they just bought fish and their on the way home(at the house of the intelligent looking guy) and will cook fish for dinner.... while their cleaning the fish the cheerful guy ask his buddy how to stop the fish from smelling and the intelligent looking but actually dumb guy said, Oh dat here u do it like this -cuts the nose of the fish off- and said there it cant smell anymore. and the cheerful guy said, I dunno about that! |
| ok first scene, theyre both walking down the street with groceries. Place their names above them as somewhat of an introduction. |
| yeah dat would be right... |
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| now we work on scene 2, start it story writer :D |
| the other guy would be seen like cleaning the fish and the other guy is watching tv.? wut do u think? |
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| remember what it has to transition to. but yea thats fine. next |
| you do the next one ill do the finale |
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| so the dumb friend walks up to the one cooking and asks how to make the fish stop smelling. The other has a kind of question look on his face and a knife in his hand. next |
| ok here goes.... the dumb guy show his friend the nose of the fish and cuts it and said there it cant smell anymore.-with a proud look on his face- and while the other guy is liked lol. |
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| we'll need to twick it alittle |
| yeah.. im not very good at doing these kind of things :p try it out :p |
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| how bout this, try to go more in-depth and visualize the situation, make the story happen. give it another try :P |
| lol ok then. the dumb guy was like ok. -cuts sumthing from the fish- and throws it to the garbage and his buddy ask wut is dat and he said "the nose".... as i thought it was still no good.... :p wutcha think? |
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| we'll work on it more tmwr, i tired lol |
| ok 3rd try :p the dumb guy den -cuts the nose of the fish- and gives it to his buddy and his buddy ask wut is it and he said its nose. his buddys expression was a bit dissapointed or sumwhat expecting his buddy's stupidity.. so? |
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| considering this is the last panel of it, it may work, tweak for the scene for faster explanation is, the guy has the knife where he cut the fish and the nose is being handed to the other guy. but yea its good enough :D, now we need it drawn |
| so who's gona do it? |
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| idk, hell we dont even have wat our second guy looks like :P |
| huh i did :p look at the design section :p |
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| ok but if theyre dumb, i dont think suits would be what they wear |
| lol they wer going to school wut can i do :pppp or maybe no coat? |
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| they are going to school so I guess coat would be fine :) |
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