| If your gonna do the harry potter or teen revenge show vibes where the MC has shit backstory at least follow through with the revenge. In Harry Potter for example the uncle, aunt, cousin got messed up by Harry and stuff. Or in other 80's or teen films the bullies actually get their comeuppance. in this nothing bad happens to his horrible foster family who have probably been treating him like shit and stealing his parents money for years except they get a nice dinner. The "bullies" or other class mates they insinuate were making fun of him and the girl who may have been leading him on while liking another guy don't really have anything happen to them. All they saw was some people walk in and him leave. They didn't say anything about him getting into the school they wanted to get into or do the thing of her acting like she's with him to make the guys jealous. They saw a girl walk in, change his clothes, call him Ricardo and leave......if I was there I'd just go "dafaq was that.....meh" back to the party.........don't go half way on your revenge backstory is all I'm saying. Just give us full revenge payoff, have the foster parents upset they are no longer get any money from him and now have to live in debt and give back their fancy clothes. Have the asshole cousin find out the MC has actually been catfishing him the whole time. Have the douche classmates actually know he got into the college they wanted to goto and he's now going overseas to a fancy rich college, hell have that bully that took his girl try and get the redhead to reconsider him instead only to be turned down and the girl he was pinning for find out oh this guy actually doesn't love me and the guy I was kinda stringing along is outta here! Lol hey I know maybe this is a dumb thing to rant about but they set up this 45min backstory for kind of a let down. Nothing happened to his ahole foster family and the friends are just there going uuuh ok that happened. Give us shit that matter like a little more about the world or his parents or why him or anything than this watered down not another teen movie storyline. |
Collins89Apr 19, 2024 11:50 PM
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