| yeah so wut u want to replace it to? |
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| i just think we should wait on it till we get everything else down |
| ok :p ill post more wait leme think again |
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| oh here goes another one they're actually on the intelligent looking but dumb guy house and was about to eat cup ramen... the cheerful guy is askin for chopstick and the other guy said dat sorry i dont have chopsticks but i do got a bunch of forks.. the cheerful guy ask him if wut hes doin the past few days... and the guy said dat he was investing for sumthin... investin? the cheerful guy ask.. yeah... u know. the one at the town beside the ramen shop...said by the other guy and the cheerful guy said... oh u mean the lotery?.... and the other guy said yes and while eating the cheerful guy saw a mcdonald logo on the fork and ask his buddy... are u broke? and the intelligent looking guy said, I dunno about that :ppp |
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| that catch phrase isnt as effective theere |
| yeah ok den heres next.... the other cheerful guy is wandering as askin his classm8's about holy water.... and then his friend came(the looks intelligent but actually dumb guy) and ask him wutsup.. the cheerful guy ask him how to make holy water... he other guy sighed and said dont u watched movies...??? dont u see the reaction of monster when they touched it? wut are utalkin about the cheerful guy ask..... and the other guy said u boil the hell out of it to make a holy water dumb and the cheerful guy said... "I dunno about that" hey ill rest for a while :p its hard to think :ppp |
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| another good one :P |
| ok here goes another one the cheerful guy is beside the window watching the snow falling and thinking deeply. and then the loooks intelligent but actually dumb guy came and ask him hey watsup wat are u doin there he said.... and then the other guy said that, have u always wondered? and the intelligent looking but actually dumb guy said, wondered about what? the cheerful guy said, why is it dat rain is dropping and snow is falling? and the other guy said I dunno about that:p |
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| ok here goes another one again :p they just bought fish and their on the way home(at the house of the intelligent looking guy but actually dumb guy) and will cook fish for dinner.... while their cleaning the fish the cheerful guy ask his buddy how to stop the fish from smelling and the intelligent looking but actually dumb guy said, Oh dat here u do it like this -cuts the nose of the fish off- and said there it cant smell anymore. and the cheerful guy said, I dunno about that! :ppp |
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Moonlight_lover said: ok here goes another one the cheerful guy is beside the window watching the snow falling and thinking deeply. and then the loooks intelligent but actually dumb guy came and ask him hey watsup wat are u doin there he said.... and then the other guy said that, have u always wondered? and the intelligent looking but actually dumb guy said, wondered about what? the cheerful guy said, why is it dat rain is dropping and snow is falling? and the other guy said I dunno about that:p not funny :P |
Moonlight_lover said: really good, but the catchphrase sounds alittle off :Pok here goes another one again :p they just bought fish and their on the way home(at the house of the intelligent looking guy but actually dumb guy) and will cook fish for dinner.... while their cleaning the fish the cheerful guy ask his buddy how to stop the fish from smelling and the intelligent looking but actually dumb guy said, Oh dat here u do it like this -cuts the nose of the fish off- and said there it cant smell anymore. and the cheerful guy said, I dunno about that! :ppp |
| well we can always change dat :p |
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Systems said: Moonlight_lover said: ok here goes another one the cheerful guy is beside the window watching the snow falling and thinking deeply. and then the loooks intelligent but actually dumb guy came and ask him hey watsup wat are u doin there he said.... and then the other guy said that, have u always wondered? and the intelligent looking but actually dumb guy said, wondered about what? the cheerful guy said, why is it dat rain is dropping and snow is falling? and the other guy said I dunno about that:p not funny :P ok tnx for the comment :p i mean we hould be honest here right.... now ima make another one again think think think! |
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| criticism isnt effective if its not honest ;) be sure to critique my stuff too |
| heres another the cheerful guy ask his buddy to help him guard their house because sum1 is stealing their mails, and his buddy(the intelligent looking but actually dumb guy) said ok and den they started guarding the house... the intelligent looking but actually dumb guy was positioned at the garden and was waiting for sum1 to get close to the mailbox and the cheerful guy on the other hand is at his room... 5 minutes have passed and the cheerful guy said now! and the other guy rushes in to the mailbox but there was actually no people nor mail on the box... and then he asked his friend(the cheerful guy) on wuts his talkin about. because he saw no people nor mail.... and the cheerful guy said, but my computer said I got mail? and the other guy said I dunno about that and leave :p |
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Moonlight_lover said: heres another the cheerful guy ask his buddy to help him guard their house because sum1 is stealing their mails, and his buddy(the intelligent looking but actually dumb guy) said ok and den they started guarding the house... the intelligent looking but actually dumb guy was positioned at the garden and was waiting for sum1 to get close to the mailbox and the cheerful guy on the other hand is at his room... 5 minutes have passed and the cheerful guy said now! and the other guy rushes in to the mailbox but there was actually no people nor mail on the box... and then he asked his friend(the cheerful guy) on wuts his talkin about. because he saw no people nor mail.... and the cheerful guy said, but my computer said I got mail? and the other guy said I dunno about that and leave :p good |
| ok give me some time again its hard to think :p |
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| Don't forget the cute female touch on the history. xD |
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| u mean a heroine? or a girl? i was thinking of putting one after like 3 chapters and i already got a story for it :p my minds been doing crazy stuff since last night :p and ive been pump up for reading a lolicon pheonix so yeah! |
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| we arnt going deep into their past but random characters can make appearances |
| yeah i got one but iwont poil the whole story now :p ok heres the prolouge, the intelligent looking but actually dumb guy is gona have a match with his senpai like a tennis match :p because of the girl and it turns our to be a fail again. :p haha thinking about it makes me laugh so yeah dats it for now :p im starting to designs characters :p |
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| ok, post in character place when you get them, we can draw a few different ones then pick one |
| yeah ok wait its gona take a while so dont expect today :p and u too :p but 1st we need their characteristic or attitude so i can start my drawings... join us at the character section... |
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| blah i been dar, theres only three freaking threads |
| pretty much |
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