-ShadowClaw- said: Huh boy oh boy am I in for a long journey the mountain is over the other side of the island and while this is an island it is the size of Alaska more or less so that is quite the distance. You as a writer know that this island is about the size of Alaska, but how did your MC figure that out? |
MetallumOperatur said: -ShadowClaw- said: Huh boy oh boy am I in for a long journey the mountain is over the other side of the island and while this is an island it is the size of Alaska more or less so that is quite the distance. You as a writer know that this island is about the size of Alaska, but how did your MC figure that out? if u read the first chapter u know i was a scout and so i could calculate the distance by mileage between landmarks and location and use it as a comparison on the map :D |
-ShadowClaw- said: if u read the first chapter u know i was a scout and so i could calculate the distance by mileage between landmarks and location and use it as a comparison on the map :D Well in that case, I'm impressed you know the area of Alaska by heart :P mileage = distance measured in miles Please don't give in to retarded units used by the imperial system and use metric instead. :P A Metric-supremacist |
MetallumOperaturJun 16, 2015 5:53 AM
| I am looking forward for the next episode, but still it wouldn't hurt if chapters were a little bit longer. While I certainly won't miss a scene involving tentacles, it starting to feel there are some bits and pieces missing though. |
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Malise said: I am looking forward for the next episode, but still it wouldn't hurt if chapters were a little bit longer. While I certainly won't miss a scene involving tentacles, it starting to feel there are some bits and pieces missing though. I had not much time this month...cause of exams....i actually managed to come up with something in between my time at least....the sex scene i would have actually made it if i was not pressed for time haha...don't worry il make it longer next time and a bit more spicy ;) |
| Chapter 13: The Forgotten Dead. AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHhh……The water here is just so refreshing. It has been ages since the last time I have been able to submerge myself and just swim freely, We are lucky to have found this small lake here…..Hey what’s wrong with you two? .. Does she really have to ask us that? Myself and Sewda are just flat on the ground on the water’s edge touching each other’s back and are just mopping around with an awful tired and gloomy attitude. I knew Hestrova was a nymphomaniac but my god when she is in the mood she really goes out. Oh god my skin is literally marked with holes from the suction cups and my muscles are all cramped from beign squished and beaten by her tendrils. Sewda had it even worse. Oh god u don’t even want to know what she made us do with each other especially with here extra-long tentacles …hhuhh.. …No….No more….Not down there….squil… Poor girl…she did not even have any experience. Not exactly the best scenario to be in for your first. You two really need to just relax…come join me…the water is refreshing…^^… I think I had more than enough of you for a while…I am just going to take a walk to get the feeling in between my legs back…huh… Please take me with you…I don’t want be alone with her again…T.T.. Sewda begged me in tears to take her with me…I don’t blame her with all that happened. Can u carry me?....It still hurts to move my body…. My body was barely holding on it’s own let alone I have to carry someone else with me..but sewda just looked at my face with her glowing eyes like a little sad puppy dog…Damn it why does the puppy eye thing always works. I managed to grab her around the waist and put her behind my back with her feather holding between my shoulders. It is a good thing she is very petite and light other wise I might have fallen back on the ground. Alright…There we go…you ok back there? .. This is wonderful..thank you very much my husby… Oh great that word again..i got to get that girl to understand that we are not married. I do not want to on a second honeymoon session experience. With that we walked off. Don’t sneak of for a little fun on your own….teheheh..;)… Hestrova waved us off and we went on our way….Well all things considered at least it is a very good day..the sun is shining brightly,, the water is is crystal blue shining and a gentle breeze is keeping us cool and the forest edge is provides a gentle shade…A very nice day indeed. Hey husby look at how the water is shining. It’s like a big sparking diamond…it is so beautiful and so romantic…don’t you think. Yeah I can see it being beautifull …but how is seeing a pool of water romantic?.... Thank I got a hit in the head with her foot and I ached in pain over my head and she stood down and with here arms crossed and her face was looking annoyed. Hey what was that for…. You ruined the moment….i don’t want to talk to you…hmm With that she just glanced at the other way and did not even look at me….what the hell did I do?...i tried to talk to her but she just kept giving me the silent treatment like an angry child who is mad at her parent for not giving her candy. It is kind of cute. Hmm….oh I know this trick always calmed my niece when she was mad. Alright than don’t speak to me….i guess I have to keep this little gift for myself ..totototo… Sewda looked back at me with a curios look in her eye….Bingo it always get their attention…I kept this in hand before we left the town….i thought I would give it to her back at the right moment I guess this is perfect. What do you have there…if I may ask… Ah that got her talking…with that I reached into my pocket and held out the sea shell pastor necklace…the very same she stole from hes ..i managed to get it back …without either two finding out. With that i put it around her neck and made sure to lock it properly so as not slip off. Sewda looked rather surprised and a bit shocked at my gesture. Isn’t this?.. Yep it is the same shell u stole from Hestrova and started the events of meeting you and then all of this…I managed to get it back without Hestrova knowing..i figured u might like to keep it as a memento… She looked amazed and happy with it…a big smile in her face and her eyes were shedding a tear..if it wasn’t for the smile I would think she was sad but those are surely tears of joy. She came toward me and gave me a kiss on my forehead. All happy and dandy. …A small thank you. This is really a very nice gift…Thank you …^^… You are welcome dear…and u got to not cry every time I do something for you. It does not suit you your cute little face…. Oh god Hestrova is going to kill me when she finds out. Sewda looked amazed at what I said. I think she was got even more bashful and embarrassed. …You…You…You. Called me cute….hehehe….oh my , HE CALLED ME CUTE….Yahhhoooooooo… With that she ran and screamed with joy and boy did she run…I had to go full speed just to catch up with her….she ran and ran..until suddenly she fell and disappeared into the ground. …What the Hell…HEY …HEY SEWDA…where are…YYYYYYYOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUU……. All of sudden I found falling down a hole that was hidden by the tall grass and down I went deep into the earth and than I hit the ground hard….with a lot of dust and dirt covering me… Hey…Hey…Gastvo….you ok …:O… I pulled myself together….Damn that was long drop. Looks Sewda and I fell down from the same hole….but wow is it dark and large…we must have stumble on a hidden system of underground caverns… Yeah Yeah I am fine …are you ok.. Yeah I am ok…but it is dark here…I can’t see anything. Good thing I had a few matches left from where I came from…I lit it up to see where we are and boy oh boy I wish I had not. The first thing that appeared was this huge underground opening…and within this opening was a large masses of what looked like tombstones piled up in large hordes in thousands and thousands of numbers. A lot of them broken and flat. Forming large piles that looked like miniature hills topping one another. Needsly to say I was creeped the hell out. AHHHHHHHHH….Husby I am scared ….hold me…. SHH…SHH…it’s ok…it’s fine they are just piles of stone…don’t panic… Hell even I was panicking but that is the last thing she wanted to hear so itried to act out cool. The matched nearly burned out but I found a piece of what looked like an old wood lantern and I managed to lighten up before the match burned out. Sewda and I walked a bit forward and straight into the opening. I took a closer look and I was right they are tombstone all of them with different names but strange thing…they all had the same date….Year 234…Day 57 of the Fransor year….that is not any date system I am aware of…not even the one they use here…and judging by the decay of the rock…I would say this has been here for thousands of years….but…..if all these graves belong to the dead…what could cause all these deaths on the same date. who could have made all of these too? Sewda was getting agitated and scared out of her whim. .she just kept holding on me tightly and shaking like a leaf. Please …let’s get out of here….i don’t like it here….let’s go back where we came… Yeah yeah…let’s get back to Hestrova….cmon We were heading back out when suddenly we started to hear a voice in the air. …IS…IT…Someone…NEW?... …IS…IT...Someone ..Fresh?... A creepy voice was echoing around us and we could here what seemed like slithering and rock shacking and sewda and i just hurried up to get up back on the hole out of there quickly…. Sewda…hurry…move…out and don’t look back….Climb ….Climb.. I am scared…. I am right behind you just climb… Sewda and I just climbed and climbed back to the surface….as the voice was starting to get louder and the earth starting to shaking more violently. They….Are ….Here….. . I …am….Here… Sewda managed to reach the surface first….and I pushed her out in order to ger herself out of here fast…I managed to get myself halfway out when suddenly something grabbed my leg…..and I was being dragged back down… …..NOOOOOOOO………HOLD ….ON….>.<….. Sewda tried to hold on to me but I was still being dragged back down and Sewda was being dragged along with me…..i can’t let her get caught along with me. So I let go of her hand before she got dragged with me and I slipped back down the hole and than the rock collapsed all around me…the last thing I remember was pitch darkness and suffocation before I passed out. |
| Well...probably no tentacles, but this could go anywhere at this point =) |
| Darn those cliffhangers :P |
| Chapter 14: The Undead Queen All things seemed to be covered in everlasting Darkness, not a whisper to be heard or a drop of water dripping against the cold floor or even the spec of a tiny little dust mite that reflects the tiniest of light. Just pure Blackness colour. I did not even know if my own eyes where shut or open, was I even dreaming or was this reality? The only thing I knew was this pitch black nothingness surrounding me from all sides and shivering cold almost like pure ice bathing me all around from head to tail of my very skin. Than it came, a small hallowing echo of a faint voice, calling out from the darkness, the words were not understandable nor traceable all. I knew it was getting closer and closer and the sound getting louder and louder, as the more it felt coming towards me. The more it seemed to get closer the more my chills intensify I think I could even the heaviness of my breath freezing in the abyss and the very core of my soul that feels as if it is being violated and pierced trough by a relentless presence and I can do nothing but hold still and await for the inevitable end. As these thoughts came into my mind, , the constant questions that kept coming up were,,,Where am i? and why was I here and why do I feel like at I am deaths doorstep. What I did not realise at the time was that I was actually unconscious and in the mercy of some sort of Undead spell caster who was using me in some for some sort of spell ritual. I Who is the overseer of the dead and forgotten. I who is the bringer of life that was once gone. I summon the power of the abyss to help your undead children. To Use this man’s soul as a sacrifice. To bring my fallen people of Segrovania back. Grant me the power to take control. As I kestra the Lich is capable to do this destined task. The entire Cavern lit up with a bright light….As bright as a thousand suns. Lightning came shooting down from left to right exploding bits and pieces of rock all over and the earth shook in a mighty wrath as the cracks within the earth formed and holes as deep as an endless as the void formed from the crack which formed. My soul almost completely covered by the abyss and as the feeling of my consciousness seem to drift away. The aura of the spell caster split up into several pieces, each a direct shot on each of the marked graves and at just went into near completion. A huge explosion high above the cavern wall appeared and large pile of rubble and dirt came rumbling and pouring down and interrupted the Lich’s spell casting causing her to take cover and my body was left alone and I could feel my life force coming back to me and the darkness was brightening up to see this white light as bright as a diamond. It was the sunlight from the above ground and that is when I saw her, what was it? An Angel? Have I died and gone to heaven?.....But…do angels have 8 arms? It was then I realised …no I was not dead yet…The Angel figure is none other than Hestrova with Sewda behind her back who was carrying her from her talons and flapping her wings hard to keep both of them in flight. Nobody steals my little Toy if I have anything to…. Hestrova …. We cockatrice’s are not supposed to ….FLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Boom both of them came down crashing like a sack of potatoes and full on hard on the rubble. Luckily Hestrova has no bone structure otherwise that would have hurt. Sewda was lucky was luck to land on top of her as a cushion. The Lich on the other hand was not in such a cheerful mood, her face was showing in full anger and this dark and creepy blackish aura was coming out of her back and staff. Her mouth growling like a mad rapid dog and dark reddish flames pouring out of her hand. Do You have any Idea what u have Done …u miserable excuse of a cephalopod……U ruined my resurrection spell…killing, reviving and killing you 10,000 times won’t be enough of you. Hestrova was completely ignoring her threats and proceeded towards me and lift me back on my feet and brushed the dirt of my face with her soft hands. How do u feel my Little Gatty? ^.^ Drained …So very drained…Ahh…Crash. >o< Wait…O.O I stumbled back on my knees and nearly feel back on the floor if Sewda did not quickly catch me. Oh …What did that person do to you… :( Sewda take care of darling for me for a little while .. I will have a little chat with our compatriot. Hestrova left my care with Sewda while she went toward the other girl. She took a few paces forward and stoped about a few meters from her and gazed her for a quick moment to see what she was up against. So judging by your attire you are a master of the undead spell arts…I Lich if I believe so. The Lich was annoyed by that remark and was not fond of the tone Hestrova was speaking to her with and she yelled out with an angry response. You Skank…I am not just any Lich, I am Kestra…The Lich Queen of the city of Segrovania and you will pay for interrupting my resurrection ritual. Pfft….you are such a drama queen with that tone, like a spoiled child you just got her playtime interrupted. Let me tell you missy…no one steals and plays with my toys and gets to live….Even the undead can stay dead. The two were now both feeling enraged and the whole cavern started to shake again and both there auras started to increase and synchronise with each other like a single interval…They had such powerful wave front coming from them it still gives me chills when I think about it. A child am i....Well than how about if bring out my playmates to join in on the fun... The dirt beneath the graves started to move and shake and then out of the earth large bursts of bones in large piles came sprouting out of the graves and connecting with each other to form many undead corpses of fallen monsters and before we knew it we were surrounded by all fronts with a skeleton army of many undead creatures. HAHAHA…So miss Squid…can your magic defeat both me and my skeleton army….HaHa. We will see who the one who truly dies is. Meanwhile at the top of the cavern hole in a distance a small figure was watching the whole thing from afar with her small spyglass and waiting to see the outcome of the whole thing. Hehe I told that rude boy he and his companions will face many trials on this merry road…let’s see if they can face of this first one …hehehe. The End. |
-ShadowClaw-Jul 27, 2015 2:23 AM
| From cliffhanger to cliffhanger :P A remark: don't know if it's intended, but I noticed several words that were capitalized mid-sentence that need not be capitalized. |
MetallumOperatur said: From cliffhanger to cliffhanger :P A remark: don't know if it's intended, but I noticed several words that were capitalized mid-sentence that need not be capitalized. oh that was intended...mostly to keep focus on certain specfics...as sometime get lost in the reading mid sentence..so they have a reference where to go back to if they get lost. |
| Chapter 15:The Struggle Deep within the earth, far below where none of the sun’s light reaches and layer upon layer of rock and dirt, lies the ruins of a once vast and prosperous city, that city was Segrovania. A once prosperous town where all undead monsters could once call home, all smiles and no trouble, each individual leaved in peace with their fellow neighbor and no trouble was to be found. Under the care of the cities ruler Queen Kestra who everyone worshiped and loved times were good very good, until the dark times came. A plague of everlasting darkness fell upon the city when it was discovered by the people of a past human kingdom, relentless of their pursuit of pure human dominance they struck down hard showing no mercy, large scale purges bent of complete eradication no women or child was even spared and in the midst of all falling into ruin, The Queen in deep despair and anger of her subject suffering sacrificed her position to seek out the black chronicle. A very powerful but evil book that contained the most vile of black magic and with it purged the human nation that destroyed her kingdom but at the cost of burying all of it deep with depths of the earth with it. All alone and filled with nothing but hate for all kind, she waited for centuries waiting for the chance to strike back on the world that condemned her to this life of despair and anger and that is the truth of her remaining existence. What is know the present time, a foolish young man on a journey to a distant land has now caught himself in the middle of a desperate situation and his companions have unfortunately got themselves caught up with it. The Lich Queen Kestra and the Sea Witch Hestrova and the young Cockatrice Sewda are now locked in a battle of wits and survival, In order for her plans of conquest to bear fruit she must need the man to sacrifice his soul but the young man’s Companions will never allow it and so the time has come to see who will emerge victorious. You will not postpone my final judgement….My people will rise again and all of this land shall be painted with blood and flesh. Let’s see if u can handle this. With an incantation from her chronicle the ground started to shake and large holes started to form and within them skeletal and fleshless corpses stood up and formed a line in centre of the lich. About 15 in total waiting for their master’s order. The Sea Witch Hestrova performed her own incantation and large pile of mud and water formed and mixed together and shaped a thick wide wall between herself and the injured man and the cockatrice girl. Sewda….Remain with him until this is over and keep yourselves out of my hair until this is over, understood? Sewda understood perfectly and remained behind the wall to cater to the man’s injuries, While Hestrova performed another incantation and long staff came out of the blue and into her hands, it was a long stick with a red gem that looked fractured and unpolished that radiated a small bright shade of crimson red and the stick was brown and distorted with several minor cracks all over, as if it has been wear down by years of abuse. Don’t take me so lightly girl, I am a bitch to anyone I meet but I am complete sadist to anyone who pisses me off and you have already pushed me by hurting my precious toy, so c’mon make your first move. As if to provoke an air of hostility the witch spoke these words directly to the lich who was not all amused by her sheer cockiness and with that she ordered her first command to the skeletal dead. All of you ..surround and tear that creature to pieces…rip her flesh from her bones and bring me back that human meat bag to me …but bring him back alive….GGOOOOOOO. With that all skeletal undead charged straight directly at Hestrova all hell on bent to carry out their master’s order. The two in front jumped straight into the air in front of her and got ready to pounce but Hestrova grabbed one of the nearby stalagmites with her tendrils and dodge the attack and landed on the side of the runners. Five more immediately turned and tried to gang up on her again but this time she swung the staff and hit one of the skeletal undead skulls and crushed it into pieces, than another swing fully back turned behind she struck another undead and crushed his chest cavity to mere pieces. Now there were still three around her and standing right at the centre she pulled her staff high above her head and then struck it down fully hard horizontal into the ground and let another incantation and then the red gem’s light grew brighter and a bright red aura almost like a dragon’s fire came of it and hit the three skeletal undead and burned them to a cinder, not even a piece of white bone was left of them. The other 10 skeletal were quickly breaking and punching the mud wall that she formed earlier in order to reach for the injuries man inside. In the background Kestra was hovering slightly in the air, reading out of her chronicle and just as Hestrova was looking to take advantage of her distraction sudden arms of shadow formed around her and constricted her movement. This was what kestra wanted to do. While Hestrova was distracted with defending herself and the others from the undead, she used that distraction to form another enchantment to restrain her opponent’s movement so she can capture the man inside. You got careless…and left yourself open….now watch as my subjects provide me with the resource I require. Hestrova could not let her anger cloud her judgement, she needed to figure a way out of this situation. She remembered something from her studies, a shadow spell needs a sort of minimum light to form, get rid of the light and the shadow will be gone, so she started to convulse herself to let out some of her black ink. Which has the ability to blind it’s surroundings with dark light, she regurgitated a large chunk out of her and for a split second everything around her went dark. When the minimum light that was present came back she was free and ran towards the bunch that by now have broken half way through the wall. With a sheer force combination of her magic and tendrils she crushed all the remaining skeleton undead into nothing more than broken piles of bones. She let out a proud smirk towards the lich for her triumph but the lich was not amused by her opponents mockery, it was than she turned her pages towards the last few chapters and with a more powerful force coming out of the pages, she spoke out the words of her new enchantment and her aura started to rise in power and all of the surrounding sook violently back and forth. This was the summoning of one of her most powerful enchantment large clumps of bone and rock started to come together being pulled by the negative energy emitted from the black chronicle and together formed a large Snake like beast over 30 meters in length and height of about 10 meters. A Skeletal snake and powerful one at that. This was not looking good, Hestrova pulled all of her magic force into her staff and formed a large bluish ball made of lightning and blue glow and threw at the beast but the negative energy feeding it formed around it and shield the beast from harm with a large growl the snake quickly let out a strike with it’s tail like a speeding shot from an arrow so fast that Hestrova was unable to dodge it and was thrown into the wall that she formed and it came broken down hard as a block of Lego’s. As soon as the dust cleared off. it was seen the wall was broken the girl who fought so hard was now buried under a pile of rock and dirt with half of her body just appearing out of it face down and no movement. The cockatrice girl who was inside protected herself and the man with her feathers which were hardened like steel plates, but as soon as she saw the situation it was clear, Hestrova was out of the game, the man was barely breathing and still unconscious, it was now just her and the Lich. HaHaHa….that foolish girl thought she could stand against my power…I must admit for a moment there I thought she had the better of me…but it looks like fortune still favours me. She spoke as she slowly came towards her and the man she was holding in her arms, what is she to do, if Hestrova was unable to beat her, how could she? She was weak, and felt useless in that situation and was scared of her life. But she still needed to try to protect those who came to help her and even if it would lead death she was not going to abandon them. She got her composure and stood face to face with the lich and her summoned monster. She got into position and charged full speed towards directly at her but then the skeletal snake grabbed her and halted her movement and quickly constricted the girl until she could barely breathe. Kestra just laughed amusingly at the poor creatute’s attempt to stop her and grabbed her cheeks with her hand and directed towards her eyes. Quite a little cute performance u performed..i admire your spunk…but this is getting tiresome. The ritual will be complete and my people will rise again and tear your world to shambles. Sewda struggled hard to try to get loose but could not, the monster was to strong to free herself and with an angered tone she spoke directly at her. …I…won’t Ha ..What was that child? I …won’t let you hurt them …..NEEEEEVVVVVVVERRRRRRRRRRR…. All of a sudden her Crimson eyes got blood spotted and lit a bright light that stunned both the snake monster and the lich queen and both screamed in agony. AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH>>>>>>>>>> …..Why u little….i….Ha….WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING TO ME. The Lich Queen started to stiff up and her movements stalling…her body was stiffing up and hardening like a rock…pieces of her flesh and garb was turning grey…hardening like a statue. The snake was starting to crumble as well all of the negative energy that held it together was spilling out and the beast crumbling into pieces until nothing was left but dust and sand. …GRRR>>>> petrifying magic…Damn it all…this girl has that kind of power….I have to hurry up..or I will be……as she reached for her chronicle….she let out one final enchantment and soon vanished in a flash. Sewda’s who was momentary blacked out from what had happened got her composure back and when she came too..the Lich was gone and her two companions were all near death. She could not let the two of them die. She grabbed both of them and dragged them back out of the opening they came in. She managed with all of her might to bring them back out into the surface. It nearing night-time by the time she came out, her strength was also fading….if she could not get help soon. She knew they could all die. But she did not know of any help that could be found nearby and with her two companions by her side she too collapsed and her conciseness started to fade….was this it…are all of them doomed to die here?. Those were the last two thoughts she had before succumbing to exhaustion and after that it was a complete blank. The End |
-ShadowClaw-Oct 17, 2015 2:26 PM
-ShadowClaw- said: ...past human kingdom, relentless of their pursuit of pure human dominance they struck down hard showing no mercy... I wonder how many of those we will get. Yeah, it's the history, possibly thousands of years ago, but if they were indeed so common I think that my idea of the world lore where majority of the world beyond the island has been destroyed in apocalyptic conflict would quite fitting in the general direction would like to follow. |
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beast_regards said: -ShadowClaw- said: ...past human kingdom, relentless of their pursuit of pure human dominance they struck down hard showing no mercy... I wonder how many of those we will get. Yeah, it's the history, possibly thousands of years ago, but if they were indeed so common I think that my idea of the world lore where majority of the world beyond the island has been destroyed in apocalyptic conflict would quite fitting in the general direction would like to follow. What do u mean by that? so you are saying that this world was destroyed by a devastating war with monsters and humans...that left only this island left habitable is that what you are saying? |
| I think your writing did improved considerably with the more focus you put into describing and setting the scene, compared with dialogue focused early chapters of your story. |
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-ShadowClaw- said: What do u mean by that? so you are saying that this world was destroyed by a devastating war with monsters and humans...that left only this island left habitable is that what you are saying? Island past and all the events surrounding it hasn't been decided yet. GM discussion on the matter is still pending. I suggested that war would explain a lot considering similar hints along the other stories, others didn't agreed with me. I hope this is clear now :-) |
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| I like it that it's the Cockatrice who gets you out of there; that should knock some humility in the Kraken. Perhaps a certain Cockatrice might even return the favour and tie up the Kraken during sexy time for a change ;-) Interesting choice for a narrator POV, perhaps from that Living Doll... what was her name again? I had expected either a POV from Hestrova or Sewda. -ShadowClaw- said: To me it seems it's Hestrova saying this rather then the Lich Queen. And are you sure you mean masochist and not sadist, because Hestrova doesn't seem that masochistic to me?Don’t take me so lightly girl, I am a bitch to anyone I meet but I am complete masochist to anyone who pisses me off and you have already pushed me by hurting my precious toy, so c’mon make your first move. P.S. Lich Queen? C'mon, you force me to post this :-P |
MetallumOperaturOct 16, 2015 2:59 PM
MetallumOperatur said: I like it that it's the Cockatrice who gets you out of there, that should knock some humility in the Kraken. Perhaps a certain Cockatrice might even return the favour and tie up the Kraken during sexy time for a change ;-) Interesting choice for a narrator POV, perhaps from that Living Doll... what was her name again? I had expected either a POV from Hestrova or Sewda. -ShadowClaw- said: To me it seems it's Hestrova saying this rather then the Lich Queen. And you sure you mean masochist there and not sadist?Don’t take me so lightly girl, I am a bitch to anyone I meet but I am complete masochist to anyone who pisses me off and you have already pushed me by hurting my precious toy, so c’mon make your first move. P.S. Lich Queen? C'mon, you force me to post this :-P Damn you are right...it was suppose to be Hestrova...i fixed it, Dude that picture is epic as hell XD |
-ShadowClaw- said: Dude that picture is epic as hell XD You're welcome :-P P.S. Was still editing to clarify my question, so I repeat it here just in case you missed it: And are you sure you mean masochist and not sadist? Because Hestrova doesn't seem that masochistic to me. |
| Chapter 16:A Healing Hand Deep within an unknown forest, a strange wagon is found here, which is strange as there are no nearby towns or any other civilization in sight, however this was no mere wagon. It was the one that belong to travelling merchant Lady Denpa, she has just set up a base to settle down after the day’s sunlight has dwindled, a fire was already set up and lit the forest area like a candle light. While on normal occasions she would be alone, usually just reading a good book before retiring on this particular day it was different. Three other people were with her this time all of them covered in bandages and bruises, the first was a young man in his early 20’s who had the least amount of injuries among the three with a few bandages on his head and on his left arm and slight bruising on the skin. The other was a young cockatrice bird who had more injuries than the first including what looked like a blood stains all over her feathers, her left banded and several large cuts that range from the front and back all the way down to her feet, the last one was the worst off. A kraken girl who was not even conciuse on a make shift bed her injuries were the worst with several of her limbs torn and larger bruises and cuts all over her body and her color even more pale than it normally would be as it shows that she has lost a lot of blood and become pale as a result. These are the same people who days ago fought off and barely survived the encounter with the elder lich in the underground caverns, after that ordeal Lady Denpa found them all in a weakened state and would have been surely dead if they were left alone. Luckily the merchant is well versed in the magic arts as well as medical techniques and using a combination of the two has slowly managed to recuperate them but it has not been an easy task, especially for the kraken girl. As the kraken was still lying asleep in the makeshift bed, the other three sit up around the fire for warmth and started to discuss the situation that was in hand. I never would have thought we would meet again so soon my little trouble maker certainly not in this sort of predicament u have found yourself upon. While turning the small pot that was hanging above the fire which is cooking the groups evening meal, Lady Denpa was the first to start of the conversation, the young man who also had his companion on his lap also joined in on the conversation and started to speak. Is there any improvement in Hestrova’s condition?....will she ever wake up? Rather than speaking about their previous encounter, Gatmarant immediately asked of his companion’s condition. The mistress took a moment’s glance at the sleeping girl and turned back towards the man who asked the question with her eyes looking straight to his like they were fixed and frozen in place. Hard to say… her physical injuries will be completely healed with my skills for sure…but as for her mental mind…it is tough to say. What do u mean? What is wrong with her mind? The cockatrice girl now joined in on the conversation who was worried of her friend’s condition and was looking all sad and gloom. She asked what is happening to her to the lady in front of her. Tough to say…..she must have put a lot of strain on her mental capacity when she used her magic against her opponent…she must have been giving all of her all to succeed…my best guess she overused the amount of magic she is capable off and as a result her mental capacity is left in a weakened state. The two people in front of her than looked at each other in a synchronised resonance….both of them look like they were feeling guilty for what has happened. The young man than put his hand on the young girl’s head and slowly patted her head. Don’t bear any guild dear…this was my fault and no one else’s…. He really did think it was his fault…the lich was after his soul and no one else’s and if he did not let himself get captured those two would not have needed to come and save him and result in them with them being so heavily injured and leave Hestrova on such a state. As she watched his guilt that was reflected in his voice and the look in his eyes. The little lady stood up to close the lid on the pot and started to pour in the soup brought on three wooden bowls each with a small wooden spoon. The soup was just mostly tiny bits of vegetables that were collected and cooked from the nearby area and it was not particular tasty as it was mostly just cooked bits with water hot water but they did not care much of how the meal was done, just grateful they had something in there mouths. After the meal was done and the fire was dying out…Sewda the little cockatrice bird fell into slumber on the ground she was sitting on. The young man than lifted her up and properly placed her on her own make shift next to Hetrova’s and tucked her in with the small blanked he had on his hand. The mistress meanwhile was placing a bit more firewood to give the fire more life and as she did the man slowly walked back up to her. Although now the atmosphere around them seemed to all of a sudden change…as if an air of suspicion was starting to come out of nowhere. Hehe….Now what is with that suspicious look on your eye…..you seemed quite different when you were with your companion….something u need to say brat? Now the ladies voice and attitude changed…it was more provocative and aggressive…like that who felt more superior to any of her peers and looks down on others who are not in her level. This was her reflection of her true self….one she would normally hide in order to have a more positive attitude for her business transactions but since these two known of each other’s true self she no longer has to hide it. I had to pretend to be grateful for Sewda’s sake as well as Hestrova but I am no fool….There is no such thing as a sheer chance of random encounter…you knew the situation we were in …didn’t you? The little women put her hands in a cross position and shrugged her shoulders against the man’s accusation as if not taking it by hard. The Guy was not taking the girl’s attitude in good confidence. I did warn you that every step in your journey would have a significant purpose for each and every one of you…. I would admit that I had been observing your fight but by the time u got caught within it all I could have do was watch…for two specific reasons actually. The man was thinking what sort of excuses she would make that would justify her actions all he was thinking there was nothing that could justify it…however a part of him was also thinking despite this girl’s appearance she does have wisdom and power as he witnessed it before so at the very least he will give her the benefit of the doubt. The first reason was that when your companions engaged that Lich she had put a very powerful and effective magic barrier, one that would have caused an instant implosion magic that would have wiped out every living being within it if anybody interfered it…I could guess that such extreme action she took was the fact since she was an undead she would still be able to revive herself even in she were in pieces while her enemies would be dead an instant insurance you might call it…crude but effective… The man than gasped at what he heard….he never realised how bad in a position they were in and also how lucky he was that they came out alive at all but as he contemplated these thoughts, the girl shook her head at him and continued speaking. The second reason and even more important than the first…it was a perfect situation for that girl to activate her gift… The guy got stuck at that moment…he did not understand the meaning of her saying activating that girl’s gift. Gift? …what Gift? As she was about to answer a yawning sound came out of nowhere and right were the sleeping matts were it was Sewda half awake, rubbing her eye’s gently with her feather hand…and looked directly at the two conversing... Husband?..... I can’t sleep well…..Can u sleep next to me, I am feeling a bit chilly…YYYYAAAWWWNNN… Alright that is enough talking for one night…..we can continue our discussion tomorrow…your Kraken girlfriend she be awake by than…also we can start talking about yout compensation for both services I have provided…Good night brat…:P ehh?....Hey Wait a minute Denpa….I.. Before he had time to finish she hoped back into the wagon and turned off her lamp….As fi she would sleep that fast as he thought to himself. It occurred to him,…he still in debt for the service she provided him when they first met…but now he owes this little smart mouth for helping them with the aid, food and health care…. He just slapped his hand on his head and just gave up on everything. Oh..Crap..Can I get a fking break please … As he said to whatever gods were hearing Sewda still just sat there half asleep waiting under the covers for him to come. Well he thought to himself might as well as get some sleep…because at this point he has gotten used to rotten luck coming in his way nearly all the time. So worrying about it at this stage was doing nothing but giving him a headache so he just grabbed the mat, put it on the floor next to Sewda’s and shut his eyes with Sewda coming out of her covers and under his, snuggling him like a teddy bear. He just let her bee as he got used to it at this point, also he took one last glimpse as Hestrova who still lead unconscious and slowly closed his eyes and took a much needed rest. |
-ShadowClaw-Nov 25, 2015 2:12 PM
| What's with all the guys here racking up crippling debts? Ya all know it's: Fuck bitches get money right? And not Get fucked by bitches pay interest get even more fucked by bitches. :-P |
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