51 AM
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You're doing the right thing, Foxey. And it's not THAT hard. It's time-consuming, but not hard. Like, it takes me 3-4 hours to do the timing for one Aria episode.
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And.. done.

http://www.mediafire.com/?mrwlllmwmqc

It's a bit rough, since I had no idea what I was doing and went on guess work alone. Help files are for girls :V

Pretty much just a copy paste of the above translation, though the line:

Alice: Aika-senpai, why don't you come up with the thought that maybe it may be from a person close to Akira?

Sounds a bit awkward. Any one want to suggest an alternative?
Sep 4, 2008 6:09 PM

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Aika-senpai, why not consider that it may be from someone close to Akira?

(I haven't "quality-controlled" my stuff and went for a rather literal route meaning some of the dialogue are long and cumbersome for fansubbing. It contains a lot of stuff which would make OtaKing go nuts!)

Edit: PM sent
NV2301Sep 4, 2008 6:35 PM
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Received~

I'll edit it tomorrow, its 3am now :v

Also, OtaKing can go suck my No.4 oar. I only agreed with half of what he had to say, and say it he did. Over and over and over again :v
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He's rather stuckup but does have some valid points.

P.s. If you're doing credits, please stick my screenname in.
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I hadn't done any credits, but I can do~
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my computer doesn't recognize the file extension and neither do i, what program do i need to view it? or what kind of file is it so i can search for a viewer/converter? too tired to figure out for myself atm if anyone's wondering why i don't use the internet, 5am atm ;)
Sep 5, 2008 3:57 AM
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You're supposed to download the RAW, put it in the same folder as the .ass and play it (with Zoomplayer or MPC).
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Sep 5, 2008 6:55 AM
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Wow, you did a great job, Foxey. And spared a little time for me, when I'll start translating Origination.
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jacobpaige said:

my computer doesn't recognize the file extension and neither do i, what program do i need to view it? or what kind of file is it so i can search for a viewer/converter? too tired to figure out for myself atm if anyone's wondering why i don't use the internet, 5am atm ;)


Yeah, like GrimaH said.

If you use a semi-decent player.
Either rename the file to the same name as the video file, i.e. if its the one in the torrent it'd be "[DVD-Raw]_ARIA_The_ORIGINATION_-_Picture_Drama_-_01_(720x480_XviD1.2)[0E417D5E].ass" and then just open the video, the subs should be loaded automatically.
Or, I dunno about zoom but, in MPC if you open the video, then go to file you can select Load Subtitles and load it that way.



If any one wants to try translating the other Picture Drama's I'll have a go at timing them too.
Sep 5, 2008 8:34 AM

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V2 with the modified script X10A_Freedom sent me.
Also a credit included in the sub as requested.

http://www.mediafire.com/?panowbdcfez
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Thanks for the credit. I don't mind freebies but I do like to get credited after the effort. You could have put your name down under "Timing" as well.

Your timing is excellent. The stuff appeared and disappeared exactly at the right moment.

If you're thinking of doing more timing in the future, my 0.02c as a viewer:
1. Keep the non-intrusive, plain text.
2. Maybe jack the font size 1-2pt larger as it was a bit hard to read.
3. Split long scripts into two (although it's extra timing work!).
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Hey I have done something too!
Script
Have done it quickly, it need some fixes i think.
The video is still uploading.
Edit : Oops, didn't see Fox already did it xD.
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That was very enjoyable. Thank you guys for doing the subs!
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X10A_Freedom said:

If you're thinking of doing more timing in the future, my 0.02c as a viewer:
1. Keep the non-intrusive, plain text.
2. Maybe jack the font size 1-2pt larger as it was a bit hard to read.
3. Split long scripts into two (although it's extra timing work!).


1. I planned too.
2. I personally had no problem with the font size, but have no problems with making a bit bigger.
3. I thought about doing that... But then I was lazy, and thought naahhhhh :v


Kji said:
Hey I have done something too!
Script
Have done it quickly, it need some fixes i think.
The video is still uploading.
Edit : Oops, didn't see Fox already did it xD.



Yours is prettier :D
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Wow, you guys are awesome. I guess I will add Picture Drama to MAL's database.
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HalberdierRetsel said:
Tokyotosho, dude. Try that.

thanks :)
GrimaH said:
You're supposed to download the RAW, put it in the same folder as the .ass and play it (with Zoomplayer or MPC).

thanks, thought it was a video file of some sort ;)
freedoleen said:
Wow, you guys are awesome. I guess I will add Picture Drama to MAL's database.

Now if someone could just add this to our relations...
also should we add X10A_Freedom and Fox as the Fansubbing group?;)
what would u 2 like to be called?

edit: corrected myself
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Except it was X10A_Freedom not GrimaH who did this :v
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jacobpaige said:
Now if someone could just add this to our relations...
also should we add GimaH and Fox as the Fansubbing group?;)
what would u 2 like to be called?

What about MAL Fansubs? ^^
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Sounds rather plain. H3 (Hohe-Hahi-Hazukashii) Fansubs? =D
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Fox said:
Except it was X10A_Freedom not GrimaH who did this :v


Word.
I do chink translations, not moon.

I wouldn't mind making a subgroup, but I know nothing about anything to do with encoding/timing/moonspeak.
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With all this power it could be called CoNV (Citizens of Neo-Venezia) Fansubs.

("With all this power" is a saying where I'm from. It means "With all this effort", but in a more ironic way.)
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sorry, i get them mixed up for some reason.

why not just list it as [AFT] Aria Fanclub Translations? this way we can include dtshyk and GrimaH's translation of Aria extra episode.
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jacobpaige said:
why not just list it as [AFT] Aria Fanclub Translations? this way we can include dtshyk and GrimaH's translation of Aria extra episode.

I like this one. Not too long-winded, straight to the point, and the acronym works.
Not that I have a say in anything.
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Yeah, shut up you.

jacobpaige said:
why not just list it as [AFT] Aria Fanclub Translations? this way we can include dtshyk and GrimaH's translation of Aria extra episode.


I like this one. Not too long-winded, straight to the point, and the acronym works.
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Fox said:
Yeah, shut up you.

I like this one. Not too long-winded, straight to the point, and the acronym works.

:V
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Tortoise Fansubs have just released a .mkv version. I do hope they do the rest as well.
http://tortoise-fansubs.blogspot.com
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X10A_Freedom said:
Tortoise Fansubs have just released a .mkv version. I do hope they do the rest as well.
http://tortoise-fansubs.blogspot.com


Yeah, I noticed this on TT yesterday, I'm waiting for them to do more of the Drama CD they started.
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So BSS has done the second one as well. I hope they are doing the remaining ones.
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